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Posted: Mon Jan 16, 2006 3:13 pm

I thought it'd be funny to have a section here for Icha Icha Stories. I know that it's a mature book, but I will keep things as PG-13 as possible. It's pretty much Fan Fic, yes, but I don't have an account to put it somewhere else.

If there is any submissions other than my own.. please as PG-13 as possible. This isn't here for making porn stories.
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Ideas and Wisdom of Jiraiya -sama
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Upcoming Contest:

Masakazu Matsuki

Diniece

Yes, the greatest Icha Icha judge around. smile

Yes... who else but I can correctly judge this?

I propose a contest! Each person forks over 1000 gold and three judges with determine who gets the gold!

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Masakazu Matsuki

Jounin-WhiteFang

Masakazu Matsuki

Jounin-WhiteFang

Masakazu Matsuki

Ahem... you wanna debate that one now?

^^ ;; I meant it in a symolic way...

PLUS where is your writing? I'm still waiting!!

fine... I posted one of my early works before I started to write perverted stuff. I hope you enjoy it... care to by my other book then for 10K? I promise you some quality stuff...

*shifts eyes and whispers* I'd like a preview before I buy...

Deal... tell your friends about this offer then... send me a PM for it

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Masakazu Matsuki

Jounin-WhiteFang

Masakazu Matsuki

*siting down smokeing on a pipe, one hand holding the paper to read it*

You know you are pretty good at this stuff JWF, but you are missing one major thing which all great stories must have! A conflict! I love how you establish the characters out right (this is very rare) but I see no conflict to pull them all together, and if you want a good long story you need content.

Hmm.. yes.. yes, true...I'll keep that in mind. Though, with short stories like these are hard to make a major conflict. Thank you for sharing your wisdom Jiraiya-sama.

*bows*

Heh... you are welcome, and I hope it serves you well!

Posted: Mon Jan 16, 2006 3:14 pm

Chapter 1 of Icha Icha Tactics NXT GEN ( So cover your eyes if you aren't mature enough)...

Team 10's Training Session:

*Ino and Shikamaru is walking towards the Akimichi compound.
Ino knocks on the door and Choji opens the door*

Shikamaru: So, ready to go training?

*Ino scans Choji* Ino: You practicing your bubun baika no jutsu or you happy to see me Choji?

Shikamaru: ... ok lets go... train.

Ino: I'm gonna help Choji with his jutsu.

Shikamaru: What about me then?

Ino: * glares* You mastered your jutsus. ( glares because Shikamaru and Naruto pranked her and used his Kage Kubi Shibari no Jutsu to grab her butt)

Shikamaru: Erk.. ok ok I did.

Ino: Ok Choji lets better inspect your jutsu *closes the door*

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Next day

*Girls from all over the village is lined up at the door with different kinds of deserts. Sasuke passes by the line*

Sasuke (talking to himself n his head): What's going on here... and why is it where I am not running for my life from all these girls?

*Sasuke walks up to one of who he remembers as one of his many rabid fangirls*

Sasuke: What's going on?

Former Fan girl: Oh.. we are waiting our turn to train with Choji.

* Sasuke walks away with a clueless look and goes into shock to see Ino and Sakura arguing who is first. Sasuke faints from overload of thoughts and confusion going through his brain*

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Posted: Tue Jan 17, 2006 1:22 pm

Hehe ok.. I know you are wondering why I cleared out everyone's post. Well want to keep this story thread with the least amount of clutter in it. I appreciate you all voicing your opinions on my work so far. BUT doesn't mean I just threw away your thoughts on the work.

For Chapter 1: Team 10's Training Session

Diniece

Haha, that was fantastico! I should write one...

Nara Rei

RICH TO RICH rofl rofl

Masakazu Matsuki

*POOF*

I, Masakazu Matsuki, the Jiraiya of the guild give you a 10!!!! Keep writting people!

Miku-ana

Heh, nice job there. ^^ *Is inspired to write one, but refrains for the sanity of the guild*

Himiko_Ryu

Lol rofl I think me`s is gonna write one.

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