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 Posted: Fri Jun 11, 2010 6:06 pm
Nickname: Paree, by people who think they’re being clever. Paris is more than happy to inform them that they are not.
Age: 16
Birthday: February 18th
Sign: Aquarius-Pisces Cusp
Gemstone: Garnet
Blood Type: B-
Fav. Food: Chocolate, strawberries, bananas, apples, asparagus, Bruschetta, chicken. But his all time favorite food is a toasted plain bagel with chocolate chip cream cheese spread from one of the local cafes. So delicious. Plus he enjoys lollipops and popsicles, and anything else he can eat in a provocative manner.
Hated Food: Licorice, okra, anything made of gelatin (he thinks jell-o is creepy), and meat/fish that’s overly raw (no bloody meat or wiggling tentacles, please; thank you). Also, cafeteria food is, in general, quite disgusting. He’d rather starve.
School: Hillworth Grammar School. Once attended Meadowview High School, but was expelled for excessively lewd behavior. Paris looks back on his expulsion with pride; the shock expressed by all those involved was definitely the highlight of his time at Meadowview. His father, on the other hand, was livid. But it's not like he was trying to get caught. The teacher just happened to walk in at a very bad time. sweatdrop
Hobbies:
Flirting - "Wish I could shut my playboy mouth…" - Paris is an excellent conversationalist and loves to flirt. He’s rather shameless when it comes to coquetry. He doesn't discriminate based on looks or age and will flirt with just about anyone... so long as they're male. Mostly, he just likes getting a reaction out of people, whether that reaction is intrigue, annoyance, or disgust. He enjoys teasing and casual touching, though he rarely expresses a genuine interest in anyone. Mostly he flirts for the attention and company; he doesn't like to be alone. Unfortunately, his mouth has gotten him into a lot of trouble before. He's been known to take things a bit too far, and his polyamorous behavior has caused quite a bit of conflict in the past. Let it be known that Paris enjoys watching his potential lovers fight for him.
Paris relishes the company of other people. He'd rather be with someone he absolutely hates than be alone. His lowest points emotionally and psychologically are in his moments of solitude. When he's with others, it's as if he has limitless energy; when he's without a single person, he feels lost. Needless to say, he makes it a habit to be around as many people as possible. He feeds off of the energy and attention of others. At school, he takes part in any artistic after-school activities that will keep him away from the solitude of his dorm room (and thus keep him around other people) - dance, theater, show choir, etc. When not in school, he can frequently be found at local clubs and karaoke bars posing as someone else (a young college student, perhaps) and drowning himself in the interest of his would-be suitors.
Ballet - "I left my head and my heart on the dance floor…" - One of the few things Paris is passionate about is dancing. He loves all types of music; accordingly, he loves all types of dance as well. Paris has danced since he was very young and excels at a variety of forms - ballet, jazz, hip-hop, modern, and swing, but he has a preference for ballet. He can even dance en pointe, a technique more commonly done by women. He takes dance classes, and meets three times a week for private lessons with Irina Volkova, an illustrious ballet instructor. If he's not in school, at a party, using his fake ID to get into clubs, or out with one of his many beaus, he's dancing, dancing, dancing.
Fashion - "Merde! I love them Jimmy Choos…" - His penchant for feminine clothing never sat well with his parents (especially his father), and the necessity of a uniform at school relegates his forays into female fashion to a hobby instead of a lifestyle, as he would prefer it. Whenever he can, Paris will change from his strictly regulated uniform and put on something more to his liking, which usually involves lacy tops, skimpy bottoms, and heeled shoes. It isn’t his fault that girls get all the cute clothes! Regardless, he's always been more comfortable in female clothes. He feels as if it's the only time he can actually be himself. He dabbles a bit in make-up as well, and whenever he can get away with it he’ll sport dark eyeliner, mascara, and cherry red lipstick. Ooh, la la~!
