For those of you who care anough about wrighting, you know what a vignette is xD well i know im suppolst to do this in english and im wondering if its good anough so... comment on it? its called. "My Name"

My Name period 5 Ashley *Last name x]*
My name is unique but, very the same. It is like a single breeze in a storm. It is one of many and is very popular. When people hear my name, they see a tall blond girl, who plays soccer. Or a fashion obsessed girly-girl, with nothing better to do but surf malls. No I am not what one would expect from an Ashley, I am different but… the same. I am Ashley; I have plain brown hair with light blond streaks, like the suns melted gold on a dead oak forest. I ride motorcycles and I find it fun to randomly Slide down a hill, and get up laughing. If I trip, I get up giggling. I’m strange… but unique.

My middle name was voted in by my dad. He wanted me to be named Brooke, like a small stream. I would have been Brooke, but my mom’s convincing, like a wolf staring into your soul, you become ready to do anything, for it to spare you. My two different names, my first and middle, Show a lot toward natures beauty. The meaning for Ashley is an Ash Tree forest, or meadow. The Meaning for Brooke is a Brook of flowing water, or a small stream, but a peaceful one.

My Last name came from Wales. So I am Welsh. It is said that Wales found America before Columbus did. Some white Native Americans actually spoke Welsh. In recorded history there are approximately 45 immigrants from Wales to America. I am probably one of their descendants. Wales is known for its Mountains that touch the sky. The shadows of the mountains cast over the towns like a 1000 ft stone wall. It is very peaceful there, with its blue skies and large calm lakes, it’s astonishing that their flag is a Furious red dragon, on a field of green and white.

My Name is like a golden ring in a dark room, with a sliver of sun barely touching it. It shines. My Name is an ash tree forest with peaceful streams and mountains encircling it. If someone offered to let me change my name to something less popular, Id laugh and say my name is nothing like the other names. It’s my name.



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Thanks x] Ashley *last name goes here =]*