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 Posted: Thu Feb 04, 2010 3:39 pm
Hello everyone! I have been really lax in my drawing, and now I am trying to get back into doing it. So far, though, I am unsure how stuff looks, like if it is good or not. I'm trying to add details, but ugh. I am really hard on myself. Etc. Typical artist, I suppose. xD
So, here are some art. I'll post one every once in a while. What do you guys think about it?
Like almost all silly, n crazy 'kids', I desire to make a manga one day. Ahaha~
Three original characters of mine. A sensationalist news reporter, an Earthen War Commander, and an alien planet's Princess. A sketch I started on my sketchpad, but my scanner is really bad. I'm going to fix it up on PS, *hopefully*. -laughs-
The 2nd main male character of my story/plot. I tried working on some sort of flowy, action-esce scene... =X This has no plans to get colored yet. ._.
A Paint doddle of multiple characters in snow. I was really lazy. ^^
So, what do you guys think~? heart
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Posted: Fri Feb 05, 2010 9:31 am
Your attention to clothing details is pretty amazing. I also love the way you handle pencil lines in all your drawings. heart
In the first drawing, I have some problems with the anatomy. The war commander (the lady with the planet in her hand, right?) has a very strange looking face, even for this angle. Her chin should be pulled out more and her eyes are not on the same level. I'm not really loving the way the reporter's legs are situated. At such an angle, her right calf should be foreshortened more and placed behind her body in perspective.. Her foot is technically drawn correct, but I believe placed in the wrong area. The princess has pretty nice anatomy, but to me it looks like her legs are disjointed from her body. Once again, I think this is a problem with foreshortening, especially her right leg. Quite possibly, it may be too long as well.
The second drawing I believe is handled better than the first one. You definitely have a strong sense of gravity in this particular piece. My only complaint is his stance, it feels very awkward and jarring to the overall composition. I think it's also worth mentioning that based on his head and shoulders, the camera angle should be semi-aerial and to an angle, yet his feet do not agree with this. If you cover up the bottom half of his body, you could almost expect a completely different stance (and vise versa).
Third drawing is a cute doodle. XD
I definitely think you should work on your legs more. Not so much the anatomy of the legs themselves, but things like foreshortening and also practice drawing the legs along with hips, as one piece rather than two separate entities. Hope it all helps!
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Posted: Sat Feb 06, 2010 12:27 am
The details on the clothes look very nice. The outfits look interesting, too.
In the first picture... The lifted thigh seems a bit off for the girl on the left. I think it should be connected closer to the meeting point for those two lines under her belly button. There should be some space there, but I think you have too much of it, especially on that angle. For the girl on the right, I think something seems weird about the leg on the right... I can't tell if I think it's too long or if the awkward angle of her foot is throwing me off. I dunno if I'd even call it that awkward... maybe it seems turned in a bit too much.
In the second picture, his hands appear to be of noticeably different sizes. The position of his nose and mouth are also perhaps a bit off... And I think the thigh to our right looks too skinny compared to his other one and the rest of his body. The feet maybe seem a bit flat. The pose is sorta weird... I don't get what he's doing. The cape things look very nice, and the other details, too.
No real critique for the third picture, but it's cool.
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Posted: Sun Feb 07, 2010 4:50 pm
I enjoy the art, and my eye is always drawn around the page instead of just being rooted in one place. I agree with Kupocake, that the first pics' planet lady has a weird jawline, but other than that I see no problems.
And holy crap the last pic was done in PAINT?! *clap clap clap*
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Posted: Wed Feb 24, 2010 2:04 am
Brett KoZakku 95% of teens would panic if Edward Cullen was on a 250 foot building about to jump. Copy if you are of the 5% who brings popcorn, a chair, and shouts "DO A FLIP!" haha
legendary
just, legendary
xD
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