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PostPosted: Sat Sep 11, 2010 8:26 pm


User ImageAMITYVILLE ACADEMY ENROLLMENT FORM

Name: Minnie Crimson
Nicknames: Minnie
Gender: Female
Age: 14 years old

Faction/Race: Reaper, Witch

Personality: She is a brave and elegant girl. Her favorite colors are black and white. She hates people who can't make up their minds, and perverts. She's a pretty good witch, capable to do most of the spells from her big spell book. She has a hat with a skull on it, and that skull can talk. Its name is Skully, and it talks to give her tactics at battle, but never gave any answers when something that needs her own brain power (like exams!). She's a summoner. So she doesn't use any wands, and Skully is one of her summons (other summons can be seen in the natural ability part). She is a friendly girl, but she is capable of revenge when anyone insults anything related to her friends and family.

She loves to dance because it's elegant! Especially ballroom and dancehall dance. But she wouldn't mind trying out new dance styles. She's shy around people she has a crush on. Oh, wait. Did I tell you about the starting story? I didn't, did I? Well, here it is:
When she was 7 years old her family dumped her on an orphanage. But Minnie ran away when she was 8, because she want to go back to her old family. She ran away for a long time. But still, she just can't find her family! She was a alone, until now. She is an orphan until now, because no one wants to adopt her. When she came to Amityville Academy, her goal is to find her old family, and get some friends.

Why are they enrolled in Amityville Academy? Because, she is lonely (she's an orphan, remember?). She wants to find more friends to hang out with. She also wants to learn more magic, since magic is her passion. She also wants to find her old family.

FEAR: - Forever Asleep
With it, Minnie can use a curse on the enemy, making them fallen to sleep. And no, she's not like the witch in Aurora, who needs a needle to make the princess go to sleep (dude, that is, lame).
- Year 1 : 5 minutes.
- Year 2 : 1 hour.
- Year 3 : 2 hours .
- Alumni : FOREVER! MWAHAHAHAHA 3 hours.

- Summoning (natural ability)
Can summon a familiar. The familiars Minnie can summon is located right here (see the main pets). Skully is also a part of her summons, but its not really much like a summon though.

- Instinctual Numbers (natural ability)
Even if Minnie doesn't know a demon's true name, she can always figure out how to contact them. Considering the new method of contacting is through a skellyphone, many Demons have discovered the joy and usefulness of the Block feature and Silence Mode thanks to overenthusiastic witches/warlocks.


Physical Description: She is an average 14 year old girl, and she is tall. She always wants to look elegant and she wears black and white. She has a bright skin color. See refrences for more details
Eye Colour: She has mixed colored eyes: pink, blue, white, and yellow. For more details, see refrences.
Hair Colour/Style: She has a white hair. Style? See refrences.
Skin Colour: See refrences.
Clothing Style/Colours: She wears a black and white dress and a pair of white arm warmers with little black demon wings on each arm warmer. She wears black lipstick. She also wears a witch hat, white with stains, and a skull on the middle. She wears black gloves and black witch shoes.
Extra: There is a gray aura around her when she is angry or in a serious mood!
References: Art Ref. 1 Art Ref. 2 Art Ref. 3 Art Ref. 5 Art Ref. 6 Art Ref. 7 Art Ref. 8 Art Ref. 9 Art Ref. 10 Art Ref. 11 Art Ref. 12 Art Ref. 13 Art Ref. 14 Art Ref. 15 Art Ref. 16 Art Ref. 17 Art Ref. 18

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PostPosted: Mon Sep 13, 2010 8:07 am


A couple points...

-Just a heads-up on the new rules for picture references. You might want to look over the latest guild announcement.

-I'd be careful of using the word "orphan" to describe her, whether or not it's technically correct, because that tends to imply that her family is dead. Not everyone is familiar with the fact that it can also mean disowned. And among RP characters, it will sometimes carry unfortunate connotations of "pity me," whether or not that's what you were intending.

-Why did her family suddenly reject her one day? Was it because she's too soft-hearted? What made them finally decide to give up on her when they'd tolerated her for fourteen years prior to that? And if they basically booted her out on the street, why is it that she still feels such a powerful attachment to them? Does she believe that if she becomes more "evil," then they'll take her back? If insulting her family is the ONLY thing that can make her unlock her true ability, it seems like her relationship with them should be something that you focus on.

-In regards to FEAR, you've got two things listed. If I'm understanding the rules correctly, you'll need to pick one to be a natural ability.
FEAR: unique to your character alone, can be used in battle
Natural ability: something that all nekomatas have, cannot be used in battle (at least not right away)
If someone could clarify this if I'm wrong (I'm a little fuzzy on the definitions myself) then I'd appreciate it.

Hope that helps!

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PostPosted: Mon Sep 13, 2010 10:14 am


First off; I'm pretty sure that nekomatas are not born human-shaped. They're born in the firecat form; and the only reason monsters and demons and such take the human form at Amityville is to move around and not clog up the hallways.

Also: true form is what they're born in; and I'm pretty sure they're not allowed to use it inside Amityville High. If she's vegetarian; I'm pretty sure she'd be dead...most demons eat meat in some way.
PostPosted: Tue Sep 14, 2010 5:48 am


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A couple points...

-Just a heads-up on the new rules for picture references. You might want to look over the latest guild announcement.

-I'd be careful of using the word "orphan" to describe her, whether or not it's technically correct, because that tends to imply that her family is dead. Not everyone is familiar with the fact that it can also mean disowned. And among RP characters, it will sometimes carry unfortunate connotations of "pity me," whether or not that's what you were intending.

-Why did her family suddenly reject her one day? Was it because she's too soft-hearted? What made them finally decide to give up on her when they'd tolerated her for fourteen years prior to that? And if they basically booted her out on the street, why is it that she still feels such a powerful attachment to them? Does she believe that if she becomes more "evil," then they'll take her back? If insulting her family is the ONLY thing that can make her unlock her true ability, it seems like her relationship with them should be something that you focus on.

-In regards to FEAR, you've got two things listed. If I'm understanding the rules correctly, you'll need to pick one to be a natural ability.
FEAR: unique to your character alone, can be used in battle
Natural ability: something that all nekomatas have, cannot be used in battle (at least not right away)
If someone could clarify this if I'm wrong (I'm a little fuzzy on the definitions myself) then I'd appreciate it.

Hope that helps!
Well, thanks! ^^ Ill' fix it right away!

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I don't know why you didn't use the info I gave you in a pm. It could help you out a lot with grammar.
But anyway...
PostPosted: Sat Nov 06, 2010 11:01 pm


Where'd she get Skully? Was he something from her family or did she find him afterward? Do they have a close relationship, or are they at odds, since he won't let her use her FEAR ability most of the time?

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 19, 2010 4:33 am


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Where'd she get Skully? Was he something from her family or did she find him afterward? Do they have a close relationship, or are they at odds, since he won't let her use her FEAR ability most of the time?

1. She got skully from her family. The clan gave each member (13 years+) that kinda hat.
2. They are like best friends, but Skully is a wise hat skull. So he won't let Minnie use him for anything that should be done by herself.
PostPosted: Fri Nov 19, 2010 4:38 am


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I don't know why you didn't use the info I gave you in a pm. It could help you out a lot with grammar.
But anyway...
Sorry.... I didn't know which one was wrong.... Can you quote this and bold the letter for the ones that spelled wrong?

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 19, 2010 4:40 am


YUP! EDITED! heart
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Lol, worked it out from paint~

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 19, 2010 4:59 am


LOL!!! XD
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