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 Posted: Sat Jan 30, 2010 12:41 pm
Hey everyone! im writing some poems and that about LOTR and i need sum suggestions for topics! if u could reply some that would be awesome!! biggrin
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Posted: Sat Jan 30, 2010 7:00 pm
you should write about the Shire or Rivendale
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MeroMerokono Vice Captain
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cTheAngelofMusic Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Jan 30, 2010 8:36 pm
i will wright a poem about the elves and Rivendell and there passing into the west.
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Posted: Sun Jan 31, 2010 1:32 pm
ooo~ make sure you post it! I can't wait to hear it!
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MeroMerokono Vice Captain
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cTheAngelofMusic Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Feb 01, 2010 2:35 pm
hey I am going to do it in parts so here is part 1:
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We are the Firstborn,The Children of Iluvatar.
The Ainur, The Holy ones that sprang from the thoughts
of Iluvatar,sang us into existance in the Ainulindale.
Witch Melkor Corrupted with his malice, and pride.
Into the dark night of middle-earth we came, lit only
with the light of the stars,That Varda Elentari of the Valar,
Queen of the stars made to lighten are path.
We, The Firstborn where doomed to come into the darkness
of Middle-Earth,and shall look first upon the stars.
Great light shall be for are waning. To Varda ever shall we
call at need. We dwelt by the water under the stars as are
first home,we walked the earth in wander. We gave names to
all things that we perceived.
The Quendi are we, 'those that speak with voices' for as yet we
had not meet any living thing that could speak or sing.
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that was just a part of what i have written so far,just to give u a taste.
i will keep writing and post the poem when im done
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Posted: Mon Feb 01, 2010 6:07 pm
yay! It's very good heart make sure you post it all please~! i want to hear more!
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MeroMerokono Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Feb 01, 2010 7:24 pm
FreedomFighter, I get the message....but I really don't get why it's a poem? I mean I know poems don't have to rhyme but............plus the spelling was terrible. Sorry sad Gl with next one
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Posted: Mon Feb 01, 2010 10:17 pm
thomulus FreedomFighter, I get the message....but I really don't get why it's a poem? I mean I know poems don't have to rhyme but............plus the spelling was terrible. Sorry sad Gl with next one I only miss spelled 1 word wrong. the rest is correct. and ur right it is technically not a poem,more of a ballad or story.
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cTheAngelofMusic Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Feb 03, 2010 12:36 pm
FreedomFighter0105 thomulus FreedomFighter, I get the message....but I really don't get why it's a poem? I mean I know poems don't have to rhyme but............plus the spelling was terrible. Sorry sad Gl with next one I only miss spelled 1 word wrong. the rest is correct. and ur right it is technically not a poem,more of a ballad or story. You spelled incorrectly existence, Witch should be Which, where should be were, are is our, are as our again, meet is met.....I'm very picky about that stuff
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Posted: Wed Feb 03, 2010 1:10 pm
thomulus FreedomFighter0105 thomulus FreedomFighter, I get the message....but I really don't get why it's a poem? I mean I know poems don't have to rhyme but............plus the spelling was terrible. Sorry sad Gl with next one I only miss spelled 1 word wrong. the rest is correct. and ur right it is technically not a poem,more of a ballad or story. You spelled incorrectly existence, Witch should be Which, where should be were, are is our, are as our again, meet is met.....I'm very picky about that stuff if u want to pick on peoples spelling and grammar go find a guild for that. or get over it.(and i say this in the up most respect.)
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cTheAngelofMusic Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Feb 07, 2010 9:38 am
i think it is very good freedom fighter
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Posted: Mon Feb 08, 2010 3:50 pm
yes, so please post more! I want to hear the rest!
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MeroMerokono Vice Captain
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cTheAngelofMusic Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Feb 08, 2010 4:32 pm
im working on the rest its alot to go through the history of the elves.
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Posted: Thu Feb 18, 2010 9:10 pm
here, I've written this one hope you like it!
One day, back in the realm of man,
A ranger stood bow drawn tight,
Around him stood an army of orcs,
He was ready for the fight
A shout rang out and the orcs tensed,
Sarumon raised his staff,
Yet the ranger wasn’t alone at all,
His companions joined him with a laugh
One was short with a long red beard,
Holding a heavy axe,
The other was tall and held a bow,
With pointed ears that can’t relax
Now this is a rare occurrence,
A dwarf beside an elf,
But after many adventures,
A change takes place in oneself
Now the battle began,
And swords clashed on shields,
Arrows went a fly,
Bodies littered the fields
The orcs began to fall,
And they gave out a cry,
An army charged against them,
Form a hidden place nearby
The orcs fled, outnumbered,
Sarumon screamed in rage,
The ranger yelled in victory,
Thus began a new age.
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cTheAngelofMusic Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Feb 19, 2010 8:10 am
Gimli son of Gloin: "I never thought I would die side by side with a elf."
Legolas Greenleaf son of Thingol, prince of Mirkwood: "How about side by side with a friend?"
Gimli son of Gloin: 'Aye, I can do that."
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