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PostPosted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 3:05 pm


(Something I whipped up a few days ago, it seems to be going well, at least that's what i see no one has some problems with it save for i capitalized red and that I'm posting the chapters fast)

Summary: I'm crapola with Summaries !! argh!!

"Good Morning!" A cheery female voice chirped through a small speaker on a bed stand, "It is 7:30 and traffic is back up going south bound going to the east coast! With Today's temperature in the high 80's early 90's it is a lovely day to go to the beach, pack the children up and have a good time!"

A dark Amber eye glazed with sleep opened, along with its twin. The eyes traveled over to the stand, and gave a hard stare to the small radio sitting on top of it. Just a simple cheap radio possibly bought in by a person for a donation, it was still an item of annoyance.

"Jade....." A female voice said, husky from sleep,"Jade! your radio....turn it off I'm trying to enjoy the last day of freedom, before we are shipped off to the prison camp!"

Another Female voice, this one higher than the first one mumbled something darkly, and then the radio was turned off,"You know Sammy, If you just fell asleep at lights out instead of reading those crappy books, you wouldn't be a grumpy goose in the mornings!"

The girl known as Sammy, turned her body, which was a little on the small side, to stare up at the source of voice. A tall Red headed girl with sparkling forest green eyes, a curvy figure, wearing jean shorts that showed of long slender legs, and a ripped tank top that also exposed a slim torso smiled down at her, putting earrings on, her make-up already applied, and her hair styled, the girl that every 15 shoots to be.

"Jade...."Sammy said sitting up rubbing her eyes,"I don't need a mother 'kay?"

Jade frowned at her and then walked off past a row of beds saying,"breakfast is in ten minutes, you better hurry before all that is left is stale cornflakes and grapefruit juice."

Sammy sneered at that and climbed out the bed, her skinny five foot body covered in a long shirt that had something about a fair on it. Sammy quietly grabbed her bath things and went to the bathroom. After a quick cold shower, she put on a pair of jeans, and a shirt, brushed her waist length black hair and put it in a braid. She quickly ran out the bathrooms, and to her bed area, slipping on her tattered sneakers and grabbing a worn out book with 'Lord of The Rings' on the covers in black worn out letters, and ran out the large room, down a hallway, down a flight of stairs to a eating hall, where she took a seat beside Jade and said, "See, just in time for real food!"

"Not Really," Jade said eating a cinnamon roll,"All the rolls are gone, and all that's left is cereal, look on the bright side, it's not cornflakes!"

Sammy groaned at the sight of bran flakes saying,"shoot!" grabbing a bowl,"This orphan gig kinda sucks!"

Sammy lived in Happy Rainbows Orphanage, a home for older children, and she had been here for nearly seven years, in a few weeks, it'll be her 18th birthday. Sammy had lived in orphanages all her life. While she may be the oldest orphan in the home, she was the smallest, mostly due to poor nutrition, the other orphans had made it hard for her to eat. The past homes she lived in she had been constantly picked on and teased, alone with only the company of books. At Happy Rainbow, the children like her especially Jade who was like her younger sister, but still she was shy most of the times reading.

Sammy poured milk on the cereal and started eating opening her book and reading, her eyes reading the text quickly. Jade frowned and said,"what 18 year old spends her time reading, when she can be looking at cute boys! oh! T.J is looking at me!"

Sammy looked up seeing Jade smiling at a built boy or 16 with wild brown hair and blue eyes, who in turned smiled back at her. Sammy rolled her eyes and said,"He's only interested in your
breast." earning a sound from Jade.

"No he isn't!" Jade said finishing her meal, "we are going to be at a camp for 2 months! I think me and T.J are going go steady!"

Sammy shook her head saying,"Okay....."resuming her reading, ignoring the looks Jade gave her.

"Oh! Sammy! Steve is looking at you!!" Jade squealed softly waving off the dirty looks the others girls were giving Sammy,"Oh! he's much cuter than T.j!"

Sammy looked up seeing Steve, a long slender fellow who could break you in two. He had long black hair that was always tied up to show those violet eyes that could melt the hearts of even the toughest girls. Steve smiled softly at her, got up and went over to Sammy and said,"I see you are eating cereal....here have my roll" passing the plate to Sammy.

Sammy blinked saying,"no thanks, bran flakes are good enough for me," making a point to eat a big spoonful.

"Sammy!" A woman called out from outside the hall,"Can you come see me for a minute!"

Sammy closed her book saying,"Sorry um...Sean but I gotta go see Miss H. see you later?" walking out the eating hall leaving a confused Steve,and a fuming Jade who said,"that girl is missing out on some hot stuff!!"

The only thought that went through Sammy's head was,"Oh boy, summer vacation what a blast..."

((how'd you like it!!! it's gonna get exciting soon next chapter, the talk and off to camp!!))
PostPosted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 3:27 pm


Sammy made her way down the short hall tot the open area that Miss H. called an office. Sammy knocked on the entryway of the office saying,"Miss H. you wanted to see me?"

Miss H. was a unique woman. Unlike many social workers that work like robots, she was one of those rare ones that didn't like bureaucracy, always making sure that what ever is needed at the home is taken care of. She was in her mid forties, with short choppy graying blond hair, she had black eyes that wee hidden behind a pair of thick black polka-dotted glasses. she wore a pair of ripped ragged jeans, a Styx t-shirt, and sneakers that were always covered in dirt. She was Sammy's mentor also, she had help her apply for colleges, and helped her in her classes.

Miss H. smiled nervously saying,"You have a letter from North University!" holding an envelope up,"I'm nervous Sammy open it!"

