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AngusMT

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Posted: Sun Nov 21, 2010 12:44 pm

Posted: Sun Nov 21, 2010 2:12 pm

Very nice, I like the colors you've used and your style. Do you plan on doing any more work on it or are you leaving it as it is?

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Posted: Sun Nov 21, 2010 2:52 pm

Actually that's an avatar art and here's the avatar. User Image

And I'm leaving it like that. lol. But maybe I'll try to make it full color. uhh.

Posted: Sun Nov 21, 2010 4:34 pm

I think the chin needs a little bit more definition. Try rounding it a little. Other than that it's a neat style and it looks like the avi.

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Posted: Sun Nov 21, 2010 11:08 pm

thanks. biggrin

Posted: Mon Nov 22, 2010 6:03 am

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Is the avatar looking up?..if so I suggest adjusting the face...mainly the chin

Something like this...well that is if you can still adjust it
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I think it would be nice if you colored it in full as well c:

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Posted: Wed Dec 08, 2010 12:13 am

The bust area looks really flat to me... maybe add a little more definition?

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