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Bottle

PostPosted: Fri Apr 02, 2010 7:50 pm


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So you thought you were safe from harsh ratings and judgments here in Fashun, did you?

Think again!

Here we are, seven Fashunites and Fashunistas here to give you our opinions on the avatar arena's winner circle.



I ask very little, just obey these:

Don't get overly upset with poor rates. This is in good fun. You have the right to respectfully defend yourself though!

Raters, don't flame people. No accusations of paying people for votes or down-rating. We already know it happens, let's keep it out of Fashun.

Don't give Fashun members better rates. They're in Fashun - they should know better! Besides, it's good to have constructive feedback.

If I say to calm down - do it. We're talking pixels here. Breathe and mix up a margarita.
PostPosted: Fri Apr 02, 2010 9:38 pm


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A 7 tier rate? Of course! We are Lucky 7 Critiques, after all.




User Image - 7/7 Absolutely Perfect, I'm in love! xxUser Image - 6/7 Awesome! Just needs a tiny tweak.

User Image - 5/7 Great, but something's off.xxxxxxUser Image - 4/7 It's good, but I've seen better.

User Image - 3/7 Alright, but not Top 10. xxxxxx
xxxUser Image - 2/7 It doesn't get much worse than this.

User Image - 1/7 Pathetic. In the name of all that is holy, how did this place?!

Bottle


Bottle

PostPosted: Fri Apr 02, 2010 10:04 pm


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Who are we to tell you what's a good avatar?! Well, even if we don't have much experience, I can assure you that we all have eyes... or braille monitors. o.O




Bottle
Rates: Original and Cosplay

I have a hotdog for a bum! I have entered the arena only a couple times in both original and cosplay, but I have been an avatar junkie for well over a year. In originals, I love matching avatars - especially if a theme is well incorporated. For cosplays, it's all about the facial features with me. I want to be able to recognize the character just by the thumbnail! My rates are not "brutally" honest, but honest none the less.



Life Hath Immortality
Rates: Original and Cosplay

Tere! I'm Life Hath Immortality, but I go by Purple on Gaia. I've only been a member for about a year, but I've always been interested in tekteking and the arenas. I've entered only three times, and I haven't placed yet. I'm really picky. I hate avatars that are just supposed to be funny. The most important things to me in an avatar are that the colors are balanced and it's original. In cosplays, I hate when someone leaves out an item that is really easy to find. And I hate overdone characters. c;



k.k.razy
Rates: Original

I've just recently starting joining the AA a lot but I've always loved a good avi. When it comes to the arena I don't like silly or humorous avis. Match or gtfo. I'm not a harsh rater, but I'm not easily pleased either. I look at color, flow, balance, originality, and aesthetic appeal... sometimes theme. I've never been in the Cosplay arena, I don't really like it because most of the time I have no idea who people are cosplaying and I feel like that hinders my ability to rate, which is why I'm only doing original. Thanks Bottle for setting all this up!



Pregnant Barbie
Rates: Original

Hola! I have entered the arenas since I was a little nooblet. I have only placed twice (5th place both times crying ), but I am an avid lover of the arenas. I love dual color color schemes stacked on white. It is kind of my signature style. I will be honest, I am kind of sexist against male avatars. Guys have to work hard to impress me with their avatars. I mean, they are just so meaty and fat. The male base looks like it is on steroids. I also really hate over done color combos. I don't like humorous avatars, especially not in the original arena. The arena is srs business. I love avatars that match perfectly. (Duh? Who doesn't) <3



Miss Blissy
Rates: Original

I've been in the arena quite a bit, and I know what I like in an avi. It pretty much has to match, and I'll love it a whole lot more if there is some sort of theme, and not just a bunch of random items of the same color thrown on. I also look for balance and creativity - if I've seen it before, I'm not gonna like it. I like to think that I rate things... semi-harshly? I'm not going to hesitate to say if I hate something, at least. But I won't hesitate to say if I love something!