Of course, this habit of his has caused him to be confused for a girl many times. Paris doesn't care. It amuses him, if nothing else. He likes to see how long it takes for people to realize that he's actually a boy, and if they can ever figure it out on their own. He especially loves the look that crosses the faces of other males when they realize the pretty girl they've been making out with all night is actually a very pretty boy.
Ahem! - "We're beautiful and dirty rich..." - People often question where Paris gets his money from. He has a closet full of clothes and shoes (not to mention the large bills for his private ballet lessons), and no apparent source of income. His father rarely has any spare change to give him; in fact, he's usually the one asking Paris for money. Most of it Paris gets from his estranged mother; the rest he makes on his own. How? He's not going to tell, but if you join him in the locker-room he might demonstrate his special services to you for a small fee.
Virtues:
Perceptive - "I can read your mind and I know your story…" - Despite seeming somewhat emotionally distant and snobbish, Paris is very in tune with other people’s feelings. He might not always be the most sympathetic person in the world, but he definitely understands the feelings of others, often without them even having to speak. A lot of his moods are greatly affected by those around him, and how they happen to be feeling at any given time. Sometimes it may seem as if this bothers him, but he enjoys it on a very deep level. Even if they're the emotions of others, he'd rather be feeling something than nothing at all.
Resilient - "I’ll get right back on my feet again…" - One thing you should never do is count Paris out. He is both physically and emotionally resilient. Even when he’s hurt, he isn’t down for long, and his excessive determination to prove himself aids him through whatever pain he may be feeling. He doesn’t let anything stop him, and won’t admit defeat until he’s exhausted all of his resources. He’s been known to fall into considerably dark moods, but somehow he always manages to pull out of it.
Candid - "But I don't want some pretty face to tell me pretty lies..." - Paris is nothing if not honest. He has nothing against speaking his mind, and no problems revealing the truth. He doesn't lie, and expects others not to lie to him in return. If you ask him a question, he's going to tell you what he really thinks. Paris dislikes many things, one of which is dishonest people. Considering how difficult it is for him to trust people in the first place, honesty is very important to him.
Expressive - "I believe you can’t control or choose your sexuality…" - Paris may not care so much about equal rights and civil liberties (he’s only sixteen; he’ll have time to worry about civil liberties later), but he isn’t ashamed of who and what he is, and he lets everyone know it. He’s very open about himself and keeps no secrets. He has no problems answering questions about his sexuality or his fondness for female clothes, and encourages the curiosity. In his opinion, the world would be a much better place if others were just as open about themselves. Where’s the fun in hiding??
Flaws:
Vain - "I'm truly privileged to look this good without clothes on…" - Paris is a highly attractive individual and he knows it - a bit too well, in fact. He doesn't exactly consider it a weakness, but he is slightly obsessed with his own looks. He spends quite a bit of time getting ready in the mornings, even though most days he doesn’t have the chance to wear little more than his uniform. This pride in himself causes him to be extremely comfortable in his own body. Some may consider this to be a positive trait, but its gotten Paris into trouble quite frequently. After all, if he has such a great body, why not show it off? Sadly, few people (mainly adults) appreciate his efforts to express himself.
Immodest - "See nothing wrong, spread myself around..." - Even after being expelled for lewdness and sent to the more disciplined environment of Hillworth Grammar School, Paris has learned nothing of shame. He has no sense of modesty and can’t understand why anyone would view nudity as unseemly. His out-of-school attire is often revealing, and he doesn’t always follow the strict guidelines of the Hillworth uniform (even if it’s just something as simple as keeping his tie loose or his collar unbuttoned). In his actions and speech as well, he has a difficult time preventing himself from becoming too suggestive or licentious. It isn’t his intention to make people feel uncomfortable (well, not all the time), but it happens more than most people would like.
Paris and monogamy do not get along, and he has trouble committing himself to just one person. That isn't to say he's never tried having an actual relationship, he's just... had a little something else on the side, which meant that said relationship didn't last long. He sees no point in putting so much effort into something that probably isn't going to last in the first place, a conviction he developed after witnessing his parents' failed marriage. To him, it's easier just to have fun and not take things like sex, love, and relationships too seriously.
