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 Posted: Mon Feb 21, 2011 6:58 pm
Hey, My Poets & Songwriters! We'd love to read some of your work. You can place some of your short exerts or some freestyle rhymes if u like.
We'll rate em & comment on them. smile
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Posted: Mon Feb 21, 2011 7:04 pm
You said you'd be there through it all
Instead you just let me fall
What happened to forever?
What happened to our future?
Why do you break all of these promises?
Why do you break my heart?
From Broken Promises and a Broken Heart
By: Sweet Silent Death and my best friend
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Posted: Mon Feb 21, 2011 7:35 pm
A small snow bunny appears and lays a gift at your feet an attached note reads:
The time that we have had was more fleeting than most
From one to another you did your best to host
In a small way
I'd still like to say
That I found you so charming
But you last words were alarming
So much that to bring my worst fears
As I burst into tears
And I wanted to run away
When I kept getting pulled to stay
For a love that will not be
This is the last smile I let you see
From
Melting Snow Bunny
A small snow bunny lays a gift at your feet.
An attached note reads:
It may not be much dear friend
Just something at my own end
A token a thought
about what could have been brought
As feeble as it may be
To try and give a love to thee
I must hurry and make haste
And fight the warming waste
I'm running out if time you see
There not much left for me
This simple roses
Which may bring a blush to our noses
Are given in vain
While I endure my own pain
By the
Melting Snow Bunny
A small snow bunny appear in front of you with a note:
I haven't much time to talk my dear
For time is running out fear
For every time a smile I see
My heart melt a little more you see
The more it melts the less I'll be
So now I act so desperately
If you smile now I have to fear
That from this world I'll disappear
Despite it all I leave these flowers
With you a part of my final hours
Alas it seem you're too sunny
For....
The.....
Melting Snow Bunny
A small snow bunny lays a gift at your feet.
An attached note reads:
As much as my heart belongs to no one.
There's a reason it can't be so.
It's been cut apart for so long
It becoming a challenge to sew
I'd have given it to you you see
But I fear you'd chip it some more for me
So I leave this as a token of the past
For a time that will stay forever in the past.
I've come and gone so skillfully
You didn't even see me melt so beautifully.
The truth you see....
I'm the.....
Melting Snow Bunny
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Posted: Mon Feb 21, 2011 8:33 pm
"I Have Seen It" The soft beating of a little heart I have touched The soft skin as tiny fingers try to grasp my face Those tiny hands exploring Curious about the world and who they may become in it I have heard it The cries of a child being abandoned For that child's screams speak from my own lips Not just high pitched yells, but another language all its own Saying "Please don't leave me" I was that child, I am that child I hear those screams again, but this time not from my own mouth As I shut the door on another innocent child lost to this world I'm just like her who left me Another one not yet ready for motherhood We're all still crying "Save me" And the cycle starts again (Comments? This is new so I'd like some opinions on it ^.^)
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Posted: Mon Feb 21, 2011 8:42 pm
Made Up this freestyle in about 4 minutes. hehe.
The world is dry.
I think it's so bleak.
i hate it so much.
it's worse than a leech.
The world is meaningless.
What am I here for?
I'm here to waste time.
i shouldn't live any more.
Take the pain away.
I shouldn't live another day.
And you shouldn't as well.
Cause we'll all end up in hell.
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Posted: Mon Feb 21, 2011 9:19 pm
Free verse
The zombies are coming to take you away
They’ll drag your body across the floor
They’ll tare off your limbs if you fight back
The zombies are coming to eat your brain
They’ll eat your organs as the mane coarse
Drink your blood on the side
So run before they come
Hide some were safe and sound
The zombies are coming
Lyric
Where you wanna be your love loves you
Where you wanna be the sky is always blue
Where you wanna be the sun shines bright
Where you wanna be every night is a good night
Where you are the sky is always grey
Where you are there is never a sunny day
Where no one loves you
Where you are saddens you
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Posted: Tue Feb 22, 2011 9:53 am
From: Mother, Mother
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Mother, mother
Your good intentions go astray
You know they tell me
I'll understand one day
But you'll never realize
Just what you say
Your words like knives
And you expect me to stay
Mother, mother
You'll never see
The things you've said
What they do to me
I cannot tell you
The toll, the fee!