John Reese
Rates: Original

Maybe you haven't seen me here before, that's because I'm a new member (: I am also quite new to the arenas as I have only been in Gaia for at least 10 months. I have also won a few contests here and there, but I have not yet placed in the arenas. I am judging the original avatars based on three factors: color, balance, and originality. I also like an avatar that has purpose, maybe a short poem or story that supports the entry. I will try my best to judge and thanks for giving me a chance to do this.
^__^




Skyscraper Opera
Rates: Cosplay

I've entered both Arenas a few times, but I enjoy cosplay a bit more. I've placed 3 times in it. I've got an eye for detail, and if the character's way overdone, someone's going to get beaten with a stick. A big stick. My rates won't be too harsh. My blurb is so small ; w ;
PostPosted: Fri Apr 02, 2010 10:05 pm


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Is it unique? Is it impressive? Are we pleased to see it in the Top 10? Let's see...




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#1. Lady Assassin




Bottle
3/7
Been done before - and been done better. Monochrome avatars are typically unoriginal by themselves, but this also uses a theme that is common with them, haha. It's not a horrible looking avatar, but there definitely needs to be something more original about it.


k.k.razy
3/7
This is so unoriginal it's not even funny. She didn't even do a good job at being unoriginal. The top is really light and the bottom is really dark. That /might/ have worked if she didn't toss on that ridiculous cape thinggy. I've only ever seen like two people pull that hair off well. The art style of it is just to different from most items. Blue eyes... why? I wonder if she turned off comments before or after she won.



John Reese
1/7
Talk about no originality, I hate monochromes. If someone's gonna do a one-colored avi, then at least they have to make it stunning.


Pregnant Barbie
?/7



Miss Blissy
2/7 First off: I hate it when people don't allow comments. It's just cowardly and admitting that your avi is so bad that people will critique it. This is unoriginal, boring, and I'm pretty sure it uses a set.


Life Hath Immortality
?/7




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#2. Kappa the Water Sprite


Bottle
6/7
I'll rate this as if it were a cosplay, since that's what it is. Isn't there a skin that makes that kind of mouth? I dislike the beak. This is very accurate, and well thought out. The sack was a nice touch to add to the character.


k.k.razy
0/7
Um... isn't this a cosplay? For a cosplay, yes it's good. For an original, it sucks. No matching, no appeal. Overall, just an eyesore.
Not rating cause it's in the wrong arena.


John Reese
0/7
Shouldn't this be in cosplay!? Bottomline it looks like a semi-digested frog vomited by a snake.


Pregnant Barbie
?/7



Miss Blissy
3/7 Um... coslplay? If it is, it's good, if not... no. It's just an eyesore of an original avi.



Life Hath Immortality
?/7




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#3. Princess Kitty


Bottle
2/7
It got a point for effort. This has the quality of an "everyday" avatar. Nothing's special about it. It's plain and the shades of pink don't really match.


k.k.razy
3/7
Comment of the week: "Oh I hope you win this is the cutest ori avi out right now!" OMG SO KAWAII MROWW MEOWW CUTEE 100000/100000!!1!!!~~!11~
In all seriousness, it's really not that bad. Kudos for matching the hair somewhat. I liked Social Bondage's comment. Good advice, thank you.


John Reese
1/7
It's boring, cliche, unoriginal and just plain nooby.


Pregnant Barbie
?/7



Miss Blissy
2/7 Oh god. Barf much? It's cute, yes. It matches in a very vague sort of way. Actually on second thought no it doesn't. But it's unoriginal and simple and pointless. Blegh.



