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 Posted: Mon May 17, 2010 7:11 pm
I am hosting my very first poetry contest!
The prize of 10k will be granted to the poem I think best describes the topic
Topic:
Love and Obsession
You can take the topic wherever you'd like. Tell me the difference, how would a lunatic handle love, what the price of obsession is, anything really.
I like dark and heartbreaking poems, words that stick in my head. However, poems are about relating, and I can absolutely relate to anything that isn't dark. But I'm picky fyi biggrin
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Posted: Mon May 17, 2010 7:15 pm
Rules: 1. follow the TOS
2. It may be any type of poem (haiku, free verse, original)
3. minimum: 3 lines
4. maximum: none
5. unlimited sumbmissions
6. no recycled poems-- I just feel that poetry should be created anew every time =]
7. have fun, try your best
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Posted: Mon May 17, 2010 7:17 pm
Favorites!!!1. A Stalker's Love
by Commonsense of BlindEyes
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Posted: Mon May 17, 2010 7:45 pm
Muted Cries
I'm sick of keeping this secret from you
I'm sick of hiding all the things that I do
I'm tired of being that guy that you knew
And it's time for a change so let's rearrange
All these pieces in our little game.
I'll even let you win if you remember my name..
I'm so tired of trying
I'm so tired of lying
I'm so tired of making all those mistakes
Every time i see your face, and every time i see those eyes
Can you hear my muted cries?!
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Posted: Mon May 17, 2010 7:54 pm
aw very sweet, very relatable!
but the fluency is a little choppy in the first few lines, and i didnt really understand the fifth
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Posted: Mon May 17, 2010 8:00 pm
Oh my bad, the 5th line is supposed to read
"all these pieces in our little game." I was typing too fast. lol
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Posted: Mon May 17, 2010 8:07 pm
Death did
I tried to do,
I tried to see,
but sadness always gets to me,
even though you spreaded wings,
even though you're with the king,
the sadness always stabs my heart,
a very painful broken shard,
the words, the feelings, the grief and despair,
is tons more pain than ripped out hair,
agony is easy, the wings of death is hard
but I know the words your eternal voice echoed,
Even though death did us part,
forever and ever I'll stay in your heart
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Posted: Mon May 17, 2010 9:09 pm
King Tripp Veltryn: yes, i see, thank you for clarifying! =)
FurryPsychoBunny: i liked it, but some of the lines sounded very generic and common. Did not appeal to me directly, but i think you have the right idea
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Posted: Mon May 17, 2010 10:42 pm
Right In Front Of You
You search and search, yet you don't understand.
I am here,
There is no need to try and find Neverland.
And yet, you're still looking, because you don't know,
That I'm right here,
You don't have to search in the cold, cold snow.
You forgot about me, I do believe,
But I'm still here,
Happiness isn't something you need to achieve.
You need to let it find you,
And I've found you.
So why are you still searching?
I'm right here.
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Posted: Thu May 20, 2010 4:29 pm
i kinda like it, but it didnt seem to flow when i read it aloud
your poem also sounds a little forced because of the rhyme scheme
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Posted: Fri May 21, 2010 11:10 am
A Stalker's Love
I watch you,
You're beautiful in every way.
Yet you always belong to someone else,
Never to me.
All those kisses to others' lips,
But those will end.
For tonight,
I shall make you mine,
Never to belong to anyone,
but me.
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Posted: Tue May 25, 2010 9:39 pm
I like it! Painted a spooky yet kinda romantic picture in my head. biggrin
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Posted: Wed May 26, 2010 8:39 pm
Malevolent_Midnight I like it! Painted a spooky yet kinda romantic picture in my head. biggrin Thank you!
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Posted: Fri Jul 08, 2011 4:54 pm
I'm supposing it's too late to post, but here goes...
My Angel Forever
In the shadows
I see your figure.
Mask in place
As a temper trigger.
I long for the day
That I can find some love for you.
You don't understand;
I won't ever love you.
I love the Vicomte,
Not a man with a mask.
Return me to him
That's all I ask.
My heart throbs as I
Hear the pounding of
Pain on the door.
Please let them go free.
I will stay with you
If you want.
Why would you let us
Go when I chose
You over death?
The three in our group
Made it out alive all
Thanks to your heart.
I am ready to die now,
I beg for your forgiveness.
You were my angel
That I never forgot.
-Christine Daae, on her deathbed
Phantom of the Opera inspired
My one comment on it is;
WOW.
I did not think I would write something so deep. It's free verse, is that okay?
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Posted: Fri Jul 08, 2011 5:06 pm
Oh, whoops. My last poem was too long. Anyway, here's another PotO Poem (sorry, I'm a bit obsessed right now...)
Looking Back
-------Erik-------
I stare at your face
Dreaming my dreams.
Wishing you were mine,
I curse my love.
My face is ugly
No doubt about that.
How could it not
With a hole for a nose?
You've said over and over
It's my heart that's disfigured
Instead of my face.
I may love you, my darling,
With all my heart and more,
But with some things I must say
I just don't believe you.
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