Pretentious - "I can do it better than her…" - If his lack of modesty weren’t enough, and perhaps due in part to his resilient nature, Paris is overcome by a sense of bravado. He needs people to believe that he’s entirely self-sufficient, and has convinced himself that no one can do anything better than he can. He can never be wrong, he can never admit defeat, or his belief in himself will shatter. He doesn’t like seeming weak or incapable, even if he tends to get himself in over his head more often than not. This pretension, along with his vanity, has given him the reputation of being nothing more than a snob.
Paris is also a bit of a sexist. It isn't that he doesn't like women. In general, he thinks they're okay; he has plenty of female acquaintances. But he does think of himself in a superior way, especially when it comes to dancing. Part of it is his anger toward his mother for leaving him and failing as a parent, and part of it is jealousy. He likes dressing as a girl, but he very much likes that he's a boy, though he wishes life weren't so unfair as to make all the straight guys cute and sexy as hell. Girls just don't know how easy they have it.
Cynical - "Because of you, I find it hard to trust..." - Despite the casual, confident image he portrays, Paris is convinced that the world is against him. He understands the lives and feelings of other people easily enough, but he doesn't believe anyone could ever understand him, and he doesn't think anyone would ever really care to try. He is a bitter individual and blames other people (especially his parents) for his faults. The only person he trusts in this world is himself; thus, his self-sufficiency. Why depend on other people if they're just going to let you down in the end?
Physical Descrption
Eyes: Paris’ eyes are large, round, and are a bright, vibrant turquoise in color. Frequently they possess a mischievous twinkle or flirtatious glint. They’re surrounded by long lashes, which he darkens and makes even longer with mascara.
Hair: Cut into a trendy bob, Paris’ hair is Swedish blond. If it were straightened it would likely reach his shoulders, but due to natural curls it falls just a little passed his chin. The only portions he straightens are his bangs, which are shorter than the rest and brushed to the side, where they occasionally fall to conceal his right eye.
Face: His face is heart-shaped, and fine-boned with delicate features. Everything is perfectly proportioned. His skin is pale and clear, while his lips are lush and full. He’s been told he has a very luscious pout, which he uses to his advantage. Otherwise, his facial expressions are open and expressive. He shows a seductive smirk more than he smiles.
Physique: Paris is on the short end of the spectrum of male height, coming it at around 5'3". He remains quite thin, but has long, nicely shaped legs from dancing, though they’re still slender. He has dainty feet, and slim hands with long, elegantly tapering fingers.
[x] [x] [x]<-- Voila! (Thank you, Guine!)
Clothes: Alas, he must wear his school uniform. Sometimes he’ll try to sneak on some cute Mary Janes with a decent heel in the place of the boring shoes he’s supposed to wear. Outside of school he’s a fan of bright colors, but is more often than not wearing something dance-related. 
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Posted: Fri Jun 11, 2010 6:11 pm
Challenge: "If it’s not rough it isn’t fun." ;D
Fuku Colour:
Main Color: Red
Secondary Color: Black
Fuku:
I'd like his outfit to look something like a saloon girl/cancan dancer/burlesque dancer. Like this (in white, red and black; nix the boobs, though, obviously). Other components are listed below.
Collar -- No collar.
Bow -- Just the three little bows down the center of his bodice (see link above).
Bodice -- See the provided link. The bodice would be red and white, with the three black bows.
Sleeves -- No sleeves. Just the black straps are fine. Or having it halter style would be cool, too, because then the bodice could be partially backless. :3
Brooch -- His brooch is black, in the shape of an eagle with its wings spread. The brooch is attached at the top of his bodice.
Bottoms -- Very short, very tight black shorts (like boyshorts) beneath a long red skirt that's open in the front. If you use the picture above as a reference, nix the shorter black skirt underneath and put his black shorts in the place of it, then make the longer skirt red and the shorter, translucent one black.