Life Hath Immortality
?/7




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#4. Lucy Lightning



Bottle
5/7
For anyone who didn't know, this was a group entry paying tribute to the Lyndexer's Journal. I was actually going to join myself, but I didn't have the funds to make an avatar that was arena suitable. ; ; I really loved this one. Anyway, a few of the shades are off, but it over looks nice.


k.k.razy
5/7
I'm so happy that some of the war hero's won this week, I was looking forward to seeing all of them. I like this avi a lot (Of course you do Raz, it's brown!) Shut up okay! I think she could have chosen better hair. I like the blues, I like the face expression, I like the description. I hate how people say make up makes girls look like sluts, no it doesn't D; it creates personality in the face. stfu you trolls.


John Reese
2/7
She used Lyndexer's Journal twice which pretty much made up half of its creativity. The hair didn't match the other browns and I read from one voter that she looks more like a whore than an Air Chief Marshall which is true. xD


Pregnant Barbie
?/7



Miss Blissy
6/7 I really like the colors on this one, and the face is great. I only wish that the torso was more spread out and the feet had more blue. But it's really a lovely avi.



Life Hath Immortality
?/7




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#5. Philophobia



Bottle
5/7
I took off one point since the theme didn't fit the avatar at all, haha. It's quite a neat avatar, but it seems you could just put that theme with any female avatar. Thing I don't get is, why does this girl wear makeup and eye shadow if she's uninterested in attracting people? Anyway, I think the avatar itself is lovely. Just a couple tiny flickers I'd change.


k.k.razy
5/7
Grats Mini! I'm sad that this was the phobia that won. I don't think it was the best, but I'm glad that someone won. It's very appealing and I actually like the how the hair is used. If she's not looking for love, why is she so fancied up? She looks like she's got a really bad tan going on in the face too, a bit orange if you ask me. XD


John Reese
2/7
The avatar's totally off-theme, she could've picked Eremikophobia (fear of sand) or Drakonophobia (fear of dragons) instead she went with an idea that didn't match the avi, which sorta took away its creativity. She also used a set (Crimson Tatsu Scale armor) which many of us dislike.


Pregnant Barbie
?/7



Miss Blissy
6/7 I like the overall idea on this one, and the background really works. I actually like the use of that hair. It is a bit unoriginal in the way of colors, though.


Life Hath Immortality
?/7




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#6. Dare to Spy A Dragon



Bottle
3/7
This seems a little unfinished. Though, I like where it was headed, there seems to be something missing. The color of the vest is killing me. Some nice item combinations in this one though.


k.k.razy
3/7
Grats Fae! Hmm, I haven't decided if I like this one or not. (Omg Raz doesn't like a brown avi? ;OO) Well I do /like/ it but, it's not special in any way. Just an average steampunky avi with a new background thrown on. I don't like what was done in the torso either. I do like how the avatar is connected to the background though.


John Reese
1/7
Aww come on! I submitted an entry with the same theme. The browns don't even match.


Pregnant Barbie
?/7


Miss Blissy
4/7 I do like the face and the overall idea, but there's nothing on this avi that really pops. The browns are a bit off, and it's quite simple.


Life Hath Immortality
?/7




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#7. The Janissary


Bottle
3/7
Very neat, but not near as good as his Barbary Corsair. It's nice to see some unique item combinations, but they seem pretty out of place. The flow is pretty broken up, and there was no attempt to balance colors and clutter.



k.k.razy
3/7
I have a really hard time liking Social's avatars for some reason. I enjoy the personality that is conveyed in them, but they just aren't... pretty? Idk... I guess it fits the theme. I just find myself having to really think about things I like about it, and that shouldn't be what I have to do.


John Reese
1/7
The idea is well thought out I'd give him that but the avi just sucks. Nothing matches, I mean nothing, not one shade of color matches the other.


Pregnant Barbie
?/7



Miss Blissy
4/7 Eh. The face is nice, but the color isn't spread around and the torso looks cluttered.