Sammy smiled saying,"Isn't suppose to me that gets nervous?" grabbing the letter, "I hope I get in, I did well in the college testing!"

"Well let's stop hoping and see that acceptance letter!" Miss H. said as Sammy tore open the envelope.

Sammy took a deep breath and took the letter out, unfolding it and scanning it, her smile faltering.

"Well! did you get in huh?!" Miss H. asked bouncing on her toes excited.

"I-I-" Sammy started her voice cracking, tears blurring her vision.

"Sammy?" Miss H. asked as the letter dropped from Sammy's hands, and said girl running out the office,"Sammy! wait sweetie!"

Miss H. walked over to the fallen letter, picked it up and read it quickly, putting a hand over her mouth,"Oh dear..." following after Sammy.

Sammy lay in the tight space of the hidden closet she found years ago, sobbing softly, whimpering, "It's not fair! It's not fair! why not me!"

Sammy turned away when the small door opened and Miss H. appeared in the dim light.

"Hey Sammy, come now sweetie, we have other colleges to look forward to. So what if North University wants athletic students, poo on them! their lost is another college's gain! They're passing the chance to have a witty, and intelligent young woman grace their walls, Sammy you are at the top of your class. you can go anywhere you want to right now. Tell you what I know someone at North Star University, the school for the elite, I'll make a call to him, and see if he can't squeeze an application for you."Miss H. Said smiling softly.

"But only super smart people go their, I'm just a orphan." Sammy said sitting up wiping her eyes.

"Don't let the fact that you have no parents stop you, I betcha by the end of the camping trip, you'll have an interview, and then you'll finish your final year of high school," Miss H said with a smile,"You are a shining star Sammy, you have been for nearly 19 years of my life."

Sammy smiled saying,"Thanks Miss H." hugging the woman, "I'm nervous though."

"It's alright to be nervous, but don't let that stop you from having a good time at camp, it's the last you'll be going as a camper, next time you'll be a helper!"

Sammy groaned saying,"no please don't!" earning a chuckle from Miss H. who petted her head and said,"now go and have fun!"

Sammy climbed out the closet, and ran down the hall saying,"Thanks Miss H.!"

Miss H. replied with a,"Your welcome sweetie! Oh! don't forget to pack some clothes with your books!"

"Will do Miss H.!!" Sammy yelled back from down the halls.

"Shoot, shoot!" Sammy growled stuffing clothes in the large duffel bag,"Oh why did I have to read War and Peace last night!"

"Cause you said you were bored yesterday afternoon during the going away cook-out, even though Steve was trying to talk to you, and pick up that tome and didn't put it down until like four this morning!" Jade sighed locking her make-up carrier,"Your such an air-head! With your head stuck in them damn books! I don't why I put up with you!"

Sammy feigned a sad look and said,"Jade my heart!" grabbing her chest and faking sobs,"I am torn and hurt by your words, which you tell me like 24/7!"

"Yeah well in about five minutes if you don't have your stuff packed, you'll be at Lake Tuckaway with no panties and ten dozen books to wear as clothes!" Jade said earning a "Crap!" from Sammy.

Sammy turned her head as Jade chatted lively about her and T.j at the cook-out.The group on the bus which was on the way to the camp.

"And then he took his pinkie finger out and wiped mustard off the side of my mouth saying I was too pretty to have any stains on my face! isn't that cute Sammy?!"

Sammy nodded her head saying,"yep, sure is....."taking out another book to read.

"Ugh!" you and your reading!" Jade huffed turning to talk to another girl while Sammy's mind drifted off to far away lands, where the heroes always won and they were able to over come any trails that came their way.

It couldn't have been more than three hours when Jade shook her roughly saying,"We're hear! Lake Tuckaway! come on let's hurry and pick our cabin!!"

Sammy smiled softly and got up with Jade walking off the bus and going in search for the perfect cabin or one that suited Jade's taste.

((there ya go! chapter two!!))

Booty Popping


Booty Popping

PostPosted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 3:29 pm


((Okay, so I am posting all the chapters I do have now!! which is like two but its really five!!))

Sammy stood on the dock that led the way to the crystal clear Lake Tuckaway frowning. It was a nice cool day, one that could be spent reading a nice novel in or under a large oak tree, with a large glass of lemonade. however, was she enjoying a good book, or a refreshing drink. Nope, instead she on the dock with Jade who decided today would be a good day to go swimming.

"Come on bookworm!" Jade said taking off her clothes, leaving her in only a hot pink bikini, "the water should be nice and cool!"

"Do you know how many germs and tiny micro-organisms living in that water that could get you very ill!" Sammy said peering into the water, "No thanks, I will take my chances on the dock, with my book!"

Jade growled, grabbed Sammy by her arm, ignoring the loud protest from said girl, and threw her into the water.

Sammy shrieked as the cool water hit her bare skin. Sammy swam up to the surface and said spitting out water,"You know....you could have said please, and I would have gone into the water."

Jade jumped in beside Sammy, broke the surface and said,"Sometimes my dear, I have to push you!" Splashing Sammy starting a water war between the two girls, their giggles and screams drifting over the lake's surface.

It was mere moments later, that both girls laid floating on their backs, hands clasped together staring up at the blue sky, enjoying the sounds of birds singing.

"We've been here for two weeks," Jade said her eyes closed, "T.j asked me to meet him tonight by the canoes, he wants you to come too!"

Sammy frowned turning her head to the girl floating beside her,"why?! I would be like the third wheel to you two!"