Tiara -- Could he have a sexy black top hat in the place of a tiara? With a white lightning bolt stamped on one side of it.
Choker -- A black band with a white lightning bolt charm.
Shoes -- White boots that rise a few inches above his ankles. A black lightning bolt decorates each boot on the outer portion of his ankle. His boots have two-inch heels. [reference]
Gloves -- Gloves like the ones in the picture above.
Accessories -- Black stockings. They don't have to be striped like the ones in the picture; just black will do. Unless you want to do the stripes, 'cause I won't complain. Also, he has bright red lipstick. It's his signature look, after all. Or something like that...
As Ganymede is the Senshi of Lust, subsequent forms would naturally get a bit skimpier, with his Eternal outfit ending up being something like Christina Aguilera's outfit in the Lady Marmalade video, seen here and here (only without the poofy hair and boobs... 'cause he don't got boobs... also, you can't really see it in either of those pictures, but she's supposed to have a ruffle in the back over here butt, so here's another example).
Attacks:
Sailor Scout Attack: Sweet Seduction
This attack is neither offensive or defensive, but rather used as a distraction for the benefit of his teammates or as a means of escape. With a flirtatious murmur of the attack name, the enemy is subjected to a scent they find most appealing, causing them to feel a sudden sense of disorientation. The spell can be broken by the will of the opponent; it doesn't physically bind them, so it can be ignored with effort. If left unbroken, the scent can last for up to twenty seconds, fading over time. This attack can be used twice, but the effect, length of time, and potency diminishes with the second use. The attraction can either originate with himself as the target or be projected throughout the surroundings if escape is necessary.
Super Sailor Scout Attack: Tantalizing Caress
Upgrading from his original attack, his opponent is not only affected by the sense of smell, but they are further distracted by an inexplicable sensation of mental stimulation (an obsession with whatever it is they desire most, which does not necessarily have to be their mission). The time and effectiveness of the attack is similar to the previous one.
Eternal Sailor Attack: Lover's Revenge
Ganymede's final attack diverges a bit from the previous two. When struck with this attack, the enemy begins to experience a sense of urgency - a hyper-desperation to accomplish their goals. At the same time, Ganymede's power begins to drain them of their energy. The more the enemy attempts to act on their intentions and the more urgent they become, the more energy is drained from them. This attack lasts a little longer than the previous two, usually fading after about 40 seconds, and can be used up to four times.
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Posted: Fri Jun 11, 2010 6:13 pm
Henri LeFay - Father - Age 48
Henri is of French and Anglo-American decent. He was born in New Orleans, Louisiana to an immigrant Frenchman and an American woman. Much of Henri’s youth was spent in Louisiana, where he attended university and was awarded his B.F.A. After graduation, he intended to broaden his horizons and passed a few years in France, where he tried to make a name for himself as an artist. Sadly, Henri’s dream was not to be and he grew bitter from the failure. He did not return to New Orleans, but moved to Destiny City, where he opened an art supply store called ‘Henri’s Art Emporium.’ He met his wife in Destiny City, married at the age of thirty, and welcomed newborn Paris at the age of thirty-two.
Henri has never been affectionate with his son. He treats him brusquely, and has been known to lose his temper with him, especially when it became apparent that Paris was gay. He has never approved of his choice in clothes and was livid when Paris was expelled from Meadowview; he hopes that Hillworth will be a reforming experience for him. To Henri’s credit, he’s never hit Paris, though he doesn’t bother to censure his insults. Besieged by a lifetime of disappointment, Henri turns to alcohol for release. When he’s not at the store, he can be found on the couch watching a game with a case of beer at his side. Occasionally he’ll fall into a drunken rage, or become consumed by a state of self-pity so severe he can hardly take care of himself. Paris does the best he can for him and rarely complains about his circumstances. It could always be worse.
