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 Posted: Mon Jan 17, 2011 8:39 pm
Hi der! I just joined and this place looks pretty cool. Im gona use this page to post stuff Im working on, and I would love suggestions/critiques before I finish my project! You can also tell me what Im doing right lol.
 My Deviantart!I also have a twitter...if ya want
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Posted: Mon Jan 17, 2011 8:40 pm
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Posted: Mon Jan 17, 2011 8:41 pm
This is a commission Im working on, I want some feedback before I finish it. critiques and redlines? the feet need help...  oh...dont mind the second pair of bewbs lol
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Posted: Mon Jan 17, 2011 8:57 pm
so far I love what your doing, your really exploring your colors and formes and posing. Hmmm if I were to cretique something I'd say pay attention to the focus of light. If I were to take in example the first post of drawings, second picture, with the girl under the night sky, she seems to pop out to much, it feels a little like a light that would hit here more if she was in the sun should be giving thoughs bright and vivid colours were getting then a night sky would. Other than that, I love how your exploring secondairy lighting like the girl with the orange hair right beside the other one. Keep up the great work and I can't wait to see what new and beautifull pics you come up with next 4laugh
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Posted: Tue Jan 18, 2011 1:26 pm
You can't depend on your eyes...
Your art is very nice.
Do you like using Paint Tool SAI and how long have you been using it?
...when your imagination is out of focus.
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Posted: Tue Jan 18, 2011 5:19 pm
You got some really good advice when you posted your latest WIP in the artist's corner.
Just wondering, have you decided to have the breasts naturally droopier, or keep it the way it is now, for the sake of the customer?
It'd be very lovely to see an updated version of the WIP after all of that wonderful advice you received from those people in the art forum.
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Posted: Wed Jan 19, 2011 12:44 pm
Kai_Chi so far I love what your doing, your really exploring your colors and formes and posing. Hmmm if I were to cretique something I'd say pay attention to the focus of light. If I were to take in example the first post of drawings, second picture, with the girl under the night sky, she seems to pop out to much, it feels a little like a light that would hit here more if she was in the sun should be giving thoughs bright and vivid colours were getting then a night sky would. Other than that, I love how your exploring secondairy lighting like the girl with the orange hair right beside the other one. Keep up the great work and I can't wait to see what new and beautifull pics you come up with next 4laugh Why thank you! Yah I need a lot of help in the lighting area....Not so good at it.
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Posted: Wed Jan 19, 2011 6:04 pm
I think you just need practice : ) but I'm sure once you get the hang of it your art pieces will be even more amazing : D!!!
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Posted: Wed Jan 19, 2011 7:35 pm
Simplesapphire You can't depend on your eyes...
Your art is very nice.
Do you like using Paint Tool SAI and how long have you been using it?
...when your imagination is out of focus.
yes sai is wonderful...and easy lol I think ive used it for about...2ish years
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Posted: Sun Jan 23, 2011 10:47 am
DeliFang You got some really good advice when you posted your latest WIP in the artist's corner. Just wondering, have you decided to have the breasts naturally droopier, or keep it the way it is now, for the sake of the customer? It'd be very lovely to see an updated version of the WIP after all of that wonderful advice you received from those people in the art forum. Well I want to keep it that way...but I sneeked in some droop lol. And it is complete Ill post in ina bit ^-^
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Posted: Tue Jan 25, 2011 10:42 pm
 And the finished one!!! I redrew the body like....3 times D8
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Posted: Wed Jan 26, 2011 9:50 am
it turned out lovely fluff : D I love your shading on your character, it really has a dreamy feel to it : )
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Posted: Wed Feb 02, 2011 1:08 pm
Kai_Chi it turned out lovely fluff : D I love your shading on your character, it really has a dreamy feel to it : ) dah thanks. And yah your right heh i guess that a dreamy feel kinda suits a espeon >.<
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Posted: Wed Feb 02, 2011 7:46 pm
totaly XD thats one of my favorite pokemon when I used to play as well XD
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Posted: Sun Feb 20, 2011 2:04 pm
 Yaaay mlp ^-^ gawd this show is contagious... but I LOVE IT!!
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