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PostPosted: Tue Jan 26, 2010 8:12 am


I drew this a while ago and I have this feeling that I did somthing wrong on it, but I can't put my finger on it. Any comments would be greatly accepted!

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PostPosted: Tue Jan 26, 2010 7:23 pm


I think I'd have his upper arm going over his chest rather than trying to squeeze through it. The hand to the left could maybe use a different pose entirely, such as being sideways. I dunno, I think it's a pretty good drawing overall, but there seems to be a certain "stiffness" or "lifelessness" about it. I'd be more helpful, but I have the same problem with my art. Maybe his upper body could be leaning forwards more to give a more ferocious look.

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