Life Hath Immortality
?/7




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#8. Hector Renard


Bottle
5/7
Added a point for the descriptive setting. :3 Nice to see a really unique color scheme. Who would have thought argyle socks, gym shorts, and a work harness could go together? It's a little plain, but I woudn't want it to be overly crowded given the theme. Fine work.



k.k.razy
3/7
Yey, the 2nd war hero. This reminds me of that movie.. yaknow? whats it called again... Anyway, the matching is alright. I like the setting created by the rock, and it's not out of place looking.


John Reese
2/7
It looks too plain, and there's nothing special about it. I don't see why it is any better than the other entries from its group.


Pregnant Barbie
?/7



Miss Blissy
5/7 Loving this face! However, the colors are simple and not all that unique. I usually like Lilith's avis, but this one isn't the best.


Life Hath Immortality
?/7




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#9. Florid


Bottle
5/7
I like this one way more than the color clutter tattoo layered avatars we have been getting. There's a few colors in it to tweak. Why the Magical Girl's wand? I'm happy to see that most of the items used worked well together.


k.k.razy
3/7
* seizes* Hmm, I don't like it. Looks like she fell in a box of melted crayons. There's a bunch of every color but nothing really matches. Not only that, but the textures don't even match or even go well together. It looks better with a white background, who do people use anything but white arrggg.


John Reese
2/7
Maybe if she only used a few colors to coordinate the avi then it will look more classy than a bunch of "colorful crap".


Pregnant Barbie
?/7



Miss Blissy
4.5/7 It looks nice, but the goggles and wand are out of place and it's been done (and won) before.


Life Hath Immortality
?/7




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#10. WHAT THE...



Bottle
1/7
It's lame and we've seen it done multiple times.


k.k.razy
1/7
Omg, someone take this child to 4chan. It's a ***** BEAR not a ***** moose. *facepalm*


John Reese
2/7
I think she should've included the word **** at the end of her title. There's nothing special about it compared to the other "a** shot" avi's.


Pregnant Barbie
?/7



Miss Blissy
1/7 Really? Another one? And here's another guy who's just excusing her lame win with "ur just jealous haha i won". That really bugs me...


Life Hath Immortality
?/7


Bottle


Bottle

PostPosted: Fri Apr 02, 2010 10:07 pm


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How well was the person, character, scene, etc captured? And let's hope it hasn't be done a million times before!


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#1. Pokemon Expert


Skyscraper Opera
7/7
I'm being a little biased, but this is my favorite Pokemon cosplay of all time! It's original and fresh (and old and wrinkly). I'm glad it's wasn't a Pokemon (legendary or not) or main protagonist. Generic trainers need love too ; A ;

Bottle
?/7



Life Hath Immortality
?/7




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#2. Pokemon #491 - Darkrai


Skyscraper Opera
5/7
What is this I don't even...
This is like the fourth one to win. It is better than the last ones, but it's starting to grow old



Bottle
?/7



Life Hath Immortality
?/7




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#3. Mulan


Skyscraper Opera
4/7
I hate that she used a hybrid of two reference pics, and I totally don't remember what happened in the movie, but I do know this has placed before. Mushu being in there is fine, but using the Fallen Wish is pushing it too far; it doesn't look anything like the cricket. The fan is acceptable since the only yellow fan on Gaia would look way out of place. The blue part of her sash should extend a bit farther down.



Bottle
?/7



Life Hath Immortality
?/7




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#4. Poe Sister Meg


Skyscraper Opera
5/7
It's a nice attempt, but it isn't perfect. I'm quite neutral on this. The forehead and body are bothering me.



Bottle
?/7



Life Hath Immortality
?/7




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#5. Leela - Futurama


Skyscraper Opera
6/7
Accurate, yes. Not much to critique on here.



