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 Posted: Mon Jun 14, 2010 12:50 am
(this is a character i am using in another guild........ i want to know is it overpowered or not....... just some feedback would be nice)
RPC Full Name: Judas Tenshi
RPC Nickname: Judas
Age: 18
Birthdate: March 2nd
Gender: Male
Weight: 160
Height: 6’1
Eye Color: Blue
Village: Strom village
Shinobi Class: Puppet
Rank:Kage
Chakra Element
1 - Crystal
2 -
3 -
Weapon(s): Weapons Puppet, defensive Puppet, speed puppet and Tank Puppet
Weapons puppet:has a multitude of weapons that is fueled by chakra including missiles, flamethrower, laser, blades (poison covered), and poison darts. is weaker than the Tank but faster
Defensive puppet: Nearly Indestructible, can manipulate its body parts to cover all of the puppets and the user itelf, is able to use users chakra to create chakra shields of that element
Speed Puppet: is very fast, has blades protruding all over its body that are poison tipped. it can spin the blades around making Taijutsu useless against it, can shoot poison chakra blades at the opponent
Tank Puppet:Very strong as all of the weapons of the Weapons puppet, but it is more powerful than that puppet but very slow. it has a cannon that comes out of its torso. it is a massive puppet about twice the size of the weapons puppet but not that much bigger than the defensive puppet. has very good armor. the weakness is the lower backside of the puppet
Accessories: none
Bijuu/Curse/Special Sword Name: none
Summons: none
Bio
Family:(deceased)
Appearance: A very rough looking kid with brown hair
Personality: very quiet but determined
Kekkei Genkai: none
Kekkei Genkai Current Stage:
Implants: (limited to two)
History/Bio: He was quiet kid with great potential, his parents always pushed him to the limit until one day he became hokage, his brother was Matsuo Tenshi who was killed by an experiment he created for the Akatsuki, but now he blames the Akatsuki for his death and is the new Arishikage
Jutsu/Techniques
Ninjutsu:
Crystal Armor
Crystal Release: Arrow of Light
Crystal Release: Crimson Fruit
Crystal Release: Crystal Encampment Wall
Crystal Release: Crystal Imprisonment Wave
Crystal Release: Crystal Lance
Crystal Release: Crystal Needles
Crystal Release: Crystal Pentagonal Prison
C cont.
Crystal Release: Crystal Wheel
Crystal Release: Growing Crystal Thorns
Crystal Release: Jade Crystal Blade
Crystal Release: Jade Crystal Hexagonal Pillars
Crystal Release: Jade Crystal Labyrinth Technique
Crystal Release: Jade Crystal Mirror
Crystal Release: Jade Crystal Prison
Crystal Release: Tearing Crystal Falling Dragon
Crystal Release: The Gods' Crossings Technique
Crystal: Giant Hexagonal Shuriken
Crystal: Hexagonal Shuriken
J
Jade Crystal Clone Technique
Genjutsu:
none
Taijutsu:
none
Kenjutsu:
none
Kekkei Genkai:
none
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Posted: Mon Jun 14, 2010 11:23 am
I wouldn't know, sorry Matsu
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Posted: Mon Jun 14, 2010 11:26 am
ur useing this for the ultamite naruto battle rp~not so sure on the full name~ well it seems pretty good so far
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Posted: Mon Jun 14, 2010 1:45 pm
thanks anyway Mero
well i am not using this for that guild i am using this for one of my friends guilds and i want a few more opinions on this including fousts.......... and the naruto people in the guild
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Posted: Mon Jun 14, 2010 5:33 pm
Looks good so far, though you could use some more tai and gen jutsu....
(I have role played in naruto guilds before. I was a chunnin in one and another I was an akatsuki member... Not the current ones I'm in now but a while ago...)
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Posted: Mon Jun 14, 2010 5:35 pm
well that is what the puppets are for (the taijutsu)
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Posted: Mon Jun 14, 2010 5:53 pm
genjutsu then XD NEED MAOR GENJUTSU!
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Posted: Mon Jun 14, 2010 6:30 pm
the puppets and crystal release is overpowered enough as it is XD
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Posted: Mon Jun 14, 2010 6:35 pm
one genjutsu probably won't hurt....
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Posted: Mon Jun 14, 2010 6:36 pm
well i could put academy rank jutsu.............
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Posted: Mon Jun 14, 2010 6:54 pm
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Posted: Tue Jun 15, 2010 2:46 pm
anyone else? i have had three opinions and i wanted a little bit more
also if you try and use this profile in this guild it will be automatically rejected
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Posted: Tue Jun 15, 2010 3:08 pm
Wait, what is so good about my opinion? I haven't even made a profile in your narut guild. Which you are welcome to kick me out of, because I don't really want to rp as a ninja. Sorry, but it jsut isn't my thing. You and I both know I am best suited for shinigami, because that is where I rock scream !
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Posted: Tue Jun 15, 2010 3:11 pm
Foust-N-Hugs Wait, what is so good about my opinion? I haven't even made a profile in your narut guild. Which you are welcome to kick me out of, because I don't really want to rp as a ninja. Sorry, but it jsut isn't my thing. You and I both know I am best suited for shinigami, because that is where I rock scream ! the reason is that i might have my character die from the akatsuki extracting the eight tails out of him and use this profile........ but that wont be for a awhile
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Posted: Tue Jun 15, 2010 3:13 pm
Ok, but I call dibs on doing the killing. i have a pretty cool way of doing it too. Muhahahahahahah
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