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Nisshou H

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PostPosted: Sat Oct 23, 2010 6:33 pm


User Image
Ouija Board full view
Soon the Gypsy Queen in a glaze of Vaseline
Will perform on guillotine
What a scene! What a scene!


You find yourself off the beaten path, away from the sideshow scene and attractions. Compared to the rest of the carnival it is almost unbearably quiet. Directly across from you there is an elegant mare standing behind a high table. An eerie smile has settled itself firmly on her lips as she reads the cards on the table with an entrancing monotone. The accuracy of what she has been saying has unnerved you slightly but still you listen. Something about the sound of her voice and the glow of her crystal ball under the moonlight has left you spellbound. Suddenly she pauses looking over the final card. “Oh my…what is this?” She asks quietly examining it carefully. “Be cautious, friend; this is the tower card.” She takes a breath and recomposes herself before divulging the cards meaning. “This card has many meanings… Your long-held beliefs and ideas are challenged. Overall chaos, sudden crisis and misery… Natural disasters… Grief over a broken relationship… All aspects of your life will be open to disaster. Take action. Your troubles will end only after you get rid of someone…or something. Later, of course, you will realize these changes are for the best.”

An uneasy silence claims the area as she finishes. After a few moments she begins gathering her cards. “These are what the cards have revealed. You may choose to ignore them but I would advise you against it. The world has much in store for you.”

PostPosted: Sat Oct 23, 2010 6:35 pm


Start time: Right now!
End time: Tuesday October 26 at 4:00pm MST ((3pm PST, 5pm CST, 6pm EST (I don’t know any other timzones sorry ;.; )))

Rules:
Follow all Gaia rules
Keep it PG-13 folks
You may edit your post up until closing time
Do not chat in here please
Don’t discourage people from entering

Hints and tips:
Spelling and grammar are your friends!
Remember the carnival theme!

How to play:
Using a soquili based on an existing urban legend (one that has not been used for the event) or an urban legend you have fabricated yourself create a story using the prompt provided.
This does not need to be done RP style. You are free to write this as a regular story if you wish it just needs to be about your urban legend soquili.
Keep to the rules.
That’s all you have to do. =3


The Prompt
You have just left the fortune teller with some uneasy information on your mind. Little do you know but events have already been set into motion that will lead to your capture. Upon being captured you will be made part of the carnival for good. Is it a chain of events that lead to your capture or one very sudden change? Tell the tale of how you will become part of the Blood Moon Carnival.


The Legends Already Made:
-The Hookman
-Bats in Hair
-El Chupacabra
-Ouija Board
-Bloody Mary
-Haunted Swamp
-Ghost Hand prints
-Black Aggie
-Bunny Man
-Kuchisake Onna
-White Lady
-Kidney Theft
-Yuki Onna
-Death bell
-Lake Tahoe/City of the Dead

Nisshou H

Kindred Hunter


Nisshou H

Kindred Hunter

PostPosted: Sat Oct 23, 2010 6:54 pm


Questions

If you have any questions please PM me. =3
I'll post the Q and A here.


Q: Can you link us to the full view of the girl in the poster?
A: Yes of course! She's been added to the first post and right here for convenience.

Q: Can you use the same urban legend as another person if your story for the prompt is different?
A: Yes. So long as the legend wasn't made for or prior to the even you're free to use it. ^^
PostPosted: Sat Oct 23, 2010 7:22 pm


My name is Maria and I'm a prisoner of the Blood Moon Carnival. I'm not sure about some of the details. Things have gotten blurry a lot lately. My past memories seem to be fading...slowly but surely. I know it's only been a short time since my capture, but it feels like ages since the mare told my fortune. I remember running, bright lights, then....screaming. Everything went black and when I woke up... I was here. I can't leave... I've tried crossing the camp's boundaries. It works, I can get picked up. The people in the carts are nice, they take me almost all the way back home. Whenever they get about a block away though, I pass out. Everytime I do... I wake up....Back in my cage again...
This is my story. I am now....RESURRECTION MARY.

