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PostPosted: Sat Sep 11, 2010 4:33 am


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RPC Name: Kiso Azuma
RPC Age: 530 Years
RPC Gender: Male
RPC Personality:

Kiso is a very quite calm individual, and rarely speaks out. Kiso loves to partake in calm events, while having meaningless fights offers nothing for him. Kiso loves warm milk on cold days and often drinks herbal teas of all sorts. He hates noisy people and marigolds.

RPC Bio:

Kiso was born in Luxembourg Germany, in 1489, raised by German painter Hans Holbein, and Japanese mother, Oda Nobunaga, whom was a famous beauty of her time. Kiso spent most of his life in seclusion for he was called "Impure" Kiso was classified as an outsider and thus, on his twenith birthday, he fled Luxembourg and left to his mothers home country of Japan, moving to Kyoto on Honshy island. Kiso spent almost seventeen years in the military, serving under the command of Takeda Nobushige, a Tyrannical ruler whom betrayed his country and his country men. Kiso was captured by the opposing forces during the fourth battle of Kawanakajima, he was taken hostage and tortured for almost a year before being beheaded in front of a crowd. His death signified the end of the rule of the Nobushige rule.

Kiso has been, since, placed within Seireitei, being there for several hundred years, of which, he developed his strength. Kiso made many allegiances among Rukongai, which gave him some sort of authority among them, however, when the Gotei Elite found out about his soon to be rebellion, his armed forces were dispersed and he vanished for several years before resurfacing after his face was soon lost to the minds of those whom had been searching for him. Kiso, now, has made his way into the Seireitei, though his past was brought up, though now forgiven. He's long since abandoned his need for rebellion, though this is his word only, actions may become different over time.

RPC Weight: 160Lbs
RPC Height: 6'
RPC Picture Or Description:

Squad

Squad Rank: Unknown
Squad Name/Number: Unknown - Going For Squad 8
Squad Captain: Unknown


Zanpakutou

Zanpakutou Appearance:

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Zanpakutou Personality:



Zanpakutou History:
Zanpakutou Name: Kagegaisun ['かげがいすんShadows/Alternate Dimensions']
Zanpakutou Element: None
Zanpakutou Shikai Obtained?: Yes
Zanpakutou Bankai Obtained?: No
Zanpakutou Spirit Picture Or Description:

Uchuu

Shikai

  • Kagegaisun is released by the command Shift [Idou'いどう] When released, Kagegaisun diminishes into a dark smoke that hovers close to Kiso. This smoke can and does often go completely invisible, making itself undetectable to any individual that might be facing off against Kiso. Kiso, at any time, is able to make this smoke materialize back into a solid, though transparent looking, sword, dark purple in color.

    Shikai Abilities

    • Isou [いそう' Transport'] In this ability, the smoke from Kagegaisun moves by the will of Kiso. Whatever Kiso makes the smoke touch, it begins to dematerialize and vanish. The amount of smoke that Kiso can produce is limited, the distance, however, that the smoke can extend is limitless. This attack, however, is avoidable, as the smokes speed when attacking is not extremely powerful. The smoke surrounds the object in question and begins to break it down. It is then transported to a location of Kiso's choosing.

    • Kasui [かすい' Spike'] In this ability the smoke turns into a spiral that forms in a straight path towards the object in question that Kiso is attacking. The smoke darkens and at Kiso's command, swords, created of a dark matter, spike out in the spiral formation that the smoke is already in. The speed that the swords form is lightning fast, so if the object is within its path, it's extremely hard to navigate around it to avoid.

    • Ubatamakyuu [うばたまきゅう' Pitch Sphere'] In this ability Kiso molds the smoke around him into perfect pitch dark spheres, around twenty of them, 5"x5" in measure. The spheres surround any object that Kiso commands, growing in size until it is completely engulfs the target. These spheres mentally immobilize the target and forcefully crashes them hard into any near by objects. This effect only takes place while the object is in the sphere. Naturally, Kiso only uses it on a living target as the full effect wouldn't work if it was a non breathing creature.

