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iKillCaustic
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PostPosted: Fri Apr 30, 2010 5:44 am


I wrote this last year a couple of weeks after Samhain during an English class. I couldn't be bothered listening to the girls presenting their oral presentations...

I see the wind blowing through the trees,
gorgeous green leaves,
white and brown,
smooth like silk,
crows fly ’round in an aerial ballet,
wind whips the flags back and forth,
I hear the rustle, the whisper of the wind.
The sky is darkening,
I see it,
there is no sun,
only clouds,
a plane makes its way across the sky,
a beeline, straight,
there were four in the last few minutes.
Monotonous drones,
the teacher’s clones,
I skipped her life lesson today.
The clouds are moving,
alive! Alive!
The window is so close…
I could slip out and fly.
Hark! There is the sun,
but the clouds are darker still,
the bright greens against the steel blues,
and stark white branches.
The lorikeets call and my heart skips a beat,
I want to live in the wild with them,
in the desert with the red, red sand.
The wind is tormenting me,
making me want to leave,
to soar in it’s arms,
to be ripped apart by its claws.
Celestial winds,
sound barriers,
whoosh-BOOM-crash!
The wind died,
and I did too,
is there no one left to hold me now?
PostPosted: Sat May 01, 2010 8:23 am


Wow, that came out all at once, in one class??? Very cool. Thank you for sharing

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PostPosted: Mon May 03, 2010 5:31 am


Took me about an hour. Granted I haven't been able to write anything decent since...
PostPosted: Tue May 04, 2010 8:52 pm


That was a wonderful flutter of thoughts. Btw are you Australian? I love Lorikeets, they are so cute and colorful. I am a bird freak. I have cockatiels, but want a lorikeet too someday. Wow my mind is a flutter.....sigh. been up too early today. anyways i'd like to hear more from you.

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PostPosted: Tue May 04, 2010 9:35 pm


I like the way it flowed, you can almost feel the wind tugging at you. 3nodding
As far as not being able to write anything since, don't let it worry you, writing should come from inside, not on demand.
Sadly, when in school, we have to be trained monkeys and perform on demand pirate
PostPosted: Wed May 05, 2010 5:40 am


KasaChan: Thankyou, and yes, I am Australian!

BAwiccanwitch: Thankyou! Thankfully...I'll have finished school in a few months...

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