Zantetsken
I don't really understand the mouth... I think it should either be drawn better or have colour if it's supposed to be open. I think the collar bone is a mess and that it should be higher. The colouring and line art for the fur looks really rushed and messy... and the fur on the left isn't reaching as far as the fur on the right. The shading on the skin could be better.
It's a pretty decent picture overall, but it doesn't look like a finished piece of work.
yes the artwork isn't complete and yes I did rush on it.and the mouth I forgot to fix it DX thx for the advice :3
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