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Kaze Taco

PostPosted: Mon Mar 01, 2010 3:13 pm


This post is for the human being possessed by Laocoon

Name: Gustave Chapman

Nicknames: Gus (only his parents call him Gustave)

Age: 19

Birthday: May 24

Sign: Gemini

Blood Type: A

Fav. Food: Fettucini Alfredo

Hated Food: Ground Beef

School: Sovereign Heights

Hobbies: Forensics- No, not the corpse kind... public speaking! Gus has been on one Forensics team or another for many years, and though he doesn't place every time, he enjoys it a lot. It allows him to choose something that he isn't so secretive about, and discuss it openly. There's no questioning, no interruptions, just him giving his practiced (and practiced... and practiced...) speech to the world. He often seems his liveliest when he's on stage.

Political and Research Volunteer Work- You won't find Gus volunteering at the animal shelter or retirement facility. He prefers volunteering for causes that have goals that can be met. Whether it's raising $5,000 for research on a horrible disease, or helping a political candidate, he'll be there. He just prefers ones that have tangible goals. It's nice to make sure that cats are comfortable while they wait to be adopted, but it isn't goal-oriented like Gus prefers.

Computers- Gus loves computers. When his time isn't taken up by his other passions, Gus will have his head buried in circuits. He's baffled by the notion that HTML is difficult, and if he actually likes you, he'd be willing to teach you. He thinks of virus-hunting like a puzzle that needs solving, and enjoys finding ways to eradicate the nasty pests. The entire computer is a puzzle to him, and he enjoys opening it up and seeing how it works, how it can be improved, and how to piece it all back together.

Puzzles- Gus loves the satisfaction of solving a puzzle, whether it be a crossword, sudoku, maze, or something else. Like Ray Gordon could be good at adventuring with Guybrush Threepwood, Gus could be good at adventuring with King Graham. However, the difference between the two of them is that, while Ray Gordon can fly through it with no additional clicks, Gus has to use every single item on every single character. Will the obsidian gauntlet work on the second tree from the right? Will the moldy cheese work on the magic wand charger? (Oh wait...*)

Gemstone: Agate

Virtues: Passionate - If you get Gus talking about something that he believes in, political or even a hobby, he will talk about it with fire burning in his eyes. He is often seen at rallies for causes, like races for research or table-sitting for a certain candidate. When he has a chance to get involved in something that he's passionate about, he's up and ready to go, first in line! He's easily motivated by his passions, and works extra hard. This isn't just for political things, though. If a movie based off of one of his favorite books is coming out, he'll get up extra early to wait in line.

Decorous - Despite his flaws, Gus doesn't have trouble speaking eloquently or rubbing elbows in high society. He knows the proper terms for higher-ups, whether they be military or nobility. While he might get made fun of for talking like a Crystal girl, he is eager to improve this trait even more so it will help him in his future, career or otherwise.

Eggheaded - Okay, okay, so that's not the most positive word. Still, it works for him. He loves to play in computer circuit boards and, while he prefers Macintosh, he knows the ins and outs of Linux. He's a walking dictionary of common technological ailments, and is often one of the first people that someone will go to when their iPod won't turn on.

Flaws: Secretive - Gus' facade is a tough one to crack. Even a question like, "What are you up to?" is often met with an unfriendly gaze. He is a firm believer of 'mind your own business', and can easily and calmly say it to anyone, even his own family. When someone is visibly upset he will not bother them. Because of this, he is often viewed as cold. That isn't really it, he just doesn't want to 'butt in'. In his mind, he's giving the individual the same respect that he desires... well, it SOUNDS nice, anyway. If he's faced with someone who suddenly pours out their heart and past to them, he simply nods. He figures if he nods and makes the occasional noise, it will look like he is listening. However, he only does that because it will get them to stop talking to him faster.
If you want to crack his shell, the best bet is to wait until he's in the middle of one of his tantrums. He's incredibly weak, then, and easily manipulated. That, or you could always give him a drink (he's a lightweight).