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Sherpuff


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PostPosted: Sat Oct 23, 2010 7:50 pm


Lost

xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxlost

xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxlost

Gone.

My child is gone. The bright blue eyes that stared back at me. My child was strong. Never cried. Never. Such a beautiful foal. But then, they came.

They came and they took my child away from me. I searched and searched. Those blue eyes called to me. I would find my baby blue.

My search led me here, to the Blood Moon Carnival. I knew I would find my baby here. I found a fortune teller who could tell me where my baby was taken. I went to speak with her. She told me that my life would change, but that it was okay. That I would be able to see my child again. Suddenly, I was surrounded. They told me that they would take me to see my baby.

Now, I'm trapped, but it is okay. My eyes are gone. I have given them up. But every night, I stand in my cage and I whisper.

xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx"Baby blue, blue baby . . ."

I say this thirteen times. Always thirteen.

And I see my child. I see my child and I see those that try to take my child away from me. They stand in the way and they call to me. I will attack them and I will take their eyes. Because they took my blue eyes away from me. I hear the whispers and the shocked gasps from those who stare at me. I know they are watching. They come to the Carnival and they stare at me. But, because I am here, I can see my baby again. That is all that matters.

My blue baby.

Lost forever. But not completely out of grasp.
PostPosted: Sat Oct 23, 2010 8:24 pm


She said my love was unfaithful to me...but that all would be well. I would find my love. I did not expect that while walking home, lost in my heartbroken thoughts I did not notice those sneaking up on me.

I noticed them when it was too late, as they were upon me. I was so close to the woods I tried to break free to get away. I did not manage this, it was all for nil.

Now I am stuck here, my heart belonging to another stallion. I am a member of the Blood Moon Carnival, my life tied to this dark carnival forever, for as long as this Carnival goes on.

Sleet Tempest Snape

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Jynk

Cuddly Krampus

PostPosted: Sat Oct 23, 2010 8:56 pm


Beware, I had been told. Beware the painted woman. I didn't listen. I thought she was beautiful. She promised she could make me beautiful, too. Decorate my body with the brown patterns that trailed across her own. It would make me attractive, irrisistable.

I let the painted woman apply her dyes to me. It didn't take long for her to design patterns all over my arms, my legs, my torso, and my face. It even dried quickly into a dark, black, beautiful motif racing across my skin.

Not even minutes later, as I walked across the boardwalk did I feel an itching, almost burning in my skin. An hour later and the black designs were outlined in angry red, blisters and swelling showing in harmony with the pattern. I ran home to try and wash the dye off, hoping in vain it was still fresh enough to come off.

In the shower, I howled in pain as my skin sloughed off, leaving behind only the skin marked with the pattern. Blood and molted skin flowed down the drain as my body was ruined.

That night she came for me, the painted woman. She came for me and brought her friends from the carnival. If only I had listened. Now I'm a freak, trapped in this place. They call me Black Henna. Beware the painted woman.



(PS: This urban legend actually is true.)
PostPosted: Sat Oct 23, 2010 8:58 pm


He had been a rather coddled creature his entire life. He had never been allowed to live and enjoy his life. Especially around All Hallow’s Eve.

As a youngster, he’d wanted nothing more than to be able to join in and enjoy the celebrations. But it was never permitted. Eventually he grew to despise the holiday, and even more, those whom were able to do what he could not.

Finally, he snapped. He was then discovered by the Blood Moon Carnivale, offered a place, and taken in. Now, with a sickly smile and poisoned treats, he drew them in…

The young mare pranced excitedly beside her friends. She had never been to a carnival before. It was so exciting! There were so many strange sights and smells she’d never encountered before, and she was curious enough to want to experience them all.

Out of the corner of her eye, she caught a glimpse of one of the “attractions” of the carnival and shuddered. Perhaps she wasn’t so interested in seeing everything after all.

