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I would like some feedback please ^^

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Posted: Fri Oct 01, 2010 8:55 pm

There is two, first:
http://i693.photobucket.com/albums/vv296/lunareclipsewolf/img042.jpg

and second:
http://i693.photobucket.com/albums/vv296/lunareclipsewolf/img043.jpg

I would like some feedback/constructive crit. on both of them please 3nodding

Posted: Fri Oct 01, 2010 9:03 pm

The first one's toes are quite... round. And the claw that is on dogs and wolves alike is not on the back paws. It's only on the front paws.

But other than that both pictures look amazing :3

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Posted: Fri Oct 01, 2010 9:10 pm

I see what you mean by that (thanks for the tip on the claw part, that usually confuses me sweatdrop ) The first one was a bit of a quick sketch 'cuz I did it all at school sweatdrop

Posted: Sat Oct 02, 2010 8:07 pm

You're good at colouring and drawing fur. Also leg bones. On the most part, it's to proportions with sharp, defining lines. Sola definitely has more quality in a sense when you look at the drawings side by side. I do have to agree with the round-toes parts. Also, you may want to make the hind legs broader and muscular if the shoulders are massive. (This applies to just the first picture.)

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Posted: Sat Oct 02, 2010 10:06 pm

Thank you ^^
I've just been experimenting again smile but I'll remember that piece of advice for next time I make the shoulders so massive lol.

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