Miserly - Gus is never one to give his spare change to the poor. He's been called "Scrooge" at least once, and isn't really phased by it. He believes that he earned his own money, and has no desire to be generous. He would rather sew a thousand patches on his pants before buying a new pair, and his mother has to force him into new shoes when his are threadbare. He believes that money is important, and shouldn't be wasted on things you don't need. Nothing should be wasted.This is also annoying when you're his friend, and it's your birthday party. He'd most likely buy you a tube of chapstick, or burn you a CD. If he likes you enough, he might get you a $5 iTunes giftcard. Damn!

Bullheaded - Say Gus had a firm believe that Neptune was the center of the universe (he doesn't). If you brought up your theories on the Sun being the center of the universe, he would listen and then abruptly shoot your theories down. It doesn't matter how ridiculous the notion is, if he believes in it, he will fight it. This gets very annoying in political discussions, which can often turn into shouting matches. He refuses to believe that his stances are wrong, and there are no exceptions. If all people whose names begin with "R" are evil Martians, there are no exceptions. Even if he dissects a girl named Rebecca and sees her inside anatomy... no. She is still an evil Martian. No ifs, ands, or buts.

If he ever got into something involving the senshi or Negaverse, this is very bad. First impressions mean a lot to him, and if he got it into his head that someone was a bad guy when they were the GOOD guys... almost nothing could convince him otherwise, short of a knife in his back by the real villain.

Ill-Tempered and Childish - It's easy to get Gus mad. Once you get him going, though, there's no turning back. The yelling will start, loud and passionate. If he gets even angrier (which is easy to do), he might throw something at a wall or punch the same poor, poor wall. It's better to just let him yell out his anger and then steam quietly in the corner like some small, angry child. If, after all of that, he just isn't left alone... he'll cry.

[*This is a reference to old-school adventure game King's Quest V. If you don't get it, don't worry about it.]

Physical Appearance
Hair: Chest-length, so straight that it looks like a sheet, parted in the middle, very simple. He has pale lavender hair.

Eyes: Hooded and usually half-lidded. His eyes are a dark, deep navy.

Skintone: Dark and dusky

Face: Thin and angular, with a strong chin

Physique: Broad-shouldered, but almost frighteningly skinny
PostPosted: Mon Mar 01, 2010 4:04 pm


The Cavalier

Cavalier: Laocoon, Parallel Cavalier of the Maze

Uniform: Up to Shazari

Hobbies: Being the Hero in Stories- Laocoon loves reading, but he's pretty picky. If Choose-Your-Own-Adventure novels existed in the Black Moon Kingdom, he read them all. Basically, he loves stories where he can be the main character, no matter the genre. He's filled the shoes of knights, murderers, suave romantics, and many others. It doesn't even matter if it's written in 2nd person or not, if he emphasizes with a character or can place himself in their position, then he'll read it. It makes reading really come alive for him.

Singing in the Bath- If he's on dry land, it doesn't matter if no one is around. Laocoon can only sing if he is in the privacy of his own bathroom, whether he's in a tub, shower, or some kind of basin. He doesn't really know how he sounds, as he sings quietly and (thankfully) no-one listens. He doesn't care, either, because his muse will instantly run away if anyone else treads in on his rub-a-dub-dubbing.

Creating Puzzles- Where Gus loves to solve puzzles, Laocoon loves to create them. He especially loves word puzzles and codes; if someone finds a random word left on a chair or wall, chances are that it's one of Laocoon's puzzles. He also enjoys creating drawing intricate traps and labyrinths for some wayward adventurer to wander into. That is, if a wayward adventurer would wander into a piece of notebook paper...

Virtues: Pokédex of Useless Information- Laocoon has a plethora of facts that generally have no purpose. Whether he gets his information from books (while searching for adventure books), from researching things related to puzzles, or from real-life experience... Laocoon has the perfect icebreaker random fact. For example, did you know that the oceans have over 230,000 species in their waters? Well, now you do.

Strategist- Maybe he was the general one-too-many times in his books, or maybe he played too many games of chess, but Laocoon considers himself to be a strategist. While some rush into battle without looking both ways, Laocoon stays behind to assess the situation. If he's going against someone in a Battleship tournament (if he found out that he missed one, he'd be sad), he would try his best to watch any of his opponent's prior games... or even watch how he prepares his lunch. Who knows? It could lend a clue!