She wandered somewhat aimlessly until she came to a clearing that held a mare behind a table of sorts. Drawn by some curiousity, she drew near. The gypsy smiled eerily as she told the young mare her fortune. The smile seeming to shout she knew far more than she chose to reveal.

She opened her mouth to ask for clarification, perhaps, but the gypsy simply smiled that same smile. “That is all you need to know.”

Head filled with the warning advice the gypsy gave, she wandered apart from her friends, never knowing that this was all just a part of some greater plan.

Smiling his sickly smile the wan stallion approached carrying with him a perfectly red poisoned apple.
“An apple for your thoughts m’dear.”

So distracted was she, the young mare took the apple without a second thought. “The Tower,” she murmured, “Great change. What does it all mean?”

She took a bite.

His grin stretched to almost unimaginable proportions.
“Well, m’dear. It means you’re one of us now.”



((loosely based off the Candyman))

dawns_aura

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Dragain

Wealthy Lover

PostPosted: Sat Oct 23, 2010 10:23 pm


How queer, how ridiculous!
That a mere mare dare proclaim my future!
My future is my own,
My husband's waiting at home.
I'll show her that I can make it back,
Safe and sound into my husband's nuzzle.

How queer, how ridiculous!
Someone's left a basket by the side of the road!
A blanket draped across its top,
Maternal instincts asked me to stop.
Oh poor foal, are you fine?
Safe and sound I'll bring you home.

How queer, how ridiculous!
I feel myself being dragged away!
My body won't obey its master,
My heart beats faster and faster.
Screams faded like the surrounding light,
Safe and sound in darkness' embrace.

How queer, how ridiculous!
I was in the forest but where am I now?
Its dark and its cold,
I wish I could go!
My body froze as I heard a whisper,
"Safe and sound, welcome home."

How queer, how ridiculous!
Look at me, I must be quite the sight!
I stopped for an empty basket,
This place is now my casket!
Forever living but dead since then,
Safe and sound in the Blood Moon Carnivale.

[Loosely based on this.]
PostPosted: Sat Oct 23, 2010 10:23 pm


'Mom? Where are you? Im waiting....', were the last words heard before my eyes shot open. I was breathing heavy and back in my accursed tank, the water too warm as usual. But perhaps I should start at the beginning before this 'New Life' was thrust upon me.....

My name is Kearin and I was once an ordinary college student, in my Junior year. My life was normal, trustworthy friends, loving family, the average minimum wage job at an unpopular book store. I couldn't complain much, I was happy with what I had and who I was, but I felt something stirring, little did I know....
Ever since I was in high school, odd flashes of memories would spring worth. Always underwater, whatever it was, was underwater. The memories were fuzy and I could never remember them. I just knew I'd seen something. The detailed ones came in my dreams. But again after waking I couldn't remember.
One day I was with a few friends and I bought I Psychic Circle. I was very much interested in the Pagan religions. Just having fun we each took turns asking about whatever popped in our heads. When it came to me, however, I asked of the past. But not just the past I'd known, but rather what I hadn't....my past life.
It went to the direction North and to the symbol for water and spelled out R O Y A L T Y. Upon further questions, slowly piecing things together we gathered it said something about the arctic ocean and me being royalty. I didn't think much of it until until a few months later.
It was just after the mid-term break and ever since the one use of that circle my 'memory flashes' had become more vivid and I was able to remember images and random bits and pieces. Always water, swimming, ice, seeing several faces growing up year by year, a place. Piecing it all up it seemed to be an under-water city like Atlantis. Mermaids perhaps, but that was childhood fantasy and a wandering imagination so I pushed it off.
Though I'd tried to not think of my growing imagination, it stubbornly grew. I finally decided to try for some answers out of the Psychic circle. I unfolded it and set the moving glass down in the center. I turned slightly to put the box out of the way and when I looked at the board the glass went from the water sign to North. It intrigued me so I touched the glass....
I seemed to be thrust back in hidden memories. I saw three children around the ages of 8-12 playing, but we were underwater and they had Tails. I couldn't believe what I was seeing, Mersoquili. Was it possible one of them was me? There were 2 girls one older then the other, but their faces seemed similar, like sisters. The older one had a deep red-ish blonde color hair and very blue eyes and her tail was a blue-ish purple, the younger had long shiny black hair and had very intense light green eyes that seemed to glow and a gray-silver tail. The boy seemed to be a bit older then both girls, strong masculine chest for one so young. His hair a soft brown, eyes dark blue and medium purple tail. I seemed drawn to the boy as was the younger girl they seemed to have a special connection that differed from the feeling between the sisters, though they seemed very close as well.