"Steve is coming too, he wants to see you,"Jade said smiling at Sammy's innocent look,"goodness, have you been blind for like six months, have you not seen the looks he gives you during meals, or when he's in the study room-no you wouldn't, your so busy reading!"

Jade quickly shifted so that she was swimming beside Sammy he face serious,"He likes you a lot, he came to me yesterday and asked me all about you, he gave you that book your reading now, what's it called?"

"Lord of the Rings?" Sammy asked blinking,"Oh yes, I did see a brand new copy on my bed, I thought you got it for me..."

"You are a ditz!" Jade groaned swimming to the docks, "I have like three hours to prepare for our meeting, I found a dress for you to wear, I'll put some make-up on ya and you'll shine like a princess!"

Sammy groaned saying,"I'll look like a clown, you can't do anything right!"

Jade did a good job on her, Sammy mused spinning in the yellow dress Jade put on her, for a rare moment, letting herself feel like one of the pretty girls in the home.

Jade came over to her, hugged her tightly saying,"By the end of the night, we should have brand new cute boyfriends!"taking her pinky finger and fixing a spot on Sammy's eye, "There you go!"

Sammy frowned saying, "I don't see why?" snatching her black jacket, as the two ran out the cabin, "We have to be back before check in!"

The two girls made their way to the canoe area, and didn't have to wait long for the boys to arrive, and it didn't take long for Jade and T.j to be busy in other activities. Sammy herself perched on an upturned canoe, playing with a string on her jacket. Steve sitting beside looking out to the lake.

"It's a lovely night," Steve said to Sammy who made a sound of agreement, nodding her head to him, "Uh...you look beautiful tonight Sammy."

Sammy turned to Steve saying,"Thanks? I guess,"playing with the string more,"It was all Jade's idea, she put this gunky stuff on me and then this dress, I don't like wearing dresses my legs are kinda hairy and al-"

Sammy was stopped in her rambling by a pair of slightly chapped lips pressing on hers. Sammy gasped her eyes getting big as a hand grabbed her thigh, squeezing it tightly. Sammy whimpered, and then pushed Steve away saying, "I, no, I gotta go!" Getting up and running off.

Sammy ran past the lake into the forest, running until her legs gave out, and she was breathing hard, sweat stinging her eyes.

Sammy groaned saying,"Smooth, your first kiss, and you run away like a wimp!" getting up to her feet, looking around, "And now, I don't know where the hell I am!"

Sammy sighed and started to walk, from where she ran.

Sammy paused hearing a twig snap. Shrugging her shoulders, thinking it was a wild animal, Sammy continued to walk, until the snapping got louder.Sammy paused and turned looking around, and turned to walk forward, when she ran into Steve, causing her to shriek loudly.

"Whoa! calm down!" Steve said grabbing Sammy who was holding her chest heaving,"I went after you when you ran off like that!"

"Jerk! You jerk!" Sammy growled kicking Steve's shin causing him to grunt in pain, "You could have made a sound or something!!"

"Sorry!" Steve said rubbing his shin gently, "Geez, you got me good!" looking up to the sky,"I think we are lost, I don't know this part of the forest, we're suppose to stay on the trails."

Sammy peered into the woods, an paused seeing a dim blue light in the forest,"Maybe that's like a light of something, come on let's go over there!"

Steve rub his head saying,"I think maybe we shouldn't I'm getting this bad vibe you know."

Sammy frowned saying, "It's a light, it might lead us to a road!"walking to the light.'

Mumbling Steve followed Sammy to the dim light, that got brighter and brighter as they got closer to it.Steve and Sammy stop short and gasped as they came face to face with a waterfall, the large falling water glowing blue.

"Weird..."Sammy said going over to the edge of the still waters near the waterfall,"There must be like a light in the water or something."

"Wait!"Steve said going over to Sammy, "It could be dangerous!"

Sammy peered over the edge, seeing just her reflection. Sammy smiled softly, turning to Steve saying, "See! nothing bad!"

Steve's' eyes got round as a hand came up from within the glowing water, grabbing Sammy's jacket hood, Sammy's eyes getting big as she turned to the hand that gripped her clothes.

"Sammy!" Steve roared, grabbing said girl by her arm, as she was pulled into the water, thus pulling him into it also.

Steve felt an immense amount of pressure, a loud rushing in his ears.What could have been only mere seconds, or long hours, there was nothing but blackness, and then a bright light, and then darkness as he lost consciousness, his hand still holding tightly to Sammy.
PostPosted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 3:31 pm


Sammy opened her eyes wide, sitting up quickly, looking around the area. She was in a wood area, it looked almost the same like the woods She and Steve went in, except for the face that it was now bright, and the sun was shining down, giving her a pleasant warmth. Sammy smiled pausing to let the sun cover her.Sammy quietly stood up on her feet, and walked away from Steve's prone body. Sammy frowned seeing the same waterfall, there was water in , but the water was quickly disappearing.

"No...no, no!!" Sammy exclaimed, quickly wading into the water, "Oh no!! stop! stop draining!!" digging her fingers into the water bed,"Please stop no!!"

When the water was alll gone, she continued to dig in the mud, saying,"No! We have to go back! We have to go back!"

Sammy let out a growl, quickly turning to see Steve standing near the area, staring at her. Sammy made her way to the young man saying,"The way we got here, it's gone! How are we going to get back to the camp!"

Steve gently put his hands on Sammy saying,"Hey, hey, what I want you to do, is calm down, okay? We will find our way out of this okay, I promise, okay?"

Sammy breathed softly, closing her eyes, and said,"Okay Steve, I just wished I knew where we were."