You charge my heart
When you speak to me
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Posted: Tue Feb 22, 2011 10:04 am
BreakingCharity "I Have Seen It" The soft beating of a little heart I have touched The soft skin as tiny fingers try to grasp my face Those tiny hands exploring Curious about the world and who they may become in it I have heard it The cries of a child being abandoned For that child's screams speak from my own lips Not just high pitched yells, but another language all its own Saying "Please don't leave me" I was that child, I am that child I hear those screams again, but this time not from my own mouth As I shut the door on another innocent child lost to this world I'm just like her who left me Another one not yet ready for motherhood We're all still crying "Save me" And the cycle starts again (Comments? This is new so I'd like some opinions on it ^.^) I like this one.. It kind of caught my eye. o:
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Posted: Tue Feb 22, 2011 10:30 am
Caged Lark of London
Watch the beautiful lark sing,
and behold her enchanting voice.
See how the light caresses
the ivory velvet of her skin.
Watch as she flits across midnight meadows,
and listen for her wings to open.
Soar high above with her,
as she wears the moon around her neck.
Scream for the beautiful lark,
as the cage ensares her.
Weep as those sweeping wings are crushed,
beneath lengthening bars of sorrow.
Stay beneath her windowsill,
and beg for the silent lark
to bless you with her enchanting voice.
The silence is tortured,
as the lark wills herself to be free...
...I clutch these bars of glass,
and watch the finches sing.
The stars tempt my wings to grow,
but they are useless now.
I am the caged lark of London,
who's father spills blood for her voice.
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I wrote this, the first time in a while, for my amusement. It is inspired by Sweeney Todd, but I think there is something more to it that I have yet to discover.
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Posted: Tue Feb 22, 2011 10:39 am
Sorry, had a posting error, this is what I MEANT to put, lol LostDandelion From: Mother, Mother
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Mother, mother
Your good intentions go astray
------------------------ I rather liked this one, simple but well done. I'll post the first poem I ever performed competitively. This was written a few years ago, I don't have any electronic copies handy, so I'll do it from memory, like to memorize my slam pieces smile Rhinocerous: My muscles are Steel cables that Wreck homes and bruise nations, my Feet plod over Human cities I am the bane of small countries I belch smoke into Clear air, I am Machine God, razes fortifications, I Rend steel and I maul flesh I burn diesel And sneeze hellfire I am force in steel, I Do not die, I Do not fear, I quake the ground, I breed destruction, a juggernaut, goliath, leviathan, monument to human fools for building me so Strong Do not cross me, you cannot stop me, I go where I will, pray that you never see me I can see in the dark, and roll over savannah Primordial Rhinocerous Bred into machinery You fear me still, And make effigies in my name
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Posted: Tue Feb 22, 2011 10:51 am
I had a dream
That I had a pair of wings
And could fly away
On any old day
To an island out at sea
Where no one even knew me
But it was just a dream
And I don't have wings
I'll never live on an island
And everyone still knows me
I have to keep on living
And I can't escape
Because I have no wings
And it was just a dream
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Posted: Tue Feb 22, 2011 11:11 am
Azi_Zahhak Sorry, had a posting error, this is what I MEANT to put, lol LostDandelion From: Mother, Mother
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Mother, mother
Your good intentions go astray
------------------------ I rather liked this one, simple but well done. I'll post the first poem I ever performed competitively. This was written a few years ago, I don't have any electronic copies handy, so I'll do it from memory, like to memorize my slam pieces smile Rhinocerous: My muscles are I like this! It stirs emotion. I had one similar to that but I think it got lost when my USB was stolen, I don't remember the words either D:
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Posted: Tue Feb 22, 2011 12:43 pm
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Posted: Tue Feb 22, 2011 4:45 pm
You and I
You moved again, I felt you there
I know you did; I see you smile,
If you move again, I'll feel you there.
I'll move with you if you move me too,
so keep on moving, I know you mean it,
It feels like such a moment, I know you know it too.
Tell me if you've seen this part,
I know you've touched me deep inside
If you know for sure just keep the part.
These lines just make me swell and quiver
Touch there again, it means a lot,
I know you love me, if just so much.
I just don't care about you though
You make me sick and I absolutely
Can't stand you; yet I love you though.
You make me feel wanted,
With you I feel beautiful,
But you are all that I never wanted
for me.
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