The memory shifted, but I saw the same 3 mer-soquili, but older now between 16-20. It seemed to be a ceremony. The king and queen held an orb near the 2 sisters then held it up and something was announced. It seemed the younger sister was chosen to take the crown, the older was not happy about this, but seemed to support her sister.
Again the memory shifted. The younger sister and the boy were now grown and seemed to be married. They had a young daughter that was out playing, but the older sister was not there. The next memories were clouded, I could no longer see anything, but I felt pain! It was nothing I could describe. I then found myself in my room, huffing and sweating.

I thought of nothing else but what I saw with the circle that night. I was slowly realizing that younger sister was me. My friends could see I was stressed, so they thought they'd try and take my mind off things. An odd carnival had come to town, but we lived for the unusual. 'The Blood Moon Carnival', I thought it would get my mind off things, but that would be the biggest mistake of my life.

We went saw all the attractions and some of the shows, it was fun. It was getting close to 2am I think, but the carnival seemed alive as ever. Most of us were ready to go, but we decided on one more thing, the Fortune Teller. We all took turns going in and somehow I ended up last. When I made my way in the door, I heard a voice cry out. 'Momma...', I thought nothing of it as I cleared the door way.

'Welcome Kearin, please make yourself comfortable. You've had a lot on your mind it seems....alot holding your soul down.', a woman's voice came from....all around it seemed. I steadily relaxed on the pillows laid on the floor and then a gentle hand fell on my shoulder. Most would have jumped, but I didn't. Looking at the woman she was smirking a bit. As she sat across from me I saw her face in better light. She seemed to be early 30s and fairly attractive. Not saying a word she took my hoof and asked, 'What would you like to know?' Me being sarcastic a bit I replied, 'Well you knew my name and knew my thoughts have been weighing me down. You tell me.'

She didn't find it funny but bluntly replied, 'Very well. You have wondering of your past, as most do. But you've delved deeper dear, into your past life. You will not like what you find and if the whole truth is revealed it will change you forever. The you known to you and those around you will vanish. Do you still wish to learn of the missing pieces?', her voice twisted and became taunting almost. She seemed to know my answer and smiled before I replied. 'Yes, what I think is my past life I've seen parts, but not all. I need to know what happened between the sisters, or my...sister and me I guess.', the words seem unreal to me and my shoulders seemed to get heavy as the woman's face turned into a witchy smile. It was eerie, the entire feel of the room around me thickened.

Looking at the woman she calmly stroked the lines in my palm and with closed eyes told me what I wanted to know, what would lead me to my fate. 'You were the youngest of 2 princesses of a mighty empire. Your family spread protecting the ocean and seas. Your family watched over the Arctic. You indeed were a mer-soquili as is the term used here. Hair ebony black eyes stunning green, like none before. The mer-soquili lived very long lives spanning hundreds of years at any time. But the royalty had a special gift. Knowing the coming of land walkers would eventually come those of royal blood or of a marriage could willingly transform into 'regular' soquili forms and walk on land.