Steve helped wipe mud off of Sammy and said, "Yeah, where ever we are, we can't go back the way we came, come on, I saw a trail behind those bushes, maybe we can find a road..."

Sammy nodded her head, and Steve led her to a dirt path that twisted and winded into the forest.

"Oh goodness!" Sammy said after a few hours of walking, "I need to sit Steve" her body slumping on a rock, "I can't go any farther, my feet feel like they're gonna fall off!!"

Sammy quickly pulled her shoes off and started to rub them wincing slightly as she did. Sammy was so busy she was shocked as Steve pulled her feet gently away from her hands and started to rub the tin foot with his large hand.

"You feel better now?" He asked rubbing the curve of Sammy's foot, earning a keening sound from said girl.

"Oh yeah!!!" Sammy purred wiggling her toes, "you have hands of gold! I think I'm in love with you!"

Steve paused his ministration, and said, "You do?" smiling softly at the girl's rapidly red face.

"Uh...no...I mean, your hands feel good!" Sammy stammered pulling her foot away from Steve's hand, "I feel better now, we should continue walking!"

Steve watched as Sammy pulled her shoes on saying,"Okay yeah, we have to find a way out."

Sammy stood up and the two started to walk again. Sammy hummed softly swinging her arms saying,"Hey Steve-o! I'm hungry, you have any candy?!"

"no...I do not." Steve said,"Hey I see a berry bush," Pointing to a large bush covered in bright red berries, "I think they might be raspberries or something."

Sammy made an odd noise and ran over to the bush, and started to eat with wild abandonment. Steve frowned and came over as well, an started to eat albeit, slower than Sammy.

Sammy sighed grabbing another berry, stopping short when she saw a white and yellow stripe tail wag furiously in the bush.

"Oh....a cat," Sammy said getting on her hands and knees, and crawling into the bushes, Steve crying out at the girl.

Steve watched as the bushes shook, and then loud 'mews!' and Sammy saying, "Aw!" before climbing out backwards, in her left hand a small kitten. This kitten however looked like a white lion, with a large bushy striped tail, and wide golden eyes.

"It's adorable!" Sammy said nuzzling it earning a purr, "It was shaking and shivering, I think we'll let it stay with us!"

"uh...I don't think I'll object!" Steve said as the Cat jumped on Sammy's shoulder mewing.

"Come on Steve, we have to find a way out of the woods!" Sammy said walking down the path, the kitten mewing loudly in agreement. Steve sighed staring at the two before following behind her.

Booty Popping


Booty Popping

PostPosted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 3:34 pm


"Oh look!" Sammy said running back to Steve pointing to a clearing in the forest, "There's a cottage nearby! Maybe we can get some food, and something to drink!" Tugging hard at Steve's arm, "Hurry up slowpoke!"

The kitten mewed in agreement, as Sammy pulled Steve over to a small, white cottage with a wood work on the front, flowerbeds on the window stills, with flowers blooming in them. The windows were open wide and dust was flying out of them, someone inside mumbling,"Goodness, bloody dust, if it were not for my asthma, I wouldn't be doing this!"

Sammy turned to Steve, who shrugged his shoulders and the two walked over to the open door. Steve peered into the open way and said, knocking on the side,"Hello? Uh...anyone here?!"

Sammy hit Steve on his arm saying,"You dummy, of course there's someone here, or the house wouldn't be open!"

Sammy was about to say something else, but there were heavy thumps on the stairs they could see, and a woman appeared, in a dress that looked like something from the middle ages, glasses perched on a pointy nose, with black eyes scanning around, she was short, and and round, and she had graying red hair in a messy bun.

Sammy smiled nervously saying,"Uh...hello?" waving her hand at the woman who gave them an odd look.

"Goodness, you two hurry!" She said pushing the two into the house, slamming the door shut, and latching it shut,"In you go! Lad, go and shut the windows and shutters, hurry!"

Steve did as he was told, closing all the windows, and shutting the white shutters over the windows. The woman led Sammy to a small door, opened it and said,"climb in both of you."

Sammy squawked as Steve pushed her and him into the closet, the kitten mewing in protest.
Sammy grabbed the kitten, and dropped him softly on the floor, as Steve closed the door.

They had just made it into the closet, when the front door was thrown opened, and someone came in with fast heavy footsteps,

Sammy and Steve pressed their ears up against the door hearing,muffled voices, heavy scrapping of something moving across the floors. Sammy and Steve both looked down at the crack underneath the door, and their eyes widened, as shadowed footsteps walked near the door, a hand grabbed the knob and turned it, but stop and slowly walked away.

There a few long minutes, and then the woman opened the door, saying,"Come on out you two, I am sorry for what I had to do...If it was not for that, -achoo!- kitten, you would have been caught, the both of you!"

Sammy frowned as they climbed out the closet,"Why did we have to be pushed into the closet?"

"Well, the Queen she has been looking lately for a maiden and a young lad, She has swept through the whole kingdom, taking them off to the palace, she has not told us why she did it but it started after the red moon."

Steve sat down in a chair, Sammy sitting in another one, the kitten climbing into her lap. "So" he started rubbing his face,"We get pulled into some water, land into a world where a queen is after a boy and a girl and we could be her next victim...I was just expecting a few months at a summer camp, get a swim in, eat smores, maybe slip away with...a certain someone and steal a few kisses, not this."

Sammy felt her face heat up at what he said, and she said,"well, I, on the other hand, am glad that we are not in that camp! There's no air, yucky lakes, and you're outside! case closed!"

The woman blinked saying,"Camp? getting pulled into some water, oh no! not the springs of light! You need to see the Wizard."