    • Tsuuro [つうろ' Pathway'] In this ability, the smoke becomes a mist and enters into Kiso's sheath, as it does, a small vortex forms, creating a wind torrent in the area. Kiso will grab his sheath off his waist and direct it towards the object. The wind will increase more and more before becoming strong enough to break apart walls, unearth the ground and such. The vortex is able to suck in any sized objects, from small stones, to entire buildings. These objects that fall into the vortex are transported to a special dimension that Kiso himself has created. A vast plane of darkness, the only thing that is visible is a small stone platform, everything else is complete darkness. This ability also negates other abilities, such as Kido or power techniques from other Zanpakutou, sucking them into the void and diminishing. Any object sucked in will eventually be released, but in a physically and mentally drained state, directly in front of Kiso.



Bankai

  • Kiso's bankai is released by the command Shift and vanish like mist [Idouunsanmushou'いどううんさんむしょう] Kiso's sword and sheath dematerialize into two dark energy rings that hover aside each of his shoulders. The rings are very large, at least twice Kiso's body size. Kiso's eyes become coated with a black mist. The area around Kiso become saturated with a purplish hue, this misty substance mildly damages those who enter into it, however, it is only within a small circular area around Kiso, and cannot spread. A darkened Reiatsu forms around his body that does not dissipate.

    Bankai Abilities

    • Kadoguchi [' かどぐち Entrance'] In this ability, a shadow is cast in front of Kiso which reflects himself perfectly. A dark sword pierces up from the ground and floats up until it is level with his hands. He grabs the sword then plunges it back into the shadow, which then extends out horribly fast towards the object. The shadow, still earthed, surrounds the object in a circle, then shifts out of the ground in many streams of an almost liquid type substance, entrapping the said object in a funnel. It starts to become increasingly smaller and smaller until it has completely vanished, the said object remains, their skin turned purple in color, frozen in the state just before they were enclosed by the funnel. Depending on the object, if it was a person, their mind has been frozen and they are placed in a deep state of mental shock, they are conscious, however, to feel pain, which is amplified above and beyond what is happening to them, a mere paper cut would feel like a limb was torn off.

    • Kairi[' かいり Dissociation'] Kiso's physical body disperses into a purple cloud manifestation, completely capable of being harmed by attacks, save physical. Kiso is able to enter into one's body through pores, nasal passage, auditory canal (ears), eyes ect. Armor doesn't prove any visible disadvantage to this effect. Kiso is able to enter into the person's body in any of these ways and then travels to the persons brain, once there, he is able to attack the nervous system of the target and physically control the person until he seals his sword again, however, he can't mentally control them. Kiso can then regenerate and reform his body. Kiso is able to control the new body and his own effortlessly. However, if the target takes any amount of damage, Kiso will receive three times the amount of damage. Furthermore, Kiso's control is able to be broken by a very high level binding spell. Kiso is unable to use this ability more than once during his bankai.



Kido

Kido List:

Bakudo

1 - Sai (塞, Restrain) - 14x Use
2 - Azarashi (海, Seal) - 8x Use
3 - Kanpa (寒, Freeze) - 8x Use
4 - Hainawa (這縄, Crawling Rope) - 8x Use
5 - Kankinenkei (禁形, Confinement Circle) - 8x Use
6 - Kiriage (上, Stop) - 8x Use
7 - Bunretsu (裂, Split) - 8x Use
8 - Seki (斥, Repulse) - 8x Use
9 - Geki (撃, Strike) - 8x Use
10 - Hōrin (Disintegrating Circle) - 8x Use
21 - Sekienton (赤煙遁, Red Smoke Escape) - 8x Use
26 - Kyakko (曲光, Curving Light) 8x Use
30 - Shitotsu Sansen (嘴突三閃, Beak-Piercing Triple Beam) - 8xUse
37 - Tsuriboshi (吊星, Suspending Star) - 8xUse
39 - Enkosen (円閘扇, Arc Shield) - 8xUse
58 - Kakushitsuijaku (摑趾追雀, Summoning of the Tracking Sparrows) - 8xUse
61 - Rikujōkōrō (六杖光牢, Six Rods Prison of Light) - 8xUse
62 - Hyapporankan (百歩欄干, Hundred Steps Fence) - 8xUse
75 - Gochūtekkan (五柱鉄貫, Quintet of 1 kan Iron Pillars) - 8xUse
77 - Tenteikūra (天挺空羅, Heavenly Rickshaws in Silken Air) - 8xUse
79 - Kuyō Shibari (九曜縛, Nine Sunlight Traps) - 8x Use
81 - Danku (斷空, Splitting Void) - 8xUse
89 - Ginsunago (ぎんすなご, Silver Wind) - 6x Use
99, Part 1. Kin (禁, Seal) - 1x Use
99, Part 2. Bankin (卍禁, Great seal) - 1x Use

