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First off, I would suggest choosing out a wip or sketch you want to work on more and highlighting that for crits. You will get something more in depth if its something you are currently working on. I'm sorry to hear about your condition - its great to see that you have kept drawing regardless! You could try, instead of inking, using darker pencils to do a more fine outline and scanning that in. Working on the computer is a nice option too, the undo button is seriously magic.

You could benefit from learning more about the human body, anatomy, form, etc. I like the drawing where you wanted to get 'flow', its a challenging pose! But keep trying those dynamic poses out, it will keep your brain working about how the body moves. In that drawing I think you have twisted the torso a bit farther than it can go. Try out poses with your own body and see your limitations, keep these references at the back of your mind.

One of the things you should try out is doing gestural drawings to gauge the form of a body. Think about the body in 3D space, not just from the front or side profile. Think about the organs the body contains. Try drawing a skeleton/stick figure base and slapping on muscles and fat and think about how they build up underneath the skin. To quote my anatomy teacher, "Know Thyself". wink

Hope that helps you out.