"Wizard?" Sammy said perking up at the word,"Steve! It's like Lord of The Rings! An epic journey, where we defeat evil at the end and we go home! See, we'll be back at the camp soon!"

"I don't know..."Steve said looking down at the wooden table, hid finger tracing a leaf pattern,"Something about this place...it doesn't feel right, you know, this place, I feel odd about it."

Sammy sighed rubbing the kitten's head and said,"Look Steve, we have to try something, "I mean, we can't go back through the springs thingy! the water is all gone, we could go and talk to the wizard person, maybe he can help us, it's the least we can do."

Steve rose an eyebrow,"And If her can't help us?"

Sammy shrugged her shoulders saying,"Well then we learn to churn butter, because we'll be stuck here!"

Steve rubbed his face again and then said,"Shoot, alright! We'll go see the wizard!" His head turning to the woman,"So...where can we find this 'wizard'?"

"You won't be leaving anytime soon, it's getting dark!" The woman said bustling around in a kitchen area,"I'll whip you two up something to eat, then you two can go to sleep, I'll show you the way to the wizard early in the morning, it's about a half day walk from here."

Sammy and Steve shrugged their shoulders, oh well, they're here might as well eat.
PostPosted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 3:36 pm


Sammy sat on the stout bed, her finger trailing on the quilt pattern.The woman had fed them a hearty meat stew, then led them to their room, a small corner room, with two windows that formed a cross breeze, making the room cool. The room also had one bed in it.

Steve looked into the room saying,"I'll sleep on the floor," grabbing the folded sheets on a chair, making him a pallet on the floor,"That way you have the bed."

Sammy nodded, whispering,"Thanks..." the kitten curling up on the bed, falling asleep,"I wonder what's going on at camp, you know, in some books, a person could be gone for decades, and it'll be only one hour that they went missing, but it could be two days, and a thousand years have passed."

Sammy turned to Steve and said,"Steve, we could be gone for years in our world, and only two days here! I'm scared Miss. H might be looking for us now, what's going to happen to us?"

Steve took his shoes off, and laid on the pallet, his mind on the same thing. What could happened to them? True, they could be gone for years, and only be gone for hours, or they could be gone for hours and be gone really for years, or else....

"What If we can never go back to our world?" Steve whispered his violet eyes staring into Sammy's amber eyes,"What if we're stuck here in this world?"

Sammy then giggled softly startling Steve,"You know Steve, this could all be a dream, and then we'll wake up, and be at that camp again."

Steve put his hands on the back on his head, chuckling,"Yeah Sammy, you could be right...maybe we are all sleeping and we'll wake up and have a few laughs about it."

Sammy pulled her shoes off, and climbed on the bed, her body curling up into a ball. Sammy tucked her fist under her chin, and said,"Steve...what if we die, if we die, we could be dead in real life!"

Steve sat up and said with a hard stare,"No, don't think like that Sammy, we'll find a way okay?"

Sammy nodded her head, laying back on the bed, the moon drifting into the open windows,"your right Steve..."her eyes closing as she fell asleep.

'A woman, a beautiful one with long white hair, and blue eyes, adorn with a white dress, with a fine line of precious gems on it. She also had a shawl, a sheer on, that also had a complex gem pattern on it. She was bare footed, her toe nails had a silver color on them. The woman was walking down a hall all of it crystal. She walked all the way down to the hallway stopping at a black mirror, the edges covered with odd symbols.

"Show me the child..."She said, her voice laced with age and wisdom, "The one I desire."

The mirror swirled black and white, before a blurry figure appeared, It was Sammy, sleeping in the bed, the kitten sleeping on her head. The woman's lip went into a thin line, and then she said,'show me the other one...the boy."

The image of Sammy shifted into Steve who was laying on the floor, he was wide awake, staring out the window.

"They should have stayed in that world, they should have never returned...how?"She whispered her eyes cutting,"They will ruin all my plans if they live any longer, I will send the shadows, yes, the shadows, they will be swift and kill them in their beds, before the sun will rise their bodies will be cooling."

The woman smiled evilly, and then took out a crystal vial full of black swirling gas, pulling the stopper off the top, letting the black gas overflow onto the crystal floor.

"Shadows, there are two children,"The woman said pointing to the mirror that held the images of Sammy and Steve,"Find them and kill them, now."

The shadows quickly flew out the open window in the crystal room, into the clear night sky.

The woman smiled softly and said,"She will die now!"'

Sammy quickly sat up with a shriek, gripping the bed sheets, her body shaking and covered in sweat.Sammy scrambled off the bed, and over to Steve who had finally went to sleep and said,"Steve wake up!" Shaking his body roughly

Steve's Violet eyes opened quickly, and he said,"What?" sitting up looking at Sammy's shaking form,"Shoot! are you okay Sammy?!" your shaking!"

Sammy shook her head, running to get her sneakers on and grab the kitten, who mewed, not liking the fact that they had been woken up so soon,"Something bad is coming Steve, we have to go now! Hurry, get up we have to go!"

Steve got up, pulling his shoes on asking,"What is it?"

"I don't know, shadows!" Sammy said opening the door,"Come on Steve!" running out the room, and down the stairs.

Steve wasted no time running right behind Sammy, who had the front door open and was quickly exiting it. It wasn't but two minutes, and the two were running down the trail, the moon lighting the way. Steve grabbed Sammy by her arm saying,"Sammy what the hell! why are we running?!"

Sammy stop, her breathing harsh, face flushed and the kitten in her arms, mewing in concern,"A woman, she had a mirror...she saw us, and she wants us dead! we have to leave, somewhere, anywhere!! not here, the shadows, she sent shadows...."