Hado

1 - Shō (衝, Thrust) - 12x Use
2 - Shougeki (撃, Shock) - 8x Use
3 - Noharasaku (原策, Green Whip) - 8xUse
4 - Byakurai (白雷, Pale Lightning) - 8xUse
5 - Toppuu (風, Gust) - 8xUse
11 - Tsuzuri Raiden (製本雷, Bound Lightning) - 8xUse
30 - Shakkahō (赤火砲, Shot of Red Fire) - 8xUse
32 - Ōkasen (黄火閃, Yellow Fire Flash) - 8x Use
33 - Sōkatsui (蒼火墜, Blue Fire, Crash Down) - 8xUse
54 - Haien (廃炎, Abolishing Flames) - 8xUse
58 - Tenran (闐嵐, Orchid Sky) - 8xUse
63 - Raikōhō (雷吼炮, Thunder Roar Cannon) - 8xUse
73 - Sōren Sōkatsui (双蓮蒼火墜, Twin Lotus Blue Fire, Crash Down) - 8xUse
88 - Hiryugekizokushintenraiho (飛竜撃賊震天雷砲, Flying Dragon-Striking Heaven-Shaking Thunder Cannon) - 8xUse
90 - Kurohitsugi (黒棺, Black Coffin) - 8xUse
91 - Senjū Kōten Taihō (千手皎天汰炮, Thousand-Hand Bright Heaven Culling-Sear) - 1x Use
94 - Kiyomeru (きよめる, Great Purification) - 1x Use
96 - Ittō Kasō (一刀火葬, Single Blade Cremation) - 1x Use

Shinigami Techniques


  • Chiku (馳駆, Dashing)
    Kiso is highly adapt in this ability, being absolutely flawless. This simple technique used by him is able to keep up with others shunpos.

    • Shunpo (瞬歩, Flash Steps)

      A master Shunpo user, Kiso is able to execute this ability flawlessly several hundreds of times consecutively. Kiso is easily able to outrun opponents, even of other captain rank opponents.

    • Kōsoku (高速, High Speed)

      Kiso has completely mastered this skill.

    • Kazemai (風舞, Wind Dance)

      Kiso has completely mastered this skill.

    • Senka (閃花, Flash Blossom)

      Though not seen using this ability often, Kiso is is known to have fully mastered the ability and has one of the highest skill levels of it in all of Seireitei.

    • Tenmetsumi (点滅身, Flickering Body)

      Kiso has completely mastered this skill.

    • Bunshin (分身, Clones)

      Kiso has completely mastered this skill.


Other Abilities
  • Ikkotsu (一骨, single bone)

    Kiso has mastered this ability.

  • Sōkotsu (双骨, double bone)

    Kiso has mastered this ability.

  • Fear

    Kiso has mastered this ability.

  • Stunning

    Kiso has mastered this ability.

  • Paralysis

    Kiso has mastered this ability.

  • Phantom Pain


Kiso has mastered this ability.

Unique Character Abilities

Transportation: Kiso has the ability to make solid non-living objects float into any other area he desires.

Unique Character Weapons

Ninjato (忍者刀 ninjato): A very short sword carried under Kiso's robes on his back.


Point System

  • Agility
    • Hohō - 140
    • Speed - 100

  • Kidō
    • Bakudō/Hadō - 40
    • Kidō Knowledge - 50

  • Physical Stamina
    • Resist Damage - 100
    • Fatigue - 100

  • Physical Strength
    • Reiatsu Pressure - 100
    • Physical Strength - 140

  • Intelligence
    • Controlling Reiryoku - 100
    • Intelligence - 100

  • Defense
    • Reiryoku Armor - 100
    • Sword Defense - 100


Total Points ~ 1170
PostPosted: Tue Sep 14, 2010 5:35 am


Looks pretty good in terms of formatting and layout.

On to the zanpakuto abilities.

Shikai.
- "This smoke can and does often go completely invisible, making itself undetectable to any individual that might be facing off against Kiso."
- I suggest that the smoke be visible permanently, or that its abilities may only be used when it is visible. And you should note that it will only be undetectable via vision, if one has an ability that can detect reishi, then one can detect the smoke at is only invisible.