Bottle
5/7



Life Hath Immortality
?/7




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#6. Jack of Blades


Skyscraper Opera
5/7
From Google it looks like he's missing masks around the torso. Maybe a P. Urn could've solved that problem. I also don't understand the multiple swords...I'm gonna assume he's a melee fighter or something. Not sure if this would layer, but there's an arm band pose on the Reve Rouille. That arm armor is purple D8


Bottle
?/7



Life Hath Immortality
?/7




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#7. Karai Gakupo - Vocaloid


Skyscraper Opera
I took off the score because of laziness of gender changing unless virtu-Gackt wants some baby making hips. It would have looked great if it was a male base (I tried it out). Male bases need some love too. Gray Torque top would've looked nice too. There are pointier shoes than those too. That jacket is such a strong purple s:



Bottle
?/7



Life Hath Immortality
?/7




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#8. I Love You Chikorita!


Skyscraper Opera
4/7
This one isn't too different than the one that placed earlier, but it looks worse. FACE DOES NOT MATCH REFERENCE FFFFFFFFf. How in the world could you mess that up? The details on the hat need to be adjusted.



Bottle
?/7



Life Hath Immortality
?/7




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#9. Trident Layers


Skyscraper Opera
6/7
Creative idea and approach, but it's far too simple. I mean, it's only three items, two of which are the same.



Bottle
?/7



Life Hath Immortality
?/7




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#10. Jolteon the Lightning Pokemon


Skyscraper Opera
4/7
I SWEAR IF I SEE ANOTHER EEVEELUTION...Bottle might give me the boot. Been done, and that green glitch is killing it more.



Bottle
?/7



Life Hath Immortality
?/7

PostPosted: Fri Apr 02, 2010 10:08 pm


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Our favorites for the upcoming week! Best of luck to these contestants!
I'm also posting Fashun entries in here. But not group entries - there's too many. o.< Look in the AA advertising sticky to vote for all your Fashun mates!


Original

To Be Edited


Cosplay

To Be Edited

Bottle


Bottle

PostPosted: Fri Apr 02, 2010 11:05 pm


You may post now. :3


To all the raters, please give me a little blurb kinda like the one I did there. Include any arena experience you may have (doesn't matter if you don't have any), how you rate (easy/harsh), and what you look for in the avatars!


Tsu and John: You still up for it? I'd really like you to be. Since I kinda went on this 7 theme assuming you both are joining. xDDD
PostPosted: Fri Apr 02, 2010 11:06 pm


*runs around the thread*
WWWWWWWWEEEE
razzyy likee

Its my bed time sorry

I don't want to write my blurb, you do it for me bottle D;

k.k.razy
Crew

Fashionable Elder


Bottle

PostPosted: Fri Apr 02, 2010 11:08 pm


Done! ;D
PostPosted: Fri Apr 02, 2010 11:09 pm


Oh yea?
I can play that game to

*crew powers*

k.k.razy
Crew

Fashionable Elder


Miss Blissy

PostPosted: Fri Apr 02, 2010 11:10 pm


I love the theme, Bottle! Great graphics...
Blurb:
I've been in the arena quite a bit, and I know what I like in an avi. It pretty much has to match, and I'll love it a whole lot more if there is some sort of theme, and not just a bunch of random items of the same color thrown on. I also look for balance and creativity - if I've seen it before, I'm not gonna like it. I like to think that I rate things... semi-harshly? I'm not going to hesitate to say if I hate something, at least. But I won't hesitate to say if I love something!
PostPosted: Fri Apr 02, 2010 11:10 pm


Not fair!

Bottle


k.k.razy
Crew

Fashionable Elder

PostPosted: Fri Apr 02, 2010 11:11 pm


Do they really have braille monitors? O>O

Edit: don't answer that..
PostPosted: Fri Apr 02, 2010 11:14 pm


Wow, Raz.


Thanks for the quick reply, Blissy! <3

Bottle


Miss Blissy

PostPosted: Fri Apr 02, 2010 11:15 pm


Bottle, just wondering about the rating symbol choices... any particular reason that an orange is better then cherries?
Edit: I'm bored waiting for my sheets to dry before I can go to bed, so I'm on here...
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