The light they had from the moon, slowly disappeared, and both children turned up to the sky, seeing a black mass over it. Sammy opened her mouth to cry out, but Steve quickly covered her mouth, dragging her into the woods, hiding them both in a large hollow of an oak tree.
Sammy's eyes clenched shut, her hand gripping the hand that covered her whimpers. Steve looked out into the darkness, looking for any movements. When the moonlight appeared again, he slid the slowly out the hollow, his violet eyes staring up at the sky, watching the black mass fly higher into the sky.

"We'll travel in the woods,"He whispered softly to Sammy, who had her eyes open,"Hopefully we'll find some safe place."

Sammy nodded her head, and said in a hush voice,"Okay." The two walking deeper into the woods, unknown to the two a figure appeared behind them, green eyes staring at them.

'I have company...' was all the figure thought, following the two.

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PostPosted: Sun Jan 17, 2010 7:18 am


(Argh! A brand new chapter!)

As Steve and Sammy walked deeper into the forest, the moonlight got dimmer, and dimmer, until Sammy looked up and said,"The trees, they're covering the moonlight!" Waving her hand in front of her face,"I can't even see my hand that's right in front of my face!"

Steve cursed inwardly at his stupidity. Of course! The trees were high enough to cover the light the moon made.Steve grabbed Sammy's small hand saying,"Hold on tight okay, I don't want us to get lost in the dark."

Sammy huffed and said,"Okay, just don't make your hands all sweaty, okay?"
her fingers clenching Steve's hand tightly.

Steve smiled at what Sammy did, and led Sammy around trees, and large boulders. Sammy got closer to Steve, until her chin was resting on his back.

"Do you like my back Sammy, I know, it's such a strong back." Steve said as he tripped over a rock, falling on his face with a 'omph!'

Sammy stop,before she fell also, and said,"Ha! that's what you get, and for your information, I don't think your back is strong, I'm just thinking if we're closer together, we'd be safer!"

Steve, got up on his legs, using the rock beside him to get up,"You know what Sammy, that sounds like a load of bull-"

"Hey!"Sammy said,"No cursing!" helping Steve wipe dirt off his clothes,"If you saw where you were going, you would not have fallen."

Steve rolled his eyes at Sammy's giggles, grabbed the girl's hand again and said,"Come on you," walking deeper into the forest.

Moments of silence passed as the two walk in the forest, the two lost in their lost, okay more like Sammy thinking, and Steve leading them in the dark. Steve opened his mouth to say something, when a small object, maybe a rock, hit his head, causing him to round on Sammy.

"Hey!" Steve said pulling Sammy closer to him,"I know your bored, but stop throwing rocks at me!"

"I didn't throw anything at you!" Sammy said waving her hands around blindly,"You would have felt me bend down and pick up the rock!"

"Okay, If it wasn't you then-OW!" Steve growled, as a larger rock hit him on the head again,"Okay now I'm pissed!"

Steve walked past Sammy and said quite loudly,"OKAY YOU COWARD! COME OUT AND FACE ME LIKE A MAN, OR ARE YOU SCARED TO DO THAT!"

Steve turned to Sammy and said with a hint of pride in his voice,"See, that will worm them out!"

There was a loud rustle, and Sammy prepared for a person, not a hail of stones, all being thrown at Steve.

Steve swore loudly, and grabbed a shrieking Sammy, dragging them both forward, as stones hit them both.

"Whatever is out there Steve, you got them mad at you!" Sammy said running behind said boy, holding a agitated kitten to her chest,"That wasn't very smart you know."

"Yeah, Yeah..."Steve said as moonlight started to show,"Hey! look, there's light! We must be near the edge of the woods!"

Sammy gave a whoop of joy, and said,"Hurry up!" running past Steve,"We can finally see where we're go-ING!!"

Steve stop short, as he saw Sammy's figure fall straight down. Quickly, the boy ran over to where she fell, and said,"Sammy, where the hell are you!"

"Down, here!" Sammy said getting up,"I'm like in a hole!" looking around,"Hey! I see a light, there's like a tunnel down here!"

Steve frowned and said,"Oh what the heck!"CLimbing down the hole, and dropping beside Sammy who turned to him.

"There's candles on the wall,"Sammy said walking over to a large yellow candle,"It must lead somewhere, like a house or something."

Steve grabbed Sammy's arm and said,"Come on, I'll lead the way,just don't do something rash!"

Sammy rolled her eyes mumbling something under her breath, and the two started to walk down the lit tunnel.

They had only walked a few minutes, when they stop in front of large wooden door that had a sign on it. The two walked forward, and read the words out loud:

"The secret entrance to the White wizard chambers, If you are a friend, open the the door, If you are a foe, walk away, If you are not sure turn around."

Sammy and Steve turned and both cried out as a young man white robes stood there, green eyes sparkling and long black hair in a pony tail. He was holding a white staff, and a white chain around his waist.

"Hello...I am The White Wizard!" The man said smiling, baring fanged teeth,"You young man,"Pointing to Steve who gulped,"caused a lot of trouble in the black woods, the imps are not happy with you!"

"....Eh?!"

((and that's chapter six.....yay!))
PostPosted: Sun Jan 17, 2010 12:29 pm


Sweetmoochi
Chapter One and All of it's contents!


Okay, so I've only gotten this far and I've got quite a few things to say. Now, as a critiquing type person I'm going to focus on the things you need to work on, so when it's all critiques and no praise, that doesn't mean it's a bad story. You've got a good foundation here, good characters, and a good idea for what's going to happen.

