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When Hope Comes Falling-(Critique my song, s'il vous plaƮt?

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The cello ninja

PostPosted: Sun Mar 28, 2010 7:50 pm


When Hope Comes Falling

Your feelings are given out freely
They lack sincerity,
They're content with your lies,
But I hate your transparency

I reject your fake sentiments of empathy
I'm sorry,
I'm just too attached to my misery

When the earth turns
This is what you see
You may think differently,
But I don't care if you believe me

As the sand falls,
Your hope goes with it
What makes you think that you can beat this

If the clouds start rolling in,
You know who's to blame
We know what this world's made of:
Desire, cruelty, and fame

My chains are too strong to break free
I can't help you,
You're just too detached from this world's severity

When the earth turns
This is what you see
You may think differently,
But I don't care if you believe me

As the sand falls,
Your hope goes with it
What makes you think that you can beat this

I won't indulge in these lies anymore,
But feel free to wash your memories clean
They'll contradict you,
You'll pretend they were unseen

When the earth turns,
You refuse to see
Deny it all you want,
But this why you aren't me

As the sand falls,
Your hope goes with it
What makes you think that you can beat this
Because you can't
You can't
You can't
You can't
You can't
PostPosted: Wed Mar 31, 2010 4:31 pm


tre bien! ((Very good en au francais)) It's excellent!. What tune do you sing the song to?

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The cello ninja

PostPosted: Wed Mar 31, 2010 4:36 pm


it's sort of this medium paced rock beat... on the cello. XD
PostPosted: Thu Apr 01, 2010 5:45 pm


Awesome

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The cello ninja

PostPosted: Thu Apr 01, 2010 5:59 pm


thanks XD <3
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