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 Posted: Sat Jan 14, 2006 4:01 pm
Yes, another poem by Tev! I really like this one cuz it's true.
Some things are so obvious
That it's really hard to see
The real person under all the masks;
It's the real me
Some say it's by accident
Others say they know
But are they really that observant
Of the side I never show?
Experiencing pain in your life is better
Than watching it from afar
Cuz if you had no pain in your life
Would you know who you really are?
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Posted: Sun Jan 22, 2006 7:59 pm
I like it. It's honest and I can relate. I give it a B+ 3nodding
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Posted: Wed Oct 18, 2006 10:34 am
Wow...that's really good. Short, sweet, and straight to the effing point...very nice. kudos for you
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