First and foremost: Syntax, grammar, and spelling
This needs a LOT of work. I would've personally edited this myself, but then I wouldn't be helping you get better at writing. The first thing I have to offer is please proofread your work before you post it. There is nothing more aggravating than a story that has stupid mistakes that could be easily fixed. For example: aberrantly capitalized words in sentences, "of" that is supposed to be "off," missing spaces between commas and quotation marks, missing commas, added commas, capitalization at the beginning of [certain] dialogue, and things such as that. Sloppiness puts you in the newb category, which won't get you many views or very much feedback.

Second: Characters and Dialogue
Okay, overall, the characters are pretty trite. They seem just like any other character I've ever seen. Is there any way that you make them different then all the other run-of-the-mill characters? I like the differentiation that you have between them- personality-wise, but it's really unrealistic. They act really overdramatic and campy- like something you would see on a kids TV show. Sure, it's funny, but when it's bordering on unrealistic, readers start to go, "Really?" Sure their personalities could really be like that, but I think you could do better.

Okay, when you're talking about Jade, how old is she exactly? Because when you introduce her, she more of a maternal figure or someone who is older than Sammy, but then you say that "she's like a younger sister" which completely threw me for a loop. Now, Jade acts like a 14 year old the way she talks about boys, but the way she harps on Sammy is more like that of a 21 year old. That's inconsistent. You need to shoot more for consistency and realism.

All right, the next thing I want to talk to you about is their appearance. I understand that when you are making characters you want to make them unique. However, the way yo u describe your characters sounds like you took them out of a manga or anime. Now, to me there is a boundary line between books and manga. Manga is a drawing style that has a lot of give for realistic looks and unrealistic looks. Books do not have the same freedom. If you want to have your people look like manga characters, draw a manga. Otherwise, leave it out. There is no place for it in books because there is no way that it's realistic. You've got to have some sort of realistic foundation or everything just starts to get out of hand. For example, Jade's clothing and Sammy's hair. Not ever going to happen in real life or real time. I'm saying this with all due respect because I know how important my characters are to me and it hurts when people attack them. Just think about what I've said and see what you can do with them. Remember stories are interesting either because they're relatable or they're realistically un-relatable. You can't have too many imaginary details [unless of course, you're on a different planet or in a different dimension, then ignore this entire last paragraph.] otherwise people lose interest.

Now, on to dialogue. Overall, it was good! There were certain parts that smacked of TV dramas and comedy a little bit, but you did well on this part! ^_^ I like the way they speak and the inflections and the breaks that you put it. Albeit, your dialogue syntax needs help. You need to clean it up a bit. I can give you a little dialogue sample just to show you how it should go if you would like, but if you already know what to do, I won't bother beating a dead horse.

Third: Plot

It made me wince. There are a lot of overused plot cliches: i.e., orphanage, angsty despondent main character, the mysterious male love interest, the spazzy best friend, and the out of town trip. This pretty much sets up for teenage fanfiction and insta-love, not to mention that it completely cuts out all parental guidance and interference. Too. EASY. You need conflict, not just between the characters. You need outside conflict too. The orphanage thing makes me think "lazy author" because the character has no family and they're not creative enough to make one on their own. Of course, I say this with all due respect as well because I've done this exact same plotline in my earlier writing days, so I know what I'm talking about when I say that it doesn't work for most writers. Of course, I can't mark it down entirely because I haven't read it all yet. So, for now, this plot is cliche, but it still passes because you really could do anything with it. So I'll be watching this in hopes that it gets a little more creative. smile

Over all, I think this story could really go places. You need a bit of tweaking here and there, but you've got a great start. I know that seems like a lot, but it's all just suggestions. You could disregard anything and everything that I've said and continue on your merry way. However, you won't improve much. On the flip side, don't do everything I tell you because then it's not your writing. It's mine and that's just wrong. SO... you need to create your own style of writing and you're well on your way to that. You do a great job with descriptions. I'll give you that. I'm a failure at descriptions, so anyone who can do it gets points in my book. You'll be hearing from me again because I've got the rest to read! XD I'll try not to critique every one like I did this one, but if it's necessary, I will. [In all honesty, I don't think it's necessary for me to because I've covered most of it already!]

Good luck! I can't wait to read the rest!

WellThatsAwkward


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PostPosted: Sun Jan 17, 2010 1:08 pm


WellThatsAwkward
Sweetmoochi
Chapter One and All of it's contents!


Okay, so I've only gotten this far and I've got quite a few things to say. Now, as a critiquing type person I'm going to focus on the things you need to work on, so when it's all critiques and no praise, that doesn't mean it's a bad story. You've got a good foundation here, good characters, and a good idea for what's going to happen.

First and foremost: Syntax, grammar, and spelling
This needs a LOT of work. I would've personally edited this myself, but then I wouldn't be helping you get better at writing. The first thing I have to offer is please proofread your work before you post it. There is nothing more aggravating than a story that has stupid mistakes that could be easily fixed. For example: aberrantly capitalized words in sentences, "of" that is supposed to be "off," missing spaces between commas and quotation marks, missing commas, added commas, capitalization at the beginning of [certain] dialogue, and things such as that. Sloppiness puts you in the newb category, which won't get you many views or very much feedback.

Second: Characters and Dialogue
Okay, overall, the characters are pretty trite. They seem just like any other character I've ever seen. Is there any way that you make them different then all the other run-of-the-mill characters? I like the differentiation that you have between them- personality-wise, but it's really unrealistic. They act really overdramatic and campy- like something you would see on a kids TV show. Sure, it's funny, but when it's bordering on unrealistic, readers start to go, "Really?" Sure their personalities could really be like that, but I think you could do better.