But there was tragedy among our rule. As you were chosen to rule over your elder sister she slowly grew to hate your family. It grew within her for years and she was able to hide this for years until one day the first tragedy. Your lifemate was the first to be killed by her hand, with the help of a lost ancient black magic. When she went for youngest child you tried to stop her, but your power was not enough and your son was lost. Third she kidnapped your young daughter. You forever heard her cries to be saved, but you knew she was not dead. You had a small triumph and got your daughter back at the loss of your best friend who sacrificed herself. It was too much and you hid your daughter promising to somehow return, to find her again. Knowing your sister would then come for you, you waited knowing a new magic to seal her for 15,000 years. In the end you succeed in this, but at the cost of your life. You bravely gave yourself to save your daughter. Your kingdom went into ruin and as you know the mer-people are nothing more then children stories.'

The air in the room cleared and my eyes had tears. As she spoke of it I saw it and felt it all. Filling in the cracks, I remembered everything. I didn't know what to ask. Then I thought on the years. 'How long does the seal last, do you know how much time I have?', I was frantic like any mother would be. Though I didn't know her in this life it didn't erase the fact she was my daughter. I looked to the fortune teller. She looked older and harsher. She answered with a shake of her head. It seemed it was the one thing I had to figure out.

She gave a cackle like that of the stereotypical witch and spoke in a now scratchy voice. 'You are one we've been waiting for my dear....your life will forever be changed....' she trailed off and cackled, her appearance slowly growing older and older.....I ran without a second glance.

I exited the small tent to find it was changed to a tattered and torn straw hut, the sign above read 'Witch of Woes, enter if you dare.' I couldn't believe it I ran a short while again and ran into a young woman about my age. I helped her back up and she could see I was frantic. She asked what was wrong and I said, 'I just went and got my palm read after my friends, but the woman she changed and then the tent changed....I dont know what happened...', I was grabbing for more words but none came. The girl went wide-eyed and pointed to a tent that had a sign: 'Gypsy: Fortune Teller'. She said that she saw my friends then they went looking for me.

She then looked behind me at the direction I came from and her eyes went wide. She took the same hoof as the witch and looked at it. She told me to run as fast as I could home. She didn't give me a chance for explanations and urged me to go, so I ran. I rode with my friends and it appeared they were gone, so I ran as far as I could. I felt a strange sensation behind me, but kept running. It felt like the shadows were chasing me. The air grew thick and it was hard to breathe. I tripped over something and fell to my knees. In the dim glow of the street light I brushed myself off, but stopped when I saw my hooves. My nails were longer and neat, no longer ' and wornnail-bitten', my skin seemed clearer even some scars seemed to have disappeared. Looking down slightly my hair fell over my shoulder. When I went to shake it back, I no longer saw my sandy blonde hair. My hair was a shiny ebony and it now reached to my past my waist instead of mid-back. I rushed to get my little wallet mirror out of my bag. I looked at my face, but it wasn't mine. Well it was, but the face and eyes of my past life. I was in denial I wouldn't believe this was happening. I spoke to myself, 'This couldn't be what that witch meant!! How...is this possible?'

I stood there thinking I was dreaming I asked the same questions over and over, 'How' and 'Why' and I got an answer from an unknown source. 'When you are an unusual being like us, it's your destiny.' I couldn't figure where the voice had come from. It was a husky male voice, but I saw nothing but shadows getting bigger and closer. 'What about my family and friends what will they...', I started to ask, but was cut off my the voice. 'They won't react. The you they knew, that You is gone, was never born. You have become your past life. Though your memories of them remain, theirs...well they never will.' Going a little deranged at that point my response was 'Great so I went through all that school. Everything for nothing.', I laughed, but then reality came back down as the shadows got even closer. I realized I should be running again, but by the time I got two steps in, the shadows drew around me and restricted my body.

