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8 Bars, 1 Round , House Rules
Which if you don't know means:
No Feeding (Using what your opponent said in their verse against them)
No Biting (Stealing other peoples lyrics)
No Recycling (Using bars you've already said)
First to 3 votes wins.
And if you mention someone in your verse that person isn't allowed to vote, so don't do it. Seriously. We have a limited number of people who are even gonna see the thread let alone vote on it, we don't need this to stay unfinished because of a technicality. Seriously. Don't do it.

Sorry to spoon-feed it to you but I don't want any confusion. That should be crystal clear.

Winner gets 8000 Gold 5k from Ceaz 3k from me.

Tsu still has a verse to write up for Silver but I've got faith he'll turn up for this, so when you're both ready, roll a 100 sided dice. Highest roll chooses who goes first.

Ok?

Rolling dice has nothing to do with rapping! We should battle each other to decide who goes first in the battle!

Here's a picture of him. You can get a sense of his height by looking at how high his head is relative to the shelf in the background, and you can get a sense of his hair from his hair.


Short ********, how is it men shin you but hesitate to mention you?
Your whack s**t falls off so much I want to send some glue.

People's hesitation has honestly led to your title being Comma.
So Comma Tsukidra does your hair get hard- start breeding on ya?

Houses get locked but you can use doggie doors, honestly.
s**t's funny 'cause after this you'll be lifeless like you lost your ki.

It's a life wrecking move to take sex advice from the Comma Tsudra-
Unless if we're talking to your hair, then prestige kinda suits ya.

The only problem I see is you don't know what head to ******** with.
Similar to a book burning: your covers gone like heaven's trust is.

House made out of dirt and you ironically work at a Walgreens.
wording is all mean when I tell you I worry 'cause ya'll seent-
that an apple apparently has carbs are more complex than your lines.
I have options on victory since my pen connects context and or spines.

I take aim but your spine is staggeringly small so I suddenly stop it.
No pages turned, so why am I learning about losers shuddering topless?

Offhand comments like that, No good.

Kay.

Apple had some great concepts, The Kama Sutra s**t, was well thought out, but horrible ******** execution. Theres two parts of crafting a good line, The creative element, and then the delivery, how you present that idea in the most insulting manner. Same thing with the covers gone and Ki line (which was filler, but could have been crafted into a punchline. Lucky was right, work on your polish and you'll be ******** spectacular, and while writing, say your bars aloud, flow also affects presentation. Also I found that the multiples were thrown in, almost, just to display that you could do them, not necessary

Tsu, Started off slow And some of his bars had little to no impact whatsoever. Bar 1, Ok, but imo could have been delivered in a less obvious fashion.

Bar 2 was mediocre at best.

3, didnt even rhyme...So yeah, no good.

4. biggrin This bar alone creatively outshines any of apples, nice structure, and has the creative element.

5.Good

6.Again, very good. I got the reference, I feel like many wont, either way, people being able to interpret the bar IS A MAJOR FACTOR. It worked for me though.

7.Not super creative, but it was FUNNY smile , which is like 95% of my bars.

8. Well done. I've seen many drop soap lines, they all sucked until this one.


Due to amount of creativity, application of technique, and bar to bar comparison, I vote for Tsukidra.

none taken, I don't like it myself xd

ok wtf is up with the votes?

I need that 8k

lmao there goes the 8k