[I Just wrote while i thought so tell me what you think (:]
The snow falls for winters near, the angels sing for Jesus is hear, the air is cold though not warm, because Jesus is near, you dance you sing you feel the joy, you laugh and smile because of the year,the cold the light is all because Jesus is oh so near, you slip on a jacket and ear muffs to for its not warm its cold,you go outside you smile you spin you jump around a burst of energy you've never felt and its all because Jesus is near, you go to school with messy hair kids laugh and point, but you don't care for all is well because Jesus is near, at night its silent just your breathing you shut your eyes tight for you hear a light chuckle, the next morning you run down stairs and the air is fresh, the morning is great, the sun shines, theres joy in the air, and guess what its all because Jesus is near.
[ i want to become a writer when i'm older so i'll be posting many poems/storys and this is my first so probably not that well, but i need ur comments to help me fix them, such as bad grammar or boredom]
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