The last thing I saw was darkness, the last I heard was 'Welcome to the Blood Moon my dear'. I awoke the next day with the real fortune teller girl there with water and food. There was sadness in her eyes. She knew I tried, but it seemed no one of interest escaped the Blood Moon Circle. I'm tied here now by unseen chains. Im forced to change and be a spectacle for the masses. I forever hear my daughter calling me, a face I can't seem to remember despite everything. The seal is starting to wear on my sister. I don't know how much time is left, but while I rediscover my lost past, the me I lost I wait....I am the 'Arctic Queen', fitting I suppose. Though it makes me sound like I have an ice cold heart, but in a way I do. To this place that minds me and many others against our will. I'm cold to them so Ill play 'Arctic Queen', for just a little while longer, we all are just waiting and searching...our time has come........

Announcer: 'And now ladies and gentlemen. Childhood fantasies come alive, but beware for she is as cold as ice and is said to be able to transform into a human to steal men's hearts. Turning them to ice statues forever....I give you the Arctic Queen!!'


-goodness, I just spent 2-3 hours straight typing this and editing here and there....wow. I've never done that...my inspiration was really good...a bit personal in a way, but that parts a mystery. I hope you like it. Good luck to all!- heart

edit-I kinda forgot that I was supposed to my soquili-fy my story so some things are different...I'll just say this was in a a land far away from the Kawani lands were Mer-soquili are no longer believed to exist.... sweatdrop My bad...I got too into my actual story

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PostPosted: Sat Oct 23, 2010 10:41 pm


He wouldn't believe it! He could not.... No such soft whispered words, lies all of them. He would not become that thing. No he hadn't even seen it in the first place. He'd be tired at the walk home and the light of the moon had played a wicked trick...Yes a trick. That thing could not be real so tall and impossibly slender the shadows creeping from it in tendrils dark then even a moonless night reaching out to snare him. No just a trick, this was another trick some horrid trick a friend had paid the gypsy to play with him. The dark shadows around his eyes and that now colored his lips were from a loss of sleep, The nightmares, the figure so tall so...slender standing there. Standing over him...why did everything seem so much darker. He glanced down, why was the ground farther way? No...NOO! Silent rage he could not expressed spilled from him in tendrils of darkness, his face a mask black lips curled ever so slightly into a soft smirk eyes brow arched high as if though excited. His body grew impossibly slender and taller, he could see down onto the tops of the tents. His once vibrant coat was now a deathly white. Robes covered his body, no not robes… a suit. A blood red tie hung from a perfect knot from around his neck. This place...this so called "Carnivale" had played the greatest trick they had made him part of the show….
PostPosted: Sat Oct 23, 2010 10:57 pm


A thundering of hooves was following...always following...so loud...why couldn't they let him be?

"It's not my fault, it's not my fault...It's not my fault!"
he cried through the change, through the constant fear of capture and fled through the unfamiliar in to the black. It didn't matter really. None of it did. he really should count his lucky stars. For it is very rare that a Changeling get out of anywhere unscathed.

He vaugly remembered, past the veil of fear pounding in his chest, that he had had a curious run in with a bewitching mare who told him that something would happen to him, something dark and well...nothing good. He had spooked. The carnies were chasing him...soon they would catch him. All over, all over.
They carried with them, a chain of iron. He could hear it over the beating of their hooves. jingle clatter scrape... The iron would hurt, burn him terribly...iron was poison. Iron was death.

He had no glamour left, no way to hide. His sides heaved, his lungs burned, his hooves felt as if they were lead. A ringing filled the air as the iron chain clattered around him, briging him swiftly and painfully to the ground. One of the creatures clopped up, a smile upon his shadow of a face " why you runnin boy? you're the staaaaar, dont ya know?" another trotted up, laughing like a hyena " and stars if stars dont stay up in the sky where we put em...know what happens?" A pause, it hurt...his vision was going blurry...too late...too late. The hyena laugher bent over his body chuckling darkly, eyes wild and bright " they fall." He fell into blessed darkness only to awaken hours later to find himself caged, a star and a prisoner.

The Blood Moon Carnival was to be his home, and he was to amaze the spectators (poor things) with illusions, faerie glamour...he was the rarity from overseas, the one who didn't fit in, He was the Changeling.