Marissa LeFay (née Reeves) - Mother - Age 46
Marissa was born and raised in Destiny City. Her ancestors came predominantly from the British Isles, but a few were also of German and Norwegian descent. She received her education in Destiny City from grade school through college, from which she graduated with a B.S in Business Administration. She met her husband soon after he returned from France and, having never been an extensive traveler herself, was intrigued by his foreign experiences. Their son was born when Marissa was thirty, after two years of marriage, and in her enthusiasm for her husband’s French roots, she named her newborn baby Paris.
Her rocky relationship with Henri eventually ended. Despite his earlier travels, and due mostly to his failed dreams, Henri had no ambition and their relationship was plagued by bitterness and constant disagreements. They divorced when Paris was ten. Marissa moved out and left Paris behind, falsely believing that he would be better off with his father, and selfishly concerned with her own livelihood. She didn’t want to be held back by raising a child on her own. She moved to New York, where she has found her own success as the secretary of some hot-shot lawyer. She rarely speaks to her ex-husband but keeps in contact with her son, sending him money whenever she can. Paris, for his part, has never forgiven her for leaving him; he uses the money she gives him for clothes and shoes, and gives whatever is left over to his father.
Alejandro - Paris’ beta fish. Paris doesn’t trust his father to take care of him (Henri would no doubt forget to feed him, or just not bother, depending on his mood), so he took Alejandro with him to Hillworth and hides him in his dorm room.
Fashion put it all on me
Paris likes to wear a good mix of light and dark colors, especially black with a nice hot pink or phantom purple. He also has quite a fondness for pastels. Most of his clothes have a decidedly feminine flair to them, except for his school uniform, of course. He likes to wear short shorts, skirts, and very tight jeans, not to mention the leotards and tights he wears while dancing. He wishes he could own more shoes, but for now he sticks with his many colorful pairs of converses and his large collection of dance shoes. Paris also has a thing for knee-high socks, leg warmers, and trendy hats.
Extra Information
I will do the laundry if you pay all the bills... - Paris' father makes enough money to maintain his store, pay the bills, and feed his alcohol addiction, but nothing more than that. They live in a small, rundown house on the poor side of town; they might be able to afford better, but Paris' father doesn't care enough to move. Despite being in disrepair, their house suits his needs. The paint is peeling from the siding outside, there's shingles missing from the roof, the chain-linked fence out front is rusting, the yard is dingy and unkempt, and they only have one bedroom (Paris'; his father sleeps on the couch in the living room) and one tiny bathroom with a toilet that likes to clog and a shower that never seems to get hot enough. Things could be worse, of course, so Paris isn't complaining, and he does his best to keep the house clean when he's home, picking up after his dad and making sure the leaky faucet actually gets fixed.
Love is a banquet on which we feed... - Considering the various obscene activities he likes to get himself into, people wouldn't expect it of him but Paris is a decent cook. He even enjoys cooking to some degree. He doesn't always have the time or means to cook for himself at school, but whenever he goes home he's usually the one in the kitchen making dinner for himself and his father (who would probably starve without him, or eat nothing but junk food and microwavable dinners). He's been cooking for the both of them since his mother walked out on them, so he's gotten fairly good at it over the years.
I put a spell on you, because you're mine... - Paris is not a religious person. He's had some pretty crappy experiences with religion in the past because religious people tend to look down on him for a variety of reasons. Apparently he's "impure," but what does he care? He isn't particularly spiritual either, and the beliefs that he does have he generally keeps pretty private, unless he's questioned about them. He's definitely not as outspoken about his spiritual beliefs as he is about his sexuality and his promiscuous behavior. He classifies himself as Pagan and is a solitary practitioner of Wicca (this means he isn't a member of a coven and practices on his own instead). He doesn't attempt magic but he has a personal Book of Shadows, which is more or less a journal of his thoughts and daily experiences, and he frequently wears a necklaces with a pentagram pendant and a triple-moon bracelet.