Puzzle Master- Though Laocoon prefers creating puzzles, he's pretty good at solving them, too. He enjoys looking for logic behind a creator's choice, and loves how each puzzle has the 'flavor' of their creator. Just don't stick him in front of a sudoku puzzle, he hates them.


Flaws: Wallflower- While Gus won't divulge information because he's secretive, Laocoon won't do it because he's shy. He's intimidated by large groups of people, and at parties he will literally be against a wall. While he respects authority, it also makes him nervous. He listens to what his superiors have to say, but he does it with a knot in his stomach. It's hard to get him to talk to those that he views as 'above him', and will generally only speak to them if spoken to first.

Clinging Vine- To say that Laocoon is clingy is an understatement. He will target someone and suck the friendship from their bones until he's chafing at best, and an eyesore at worst. If you don't answer him, he'll keep on bothering you and bothering you until you do. See those 15 messages you have on your voicemail? They're all from him. ALL of them. This probably branches off from the fact that he doesn't like crowds, and is intimidated by meeting new people and authority.

Quick to Strategize, Slow to Draw a Sword [BATTLE WEAKNESS]- As mentioned above, Laocoon is a strategist. He loves to observe his enemies, and observe things from the way they fight to which shoe they put on first. It can be useful in battle, too, but Laocoon will postpone attacking as long as he possibly can. He hopes to just see one more move, to analyze for just one more moment. This leaves him open to all kinds of problems and attacks. He needs to learn when it's good to stop strategizing and to get out there and USE his gift!

Challenge: May Daedalus inspire my blade!

Kaze Taco


Kaze Taco

PostPosted: Mon Mar 01, 2010 4:46 pm


Why the Maze?

In Gustave and Laocoon you have the two integral parts of a maze: the Theseus and the Daedalus, the solver and the creator. Laocoon loves to create puzzles, and Gustave loves to solve them. Laocoon loves to strategize and think of hurdles, while Gustave loves to take things apart, tinker, and ultimately reach his goals. In this way they're a not-so-fancy yin and yang or coin-sides. That is how they can work past the differences in their personalities and weaknesses to ultimately mesh together as a true puzzle connoisseur.
PostPosted: Mon Mar 01, 2010 6:55 pm


One more reservation. x-x;

Kaze Taco


Never Crazy

Sugary Strawberry

PostPosted: Wed Mar 03, 2010 8:01 pm


Hey Kaze!

Droppin' a crit. <3

Gustave:

He sounds like a lot of fun, I'd really love to see him in action.

The way you described the flaws and virtues is well done, from far off it seems like he would be a little sour-face, but your descriptions help explain it.

I can't really find anything that negates each other here, you can probably put in another virtue to help fully flesh his personality out.

The only small issue I can see is with the hobbies. I understand that he's secretive but something that he can do with others can help. He does have teammates and volunteers, but I'm not sure a lot of others have the same hobbies and they can make a night out of it.

Laocoon:


He sounds adorable and I do enjoy that in characters, but it seems like Laocoon is almost too adorable, with no strong convictions aside from be a strategist. I'm not an expert on Cavaliers, but it seems like he's lacking a little in the strength department, which isn't a horrible thing, it can cause problems when he's patrolling alone though.

That said, some virtues altering a little and another flaw can help that. Also, when I read "Fish are Best In..." I didn't quite understand what it means. It means he's hygienic, right? (This could totally just be me though >___<;; )

I love the challenge. <3

The "Why the Maze" post is good, but expanding on it a little couldn't hurt. What can they learn from each other? You might also add a "Why Gustave?" post. Why would Alexandros pick Gustave to host Laocoon?

I admire the start here and love the direction you're taking both of them in. <3 Puzzle masters are love. o w o
PostPosted: Sun Mar 07, 2010 4:33 pm


Thanks so much for your crit. I've struck out the 'fish' virtue, and I'm thinking of another one that might aid a Cavalier more.

Kaze Taco

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