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Bapp Pogum

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Posted: Mon Jan 18, 2010 12:00 pm

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Posted: Mon Jan 18, 2010 12:04 pm

First one is definitely the best. If only for Norine. *LOL* She'd totally be an ensemble darkhorse.

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Posted: Mon Jan 18, 2010 12:17 pm

Thanks for looking through them, Meta!
If you got any suggestions you wanna add to the story, shoot away!

I'm going to try and add as many mythical creatures and legends into the story, and maybe a few extras, like time-traveller and ninja.

What does an 'ensemble darkhorse' mean?

Posted: Tue Jan 19, 2010 9:25 am

I'm loving the first one! The characters all see like they'd be fun to follow.

The other two have promise. I think the only reason the first one stands out more is that you've fleshed it out a little more than the other two. With some fleshing out of plot and characters the other two could be really cool also.

Norine does seem like a kick a$$ character..not familiar with an ensemble darkhorse, but she seems like she'd bring a lot to the Manga.

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Posted: Tue Jan 19, 2010 10:57 am

Here's the TVTropes page. Don't blame me if you get lost in there and never come out again.

Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 10:02 am

Bapp's 4th Idea

Hobbies: Being an idiot
Abilities: Extremely high amount of obliviousness
Weapon: True idiot power

Mwahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!!!!!!

*wipes tears from eyes*

I especially love the True idiot power!

You could combine this with D.I.D. I, but only if you wanted to turn that into a psychological with humor elements. If not then I'd leave them seperate. I guess it depends on how dark you want D.I.D. I to be.

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Bapp Pogum

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Posted: Thu Jan 21, 2010 1:04 am

Even if I left them seperate, I'm not very sure what I can make the protagonist do in the story.
I can't think of a goal, antagonist, theme etc.
Just the character ><

Posted: Sat Jan 23, 2010 2:11 pm

D.I.D. I.
But it reminds me of Othello.

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Bapp Pogum

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Posted: Mon Jan 25, 2010 3:28 pm

Othello is... real D.I.D.?

w00t! Finished the name for Chapter 1 of Paradox.
Now to work on another.

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