Sooner or later, I'll get what I'm asking for... - If there's one thing Paris is good at, it's doing things he shouldn't. A year ago, he managed to get a tattoo at the age of 15. How? Let's just say he knows the right people, and he happened to have the right documentation (and he can be very persuasive). True to form, Paris' tattoo is what many people call a tramp stamp and can be found on the small of his back. He agonized over an appropriate design for months before finally settling on a simple blue rose positioned inside a circumscribed pentagram with a diameter of about two inches. Blue roses are symbolic of mystery and attaining the impossible (unattainable love, for instance), and the circumscribed pentagram is a common pagan symbol. Paris is nothing if not pessimistic when it comes to love and relationships, so he thought the blue rose in particular was rather fitting.
Character Songs - or Songs Paris Likes and/or Identifies With
Fast Car by Kristian Leontiou (originally sung by Tracy Chapman)
Not A Virgin by Poe
Here We Go Again by Pixie Lott
Just Dance by Lady Gaga (cliche, but entirely necessary)
Show Me Love by t.A.T.u
Because The Night by 10,000 Maniacs
I Believe by Blessid Union of Souls
Love is a Battlefield by Pat Benetar
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Posted: Fri Jun 11, 2010 6:15 pm
First of all, the meaning behind his name, and my reason for choosing those that I did:
Paris - Paris, France has long been known as the City of Love. In deciding on a name for the Senshi of Lust, I took inspiration from the French royal court of the medieval and renaissance periods, which was notorious for licentious behavior. French kings were oversexed and took a number of different mistresses (as did most other kings of the world). While kings were not expected to remain in Paris indefinitely, it has been the capital of France since 508 A.D. Accordingly, I took its name.
Donatien - Donatien Alphonse François was a French aristocrat, revolutionary and writer known for his libertine sexuality and lifestyle. He is more popularly known as the Marquis de Sade. His best known works are erotic novels. To give an idea of what these novels contain: we get the term “sadism” from his name. I thought his overt sexuality would be fitting when it came to the Senshi of Lust, and drew from his name as well.
LeFay - from the French la fée, which means the fairy, I took this name from Morgan le Fay, a prominent figure and powerful sorceress in Arthurian legend. Historically, women were most likely to be accused of sorcery and witchcraft, not only because they were thought to be weaker than men, but because they were seen as being more lustful and therefore more susceptible to the devil’s seduction. As such, I chose the name of one of the most famous literary sorceresses to complete the name of the Senshi of Lust.
Why Sailor Ganymede - Senshi of Lust? Lust is a passionate or overwhelming desire or craving, not always sexual in origin, though I chose to go that route in most of my creation of the character. In Greek myth, Ganymede was a beautiful Trojan prince lusted after by Zeus. Ganymede was the only mortal who did not have to win the right to live on Mount Olympus. Zeus wanted him, abducted him, made him his cup-bearer and granted him immortality. Thus, Ganymede’s role in Greek myth and his place in the stars are directly related to Zeus’ lust.
Why an Aquarius/Pisces Cusp? I decided to go with Aquarius because in the myth of Zeus and Ganymede, Zeus places Ganymede in the constellation Aquarius. In making Paris a cusp, I tied in some of the Pisces characteristics, which he shares.
What’s up with his favorite foods? Chocolate, strawberries, bananas and asparagus are aphrodisiacs - they arouse sexual desire. Additionally, two of the main ingredients in Bruschetta, garlic and basil, are also aphrodisiacs. Apples are commonly associated with the forbidden fruit, and Paris enjoys chicken because of the myth of Ganymede. In the myth, Zeus gifts Ganymede with a rooster, or male chicken.
What’s up with his least favorite foods? In contrast with his favorite foods, licorice and okra are anaphrodisiacs - they dampen sexual desire. The rest have no special meaning. He just doesn’t like them.
Why lightning bolts? This has more to do with Ganymede than with lust. Ganymede was Zeus’ only male lover (Ganymede is also the largest of Jupiter’s moons). As such, I decided to mark Sailor Ganymede with Zeus’ symbol - the lightning bolt.
Why an eagle brooch? When Zeus abducted Ganymede, he did so in the form of an eagle.
