Headin the Water and feet in the air is a descirption that fits me pretty well since my base is shakey and im drowning fast. now that ive got my personality out of the way i dont have much art for this project yet,since ive been brainstorming storylines and making sure everything is factual...if thats even a real world. probably makes sense in a fantay/sc-fi way atleast confused

most of this stuff is copy paste from the comic creators thing so i need alot critiscism to help this project become as good as im invisioning it. I know its not much but i have plenty of time to add on to it in the following weeks stare Enjoy

Title:Eternal Navalice

Gen:Action/Comedy

Setting: Planet Navalice


Written/Illustrated by Roshtal Maverick


Description:Nala an Eternal,daughter to the great deity of Navalice awakens after 20,000 years of imprisonment in the Crystal Haven to find
The world of prosperity and peace she knew of changed into twisted mechanical construcsts an warring nations.Wondering how such horridness could occure sets off in this new strange land in search of information on what happen to her mother and he siblings.

Character's

Name:Navalice a.k.a the All-Mother
Hair: Silver with Golden Tips
Eyes: Pupiless white
Skin: Tannish
Race: Deity
Age: Unkown

Description:A being of worship amongst the humans she whom dawned a new age the planet named after her.From what Nala has describe about her she was a Radiant woman with a soft voice and angelic like aura around her.


Name: Nala
Hair: Blue Hair with red tips
Eye: Gold in left eye right eye shut.
Skin: Tannish
Race: Eternal
Personnality: Stern,Commanding
Weapons: (Sword) (Shield)
Age: Id rather keep all my limbs then give out that info cry
Description:The first Daughter of Navalice and the Second oldest was placed in the Crystal Haven.She is 5,6 in height and slender.

Draft 2
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Name: Sigs
Hair: Light Brown in front blonde in front
Eye: Green
Skin: Fair
Race: Immortal
Personnality: Laid back,carefree
Age: 26
Weapons: Thunder Gauntlet Mark I
Description: Bit of a slacker when it comes to his job loves to get a nice cup of root beer at the local pub.his past as a journeyman traveling the world of navalice was a grand one unfortunetly he lost his arm due to certain events it was replaced with a modified exo suite's arm.

Name: G.G
Hair: Green and translucient
Eye: None
Skin: Green Translucient
Race: Amoesapien
Personnality: Playful
Age:23
Weapons: Her own natural defenses
Description: The owner of the local Pub in the city of Crystal Haven 5.7 and a very good inventor she is the mechanic for Sigs Thunder Gauntlet Mark I


Races:

Landrasites: Humanoids that Have a parasitic relationship with an animal eventually becoming a single individual.Due to there imminent
exstinction due to there thinning numbers this race adapted by fusing there dna with that of another animal those gaining the ablitiy
to mate with that species which also helped there race from massive inbreeding that would have occured if not for this evolultion.

Amoesapiens: Race of super evolved Amoebozoa whom are the center of the Technological age of Navalice due to there lack of a skeletal structure they use an exoskeleton suite.Amoesapiens do not have a gender thus are asexual but do choose the structure of there exeo-suites.

Humans:One of the oldest races in Navalice and the most religious.Humans are the descedents of the Childern of Navalice and thus pride themselves
in that fact.

Immortals:Humans that have passed the first Two challenges in the Trinity Trials.Immortals life span is questionable since they do not have one.
They can still be killed by bodily harm.

Eternals:Immortals whom pass the last Challenges in the Trinity Trials.Like immortals they can live on indefinitaly but unlike immortals can not
be killed by ordinary means.