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PostPosted: Mon Aug 16, 2010 5:49 pm


Information

Name: Faia,Ryuu (Dragon Fire)
Appearance Age: 21
Actual Age: 200
Gender: male
Sexuality: straight
Personality: Ryuu is quite and kind when he is calm, but if you get him mad you will see his cruel side.
Bio: Ryuu was born in Japan. His mother was a young Japanese woman and his father was an American man. His father raped his mother then left the country three days later. She was found three hours after it happened. Nine long months later Ryuu was born. He was smart and skilled. In his free time he played Samurai with a stick. His grandfather caught him one day and was surprised about how good he was. He took him into his room and showed him his katana. His grandfather was a Samurai when he was younger. When Ryuu turned sixteen his grandfather died. He left him the katana and told him to use it well. Four years later he was a master. Ryuu died at the age of twenty one. Five years after his grandfather. He had a hard afterlife but entered the Soul Reaper Academy and became a shinigami.
Division:
Rank:

Appearance

Height: 5'10
Weight: 210lb
Hair Color: jet black
Eye Color: blood red
Usual Clothing: Appearance
Zanpakutō Position: On back diagonally with the hilt protruding over left shoulder

Zanpakutō

Sealed Form Appearance: Sealed Form
Name: Kumori (Shadow)
Element: Shadow
Zanpakutō Spirit Appearance: Spirit Appearance

  • Shikai: Shikai
    • Release Command: Slaughter them Kumori
      • Shikai Abilities:
        • Shadow Blast - A blast of shadow is charged threw the blade and released at the tip. It covers the opponent in shadow hindering their vision.
        • Shadow Blades - Blades made of shadows appear around Ryuu, circling him and blocking attacks.
        • Shadow Wall - A wall appears behind Ryuu. Blocking any sneak attack from behind.


Obtained?:

  • Bankai: Bankai
    • Bankai Abilities:
      • Shadow Claws -Ryuu's hands are covered in shadows that form into claws.
      • Shadow Breath - It's like dragon fire except in shadow form. It can 'burn' his opponents.
      • Shadow Swords -Stronger version of Shadow Blades. These swords can attack not just defend. He can wield them as well.
      • Shadow Barrier - A barrier of shadow appears around Ryuu and his opponent. It allows them to fight one on one.


Obtained?:

Skills, Techniques, and Kidō

  • Intelligent- Kage is more intelligent then the normal shinigami than most in his rank. It is easy for him to solver problems.
  • Expert Swordmanship- Kage is amazing with the zanpaukto. He was trained by the best teachers and it shows. He also has natural skills with a blade.
  • Intermediate Hand-to-Hand Combatant - Kage is good with and without a blade. His strength is with the zanpakuto but that doesn't be he can't throw some punches.
  • Enhanced Strength -Kage is stronger then most shinigami at his level.
  • Enhanced Endurance
- Kage can fight, run, and swim longer then most people at his level.


Standard Point System
  • Zanjutsu /10
  • Kidō /10
  • Agility /10
  • Hakuda /10
  • Reiatsu /10
  • Physical Strength /10
    Total
PostPosted: Mon Aug 16, 2010 6:40 pm


Could you please put your images into a URL format? sweatdrop

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 16, 2010 6:50 pm


why?
PostPosted: Mon Aug 16, 2010 6:51 pm


All of my techniques... are going to evolve by one step!

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Because giant images take up space and are aesthetically unappealing.

That's why. Also a Crew asked you to, so you shouldn't question it given it's a valid request.





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PostPosted: Mon Aug 16, 2010 6:54 pm


...happy
PostPosted: Tue Aug 17, 2010 12:37 pm


I don't appreciate that sass. Fix it.

  • No, you aren't going to be the Captain right off the bat.
  • It's a rule that you don't put anything next to Rank and Division.
  • I specifically put the word 'ability' in bold so that you may fill the name of the attack inside that bold and then put the description where the '---' is.
  • When we mentioned placing images in url format, we meant like this;
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    because a plain url is just as ugly as a giant pic.
  • As Anna explained in her thread, you are supposed to describe your character's proficiencies in regards to their abilities. Simply putting 'Enhanced Endurance' will automatically register to myself as your RPC being only slightly more durable than a human, which would put him leagues below a seated Shinigami.


Other than fixing all of that, I want to see more description as per these guidelines;
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Your profile is the single most important thing about your role play, it tells everyone what you are capable of, what your character is like, among other things. Be as detailed as possible, don't give short choppy explanations about things, make sure you include as much detail as possible. If your character has an ability but you don't list it in your characters profile then it doesn't have that said ability. Be warned now, if you use an ability during a role play that isn't in your characters profile you will be given a warning or banned. The exception to the rule is abilities invented during training sessions. They must be approved by crew.

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 18, 2010 5:17 pm


  • Single most boring Biography I've ever read. It's like I'm reading a list and not a short paragraph. If you want that approved, I suggest you make it flow better than that.
  • Shadow Blast Commas are your friend, not your sworn enemy.
  • Shadow Blades Needs more specifics since it would be overpowered if they could block everything.
  • Shadow Wall Same as above.
  • Shadow Breath Shadows darken, they do not burn.
  • Shadow Swords See: Shadow Blades
  • Shadow Barrier Again, needs more specifics. Shape? Durability? Size?
  • Skills Kage =/= Ryuu
  • Intelligent Solver problems? neutral
  • Enhanced Strength I hear that he's over powered for his rank. neutral
  • Enhanced Endurance See: Enhanced Strength


And that was the abridged version. You have fun with that.
PostPosted: Wed Aug 18, 2010 6:12 pm


Taigaa-tono
  • Single most boring Biography I've ever read. It's like I'm reading a list and not a short paragraph. If you want that approved, I suggest you make it flow better than that.
  • Shadow Blast Commas are your friend, not your sworn enemy.
  • Shadow Blades Needs more specifics since it would be overpowered if they could block everything.
  • Shadow Wall Same as above.
  • Shadow Breath Shadows darken, they do not burn.
  • Shadow Swords See: Shadow Blades
  • Shadow Barrier Again, needs more specifics. Shape? Durability? Size?
  • Skills Kage =/= Ryuu
  • Intelligent Solver problems? neutral
  • Enhanced Strength I hear that he's over powered for his rank. neutral
  • Enhanced Endurance See: Enhanced Strength


And that was the abridged version. You have fun with that.


I know I'm not spose to post here, but I laughed so hard that I spilled coffee on my jeans. rofl

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