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Posted: Fri Jun 11, 2010 6:16 pm
Open for critique! Be gentle, it's my first time. ;D
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Posted: Sat Jun 12, 2010 9:25 am
Rah rah ah ah aah~
Hey, you. Have I mentioned before that your quest amused me? A lot?? Well, it does.
And I love Alejandro! <3
For his attacks, I think the best thing to do is to decide if you want it to be offensive or defensive? Or the first two can be defensive and the Eternal can be offensive? I've seen a lot of people do it like that...
Of course, this also makes me want to say to try and come up with an attack to "seduce" the enemy? Like a charm? Draw attention away from the rest of his allies and have the enemy focus on him so the others can attack? It would make sense since he likes the attention.
Or even something like... blowing a kiss at the enemy and it gives them a small shock, or paralyzes them for just a moment.
OR you can wait to see what everyone else has to think. XD; I'm pretty sure I've mentioned these to you, at some point. <3
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Posted: Sat Jun 12, 2010 10:40 am
Do not make me start singing.
Actually, I think you have mentioned that my quest amuses you. But that's okay, because it amuses me, too. Why create something that I'm not going to be able to have fun with, right??
Anyways... I would prefer offensive attacks, simply because Paris is such a forward person that I think it would go better with his personality, but defensive ones would work, too. I like the idea of drawing attention away from the others. smile I would definitely like his Eternal form to have an offensive attack, though. I just... can't think of very many words to use for any of them, except for things like "carnal" and "passion."
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Posted: Sat Jun 12, 2010 8:54 pm
I like Alejandro. I hope to see more of him
(sorry I'm not good at crits)
good luck in your quest.
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Posted: Sat Jun 12, 2010 9:26 pm
It's okay! I'm not good at crits either! I'm pretty new at this, so...
Regardless, thank you for the comment! biggrin
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Posted: Mon Jun 14, 2010 3:42 pm
if its not too much of a problem could you crit my quest?
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Posted: Mon Jun 14, 2010 3:45 pm
Sure! I'll get on that right away! I'm not too sure how much I'll be able to give since I can never seem to pick out things that might need a little tweaking, but I'll definitely try my best!!
EDIT: Crit given!!
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Posted: Wed Jun 16, 2010 7:47 pm
This really isn't a critique, just something I noticed...
You have all this stuff dealing with Lady Gaga, yet you never once mention her by name. XD; You did that on purpose, right?? Or were you just trying not to make him sound so Gaga crazy?
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Posted: Mon Jun 21, 2010 4:08 pm
Should I mention her by name??? D: I mean, he can be Gaga crazy if I want him to be. He probably would be. But, I mean, it's Lady Gaga so... who wouldn't be??
No, seriously, I did it on purpose. I suppose. I thought putting something along the lines of "he's a huge Lady Gaga fan" after everything else I put in his profile and all the lines I used from her songs, it would be a bit superfluous.
But he is. In case you're wondering.
I could use some help coming up with decent attacks, BTW. DDDD:
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Posted: Mon Jun 21, 2010 4:33 pm
XD Despite the Gaga lyrics, the song that comes to mind: With your cherry lips and golden curls
You could make grown men gasp
When you'd go walking past them
In your hot pants and high heels
They could not believe
That such a body was for real
It seemed like rainbows would appear
Whenever you came near the clouds would disappear
Because you looked just like a girl
Your baby blues would flash
And suddenly a spell was cast BUT ANYWAYS. I LIKE HIM. A LOT. As for attacks, I'd suggest ones that revolve around increasing the enemies body heat and/or attracting their focus to destroy concentration. Or a luring skill! BECAUSE ITS A TRAP.
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Posted: Fri Sep 10, 2010 9:38 pm
Well, it's been a few months, but I did a little tweaking with his profile. I've also finally added some attacks! Thank you, lizbot, for the suggestion of a pheromone trap!! I liked it and went with it. razz
Further suggestions and critiques would be welcome! I'd like his Eternal form to have a physical attack, but I'm having some difficulties. As hilarious as it would be, I can't just have him going around mutilating enemy genitalia.
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