- "...a solid, though transparent looking, sword, dark purple in color."
- Though I can't see this as being overpowered, I am somewhat confused by you stating that it is transparent, but then stating that is has a color. Does the sword fluoresce a color while materialize, or is it outlined as such?

Isou
- "It is then transported to an alternate dimension..."
- Despite your statement that the smoke takes a while to perform this ability, the effect is still more of a Bankai rather than a Shikai as it will effectively isolate the opponent in a separate dimension. Thus, I suggest it to be edited to the smoke "carrying" the object to another location. For example, the smoke encircles a vase, the smoke and the vase are then transported to an location within a given area around Kiso, as it would be overpowered if the distance of the relocation was infinite.

Spike
- "The speed that the swords form is lightning fast..."
- I just wanted to ask if whether or not the spiral can be turned around or not, and if it takes a while to charge up. As a lightning quick attack is something of a Bankai.

Ubatamakyuu
- "These spheres mentally immobilize the target..."
- By mentally immobilize, do you mean that the target is sent into a comatose like state? If so, that seems a tad bit much.

Tsuuro
- "break apart walls, unearth the ground and such. The vortex is able to suck in any sized objects, from small stones, to entire buildings. These objects that fall into the vortex are transported to a special dimension that Kiso himself has created. A vast plane of darkness, the only thing that is visible is a small stone platform, everything else is complete darkness. This ability also negates other abilities, such as Kido or power techniques from other Zanpakutou, sucking them into the void and diminishing. Any object sucked in will eventually be released, but in a physically and mentally drained state, directly in front of Kiso."
- One word, whoa. I applaud your originality and skill in making these kinds of abilities. But this seems to be more of a Bankai skill than a Shikai skill, given its sheer offensive and debilitating power.

Kadoguchi
- I see no real problem with it, however, how long with the effect last?

Transportation
- "Kiso has the ability to make solid non-living objects float into any other area he desires."
- If this is with the aid of his zanpakuto, then I see no problem with it, utter than the fact that a limit as to the mass of the object that can be transported be stated. However, if this is doable without the aid of his zanpakuto, then perhaps it should be removed.

Anyway those are my thoughts, feel free to correct them and I if I am mistaken.

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PostPosted: Fri Sep 17, 2010 3:37 pm


What I meant by the sword looks transparent but is also solid is that you can see through it, but it's a solid sword.

I will change Isou.

It can be turned around. It does take a while for the smoke to encircle the target.

What I mean by mentally immobilize is that they are just frozen, they can still move a bit but they can't move enough, they are still fully aware of everything that is going on.

And yes, it is with the aid of my Zan.

So, can I keep things as is? Or do you want me to change other things around? (can't wait to join your squad D< )
PostPosted: Sat Sep 18, 2010 6:05 am


I see, okay then.

Hmm... yes Isou sounds more balanced. However, the reason why I wanted there to be a distance is limit is that there is nothing stopping Kiso from relocating the target a thousand feet in the air and then dropping it.
However, since you did indicate that it takes a while for the smoke to catch up, that balances it out just right. One final question for this though, if the object escapes the smoke while it is breaking it down, will the parts that were broken down re-appear on the target or not?

Perhaps it should remain stationary then? Or the speed could be reduced, as a lightning-fast attack is something that seems closer to Bankai, as lightning moves extremely fast.

Ah, so they are not mentally immobilized? Perhaps the term should be switched to "physically immobilized"?

Then I see no problem with it then.

For me, aside from the additional notes, there's not much else to be edited. I'd like a second opinion, but I think I can make a decision myself once it is edited.

[Ditto. xd ]

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 28, 2010 3:00 am


If the target escapes in enough time, nothing will be missing, with that ability it's either the entire target or none at all.
PostPosted: Tue Sep 28, 2010 3:16 am


I added a new Bankai ability, someone look over it and tell me what you think? I need another crew's approval so I hope to get it soon.

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PostPosted: Thu Oct 07, 2010 2:17 pm


I approve.
PostPosted: Thu Dec 23, 2010 8:26 pm


Late approval is late.

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 05, 2011 8:56 pm


Not sure how I missed this, but you need to do the ranking points...
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