[+Katch+]

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 24, 2010 3:17 am


A kiss was all it took, a moment in time forever engraved upon my heart. The Fortune Tellar had told me to beware, that he wan't what he had seemed but i didn't listen, instead i walked the path i had set in motion by coming here the first time.

He had tricked me with talk of love, companionship, forever together. One kiss sealed my fate, one kiss stole my soul from me. So i hunted for him, taking souls to sustain my longing for my own back. What i had left behind me ensured my capture, i was not subtle, i was not careful and so they brought me here, to The Blood Moon Carnival, my home now.

I still seek that stallion whenever i am brought out onto the stage, to reveal my soulless form, my eyes scan the audience, the hunger for souls so great they keep me bound, just one kiss is all it would take, my bonds i would break, their souls should be mine but nothing can satisfy my hunger.

I am The Soul Eater.
PostPosted: Sun Oct 24, 2010 4:04 am


I laid there one night basking within the moonlight, hearing the distressed cries of a loved one, it broke and tore my soul without a moments thought. I had to do something, no matter what stood in my way. With silent hooves I clambered the villages baffled by what came next.

I entered without pause, took what I needed from their supplies. Milk, what a wonderful thing. They were shocked by what they saw, subdued by hesitation they lost their path and I walked away without a scratch.

As the next night came, again my wisp lead a lonely trail, the cries of a child wailing so far behind, a frown creased the opaque lips, blues of ice surrounded by the crisp of cold air. Winters breath. Again, I made my way in to the village of the living, my only intention to steal one bottle of milk. Their faces slumped, but when they set off to chase, I was already gone.

Frustration now clawked and sealed my eyes. The only thing that echoed through them were the cries of my child. Persistence carried and away the next night I went, this time they followed, more prepared then before. With caution their eyes grasp me like an eagle, stealth of a wolf, whisking and weaving throughout the blood thirsty trees of the forest.

I was gone before they could see my final desitination. There they heard cries, the further they trudged the louder they got until they found the cave. Under the rubble and battered earth came more howling moans. They dug and kicked and shuffled as many rocks as they could.

My darling child, they found you by a crease line and pulled you out. I watched as they cared and cuddled, with sorrow to bear and non-existent tears to hide. With a struggle I wandered alone knowing you were in good hands. Until they came, the musicals of terror and omens.

They came.

They sung a welcome to a carnival of sorts and chained me to the post. Now I wander a prize between pale faces and disbelief.

"Is it true?!" They call. "Yes, yes it is. She is the ghost of 'A Mother's Love'."


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Sawaki

PostPosted: Sun Oct 24, 2010 4:53 am


The Schizophrenic

by Sawaki

"Ooh! I've got a good one! Pick me!" The little colt exclaimed together with all the little foals. His father had decided to take a couple of his friends and go out and have an 'adventure'. The group of excited, bustling boys and the little colt's father set off towards the forest to spend the night in the darkness and have some 'boy time'. Now, the group was huddled around a small campfire, stomachs full, exchanging scary stories. The moon shone brightly like a silver pendant, surrounded by crystals on a dark velvet sky. The trees rose high into the air and hung like puppets, swaying and echoing in the wind. They cast grotesque shadows from the campfire's flickering flames.

"Alright, you tell the last story son." The stallion said. He stood tall and unmoved by all the commotion. "But this is the last one," he announced to the group. "I don't want you all having nightmares tonight!" he chuckled and thought of how furious everyone back home would be if their children didn't get a good night's rest and were plagued by nightmares.

The little colt was bubbling with excitement. He had to concentrate on calming himself down by taking a couple deep breaths and getting himself and everyone else into a tranquil silence. He made his way to the front of the group, and let out an involuntary cough to clear his voice.

"Once upon a time, there was a young mare named Karina." he begun. Now that the camp was silent, you could hear the trees whispering and dancing in the night.

