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The Sun and The Moon

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Zane Gray 305

PostPosted: Tue Jun 29, 2010 10:33 pm


Day Time-The sun shines down upon me and the rose petels seem to bloom as the bird in the trees start to chirp and the bees start to make honey for the summer times let the little children play while the adults work all day life sometimes seems easy and the wind seems to blow so brezzy and the smile smiles and good timenever seem to fade as the day slips away telling rimes to wind chimes and were fliping quarters and some dimes everything seems fine till the just slips away what do I say lets play tag kick the can capture the fflag and sit in sand holding hands and drinking soda I say hay lets all play before the day slips away cause these times with your I share every minute you are there and when yournot I just cant breath and drop to me knees I cant bear it no I wont this feeling makes me choke because I miss you I wish you were here so I can kiss you these feelings are on a roll these time that we control just know I love you My sun that shines so brightly.

Night Time-Every cloud has a silver lineing and that is fine because your mine the day has sliped away but the night has come to stay so again im up to play we can go partyand let these good times seem to roll and things get out of control it seems ive dug us in a hole but at least im here with you and thats what really matters cause everythings fine as the oracids seem to sprout and the animals creep about to our voices as we shout hello to the sliver shinning moon Id sit here talking to it hopeing your on the other side wishin the moon was my third eye to see if your ok and let the winter winds blow us away but even closer I should say I wouldnt pay to see a movie or sit down and pray in church id rather be at your balcony perched up at your window knocking let me in to say I LOVE YOU BABY GIRL and our times just seem to swirl and whirl us around to a whole new place this is better then any space we have stars and worlds we can exlore but this all started when I came perched out side to say I LOVE YOU.
PostPosted: Wed Jun 30, 2010 5:25 am


very very nice imagery here, zane..
hehe.. every line makes me imagine every scene and makes one like to smile.. ^_^

sweet work from u..
nice work here.

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Zane Gray 305

PostPosted: Wed Jun 30, 2010 2:52 pm


BlueFheiry
very very nice imagery here, zane..
hehe.. every line makes me imagine every scene and makes one like to smile.. ^_^

sweet work from u..
nice work here.


this one reminds me of hw u ryte lol i hada borrow the beauty of blue and it was hard straying away from my usal lol
PostPosted: Fri Jul 02, 2010 11:04 pm


Zane Gray 305
BlueFheiry
very very nice imagery here, zane..
hehe.. every line makes me imagine every scene and makes one like to smile.. ^_^

sweet work from u..
nice work here.


this one reminds me of hw u ryte lol i hada borrow the beauty of blue and it was hard straying away from my usal lol


hehe..
its 100% ur pure great work..
^_^

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Zane Gray 305

PostPosted: Sat Jul 03, 2010 2:56 am


BlueFheiry
Zane Gray 305
BlueFheiry
very very nice imagery here, zane..
hehe.. every line makes me imagine every scene and makes one like to smile.. ^_^

sweet work from u..
nice work here.


this one reminds me of hw u ryte lol i hada borrow the beauty of blue and it was hard straying away from my usal lol


hehe..
its 100% ur pure great work..
^_^


only 50% the other 50% was from watching u write so i can get a feel for the lighter side and be great at that as well the rymes are me bt the light and pure soul of good and life and love is a meer imatation of u so THANK YOU BLUE smile
PostPosted: Sat Jul 03, 2010 5:42 am


Zane Gray 305
BlueFheiry
Zane Gray 305
BlueFheiry
very very nice imagery here, zane..
hehe.. every line makes me imagine every scene and makes one like to smile.. ^_^

sweet work from u..
nice work here.


this one reminds me of hw u ryte lol i hada borrow the beauty of blue and it was hard straying away from my usal lol


hehe..
its 100% ur pure great work..
^_^


only 50% the other 50% was from watching u write so i can get a feel for the lighter side and be great at that as well the rymes are me bt the light and pure soul of good and life and love is a meer imatation of u so THANK YOU BLUE smile


hmm.. 50 - 50 ???
wooww.. u gave me an idea, zane..
are u up for a challenge?? ^_^
wanna write a written piece together??
begin one paragraph or verse.. i shall follow ur rhyme and add up another one.. pick whichever topic, i'll keep ur pace.

and may i say... i miss doing this kind of things.. ^_^

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Zane Gray 305

PostPosted: Sat Jul 03, 2010 12:43 pm


BlueFheiry
Zane Gray 305
BlueFheiry
Zane Gray 305
BlueFheiry
very very nice imagery here, zane..
hehe.. every line makes me imagine every scene and makes one like to smile.. ^_^

sweet work from u..
nice work here.


this one reminds me of hw u ryte lol i hada borrow the beauty of blue and it was hard straying away from my usal lol


hehe..
its 100% ur pure great work..
^_^


only 50% the other 50% was from watching u write so i can get a feel for the lighter side and be great at that as well the rymes are me bt the light and pure soul of good and life and love is a meer imatation of u so THANK YOU BLUE smile


hmm.. 50 - 50 ???
wooww.. u gave me an idea, zane..
are u up for a challenge?? ^_^
wanna write a written piece together??
begin one paragraph or verse.. i shall follow ur rhyme and add up another one.. pick whichever topic, i'll keep ur pace.

and may i say... i miss doing this kind of things.. ^_^


of course u do its me and dont ever ask that again u know im always ready for a fight but i gotta have a challenge lol so heres the rules u pick the topic ill write as much dark as i can and then u contradict me like a disscusion me then u back 2 me n back 2 u etc. u in light me in dark itll give many writers great ideas and theyll see bth sides of the world in steada only one to write is to have feelings but they wont b complete unless u have good n bad so as great as we r i propose in this we give the world a great lesson and open many peoples eyes writers musicians and everyday people
PostPosted: Sun Jul 04, 2010 4:15 am


ohh..
sounds like a better plan.. ^_^

so im challenged.. hehe..
i'll gladly accept..

and since uve started ur topic here about LOVE.. maybe its interesting to find both dark and light side of love..

i look forward to this challenge..
shall u begin the discussion, master?

student is ready again to learn and share views.. ^_^

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Zane Gray 305

PostPosted: Sun Jul 04, 2010 8:46 pm


BlueFheiry
ohh..
sounds like a better plan.. ^_^

so im challenged.. hehe..
i'll gladly accept..

and since uve started ur topic here about LOVE.. maybe its interesting to find both dark and light side of love..

i look forward to this challenge..
shall u begin the discussion, master?

student is ready again to learn and share views.. ^_^


lol 1 thing i love about u u love to learn and very much like me never back away from a challenge ok well write ur peace first then ill comment it like this with mine and back n forth k
PostPosted: Wed Jul 07, 2010 3:30 am


ok..
i will create new topic and post there..

by the way.......

HAPPY BIRTHDAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYY!!!

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