"She was part of a herd, and had the sweetest little sister. Around the end of fall, her family and the rest of the herd found out about a 'Blood Moon Carnival' that was going to be taking place a couple days walk away from their home by the seashore. The herd elders decided to take all the children and families to the carnival, so off they went... Across the plains and towards the mountains..." he took a dramatic sigh before continuing.

"They all arrived with high spirits. Karina and her little sister wandered the whole carnival, and came upon a beaten path that led towards an area that was much more desolate and quiet than the rest of the carnival. Behind a high table stood an elegant mare. She was a fortune teller. She read Karina's fortune in her deck of cards, and said to her in her creepiest, eeriest voice," the little colt put on a comic high-pitched, screechy voice and mimiced, "All aspects of your life will open to disaster!" A couple of the foals giggled, but quietened once again, paralyzed by his story. Once the silence was too much to bear, the little colt continued.

"Karina didn't care for this silly mare at the carnival. She thought that she was most probably insane. Little did she know that the moment she had entered the carnival, she had been doomed.
That night, when the others were asleep in the middle of the forest, the fortune-teller's words still rung in her head. Delirious from the insomnia, she rose to her feet and stretched her long, powerful limbs, yawning. She shook her mane and tail, letting her thick curls rest gently on her skin. That was when she saw two, beady, sparkling eyes among the trees. The rest of her herd was sound asleep, so she decided to follow the eyes.
Hidden among the trees, she caught a glimpse of the fortune-teller from the carnival. Only this time, she had large, shadowy Kalona wings. Karina wasn't shocked. She assumed she must still be asleep, so she listened to what the fortune-teller had to say. Only, she didn't say anything. The gypsy mare grinned sheepishly, and with the beating of her big, dark wings, she disappeared into the night. Karina woke up abruptly, trembling with fear. It was almost morning, and the sun was crawling its way over the ground. She pulled herself together and decided to catch a few more minutes of sleep. She lowered her head onto the floor, but noticed that she had placed it on something sticky. It smelled putrid. The smell was a mixture between iron and meat. Her stomach lurched when she knew what it was; it was blood."

The foals gasped quietly. The cry of a lone wolf was heard in the distance. The little colt's father was unsure about whether he should let his son continue this story, because he had heard this story before, and knew it to be true.

"Karina was too afraid to move. She lay frozen in the pool of blood as the sun peaked through the trees and bright rays of light lit up fragments of their campsite. That was when she saw what she had done." The little colt stopped.

"Everyone was dead. Her sister. Her family. Her herd. And their blood was staining her pelt. With a loud neigh, she jumped up and started running as fast as she could, away from the massacre. In her head, she could hear the gypsy fortune-teller snickering and telling her that she was proud of her, and that some sacrifices had to be made for her to excel and be happy in life. From that day on, Karina heard two voices in her head. The voice of the fortune-teller, and the voice of a murderer..."

"Ok son! That's enough for tonight." his father interrupted. "There's no need to make the story even more dramatic." He prodded at his son with the tip of his nose and urged him to join his friends again.

"But dad!" he cried. "Its not even a real story, and I was almost done!" Father and son locked eyes, and the silence was unbearable. The stallion admitted defeat at the eyes of his upset little boy. The colt continued to an eager crowd.

"Some say you can still hear her screams at the dead of night. She is now a part of the Blood Moon Carnival, having replaced the fortune-teller. But at night, she becomes a murderer. She runs, and never stops running, except for on one night near the end of fall. The night when ghosts and terrors all come alive, she stops her infinite chase and wrecks havoc upon forsaken, isolated travelers.
She is a schizophrenic mare, and only finds happiness in murder. The legend has it that when you hear her neigh, neigh a harsh cry for affection, you should run in hopes of ever seeing daylight again."

The little colt stopped telling his story, enjoying the look of fear on all his friends' faces. He grinned. The grin grew until he couldn't help but snicker mischievously, breaking the silent tension that he had successfully created.

The campfire went out, and the little colt neighed in anticipation. Finally, he thought. Momma is here.
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