Okay, when you're talking about Jade, how old is she exactly? Because when you introduce her, she more of a maternal figure or someone who is older than Sammy, but then you say that "she's like a younger sister" which completely threw me for a loop. Now, Jade acts like a 14 year old the way she talks about boys, but the way she harps on Sammy is more like that of a 21 year old. That's inconsistent. You need to shoot more for consistency and realism.

All right, the next thing I want to talk to you about is their appearance. I understand that when you are making characters you want to make them unique. However, the way yo u describe your characters sounds like you took them out of a manga or anime. Now, to me there is a boundary line between books and manga. Manga is a drawing style that has a lot of give for realistic looks and unrealistic looks. Books do not have the same freedom. If you want to have your people look like manga characters, draw a manga. Otherwise, leave it out. There is no place for it in books because there is no way that it's realistic. You've got to have some sort of realistic foundation or everything just starts to get out of hand. For example, Jade's clothing and Sammy's hair. Not ever going to happen in real life or real time. I'm saying this with all due respect because I know how important my characters are to me and it hurts when people attack them. Just think about what I've said and see what you can do with them. Remember stories are interesting either because they're relatable or they're realistically un-relatable. You can't have too many imaginary details [unless of course, you're on a different planet or in a different dimension, then ignore this entire last paragraph.] otherwise people lose interest.

Now, on to dialogue. Overall, it was good! There were certain parts that smacked of TV dramas and comedy a little bit, but you did well on this part! ^_^ I like the way they speak and the inflections and the breaks that you put it. Albeit, your dialogue syntax needs help. You need to clean it up a bit. I can give you a little dialogue sample just to show you how it should go if you would like, but if you already know what to do, I won't bother beating a dead horse.

Third: Plot

It made me wince. There are a lot of overused plot cliches: i.e., orphanage, angsty despondent main character, the mysterious male love interest, the spazzy best friend, and the out of town trip. This pretty much sets up for teenage fanfiction and insta-love, not to mention that it completely cuts out all parental guidance and interference. Too. EASY. You need conflict, not just between the characters. You need outside conflict too. The orphanage thing makes me think "lazy author" because the character has no family and they're not creative enough to make one on their own. Of course, I say this with all due respect as well because I've done this exact same plotline in my earlier writing days, so I know what I'm talking about when I say that it doesn't work for most writers. Of course, I can't mark it down entirely because I haven't read it all yet. So, for now, this plot is cliche, but it still passes because you really could do anything with it. So I'll be watching this in hopes that it gets a little more creative. smile

Over all, I think this story could really go places. You need a bit of tweaking here and there, but you've got a great start. I know that seems like a lot, but it's all just suggestions. You could disregard anything and everything that I've said and continue on your merry way. However, you won't improve much. On the flip side, don't do everything I tell you because then it's not your writing. It's mine and that's just wrong. SO... you need to create your own style of writing and you're well on your way to that. You do a great job with descriptions. I'll give you that. I'm a failure at descriptions, so anyone who can do it gets points in my book. You'll be hearing from me again because I've got the rest to read! XD I'll try not to critique every one like I did this one, but if it's necessary, I will. [In all honesty, I don't think it's necessary for me to because I've covered most of it already!]

Good luck! I can't wait to read the rest!


Thanks for the advice, I rarely post any of my stories...or finish them for that matter sweatdrop ! luckily, I love this story, and I am going to continue writing it! I know it needs a few things here or there, but I didn't mean for it to be like a square plot, but everything has a reason, and everything that is happening now will all come together. And for the grammar problems, goodness, it's that darn dyslexia and me sleeping in English class, even if I had a 106 average in that class! I reread it four times each time more slower than the next, and I can still miss it, I might need glasses! Thanks for the advice, I will take it to heart!
PostPosted: Sun Jan 17, 2010 4:55 pm


((The muse bug has bitten me!! I must write chapter 7!))

"Imps?"Sammy asked in stunned surprise,"Like those little pixie people, but they're not, like, those imps?"

The White wizard nodded his head, and then shook it saying,"Stupid boy, didn't your mother tell ya not to challenge an imp?"

Steve blinked his eyes, and then said slowly,".....no....." rubbing the top of his head.

The White wizard sigh shaking his head again, this time, Steve felt his eye twitch sightly,"Of course not,"he started walking to the large door,"If she did then you wouldn't have challenged the whole grove..."

Sammy frowned saying,"We didn't know about the imps, we were running, from this large black mass-"

"Wait, wait,"The White wizard said, opening the door with a tap of his staff,"I prefer to have a cup of tea, and maybe some cakes with an interesting tale, seeing from your clothing,you are not from this area, it has been awhile since there has been anything new here!"

Sammy and Steve blinked, but did not say a word, as they followed the wizard into a large curricular room, that had nothing but doors on every surface area, the floors, the walls,the ceiling,and even a few tiny ones on the wooden beams. A large pot that held a flame, hung low a tiny spot on the ceiling, giving the room a dim light.

"We want the door leading to the house,"The White wizard said going over to a tiny door on the beam,"We want, this door!"

Steve let out a sound of disbelief,"How?!"pointing wildly to the door,"That door is the size of my thumb!"

"Gosh!" the White wizard said huffing,stomping his foot,"Don't insult me! I'm a frickin' wizard for lands sake!"

Sammy giggled looking at the tip of Steve's nose slowly go red in embarrassment.

"I knew that!" Steve said scoffing, though he had his shoulders hunch,"I was just you know-"

"Yeah yeah!"The wizard said, turning his staff upside down and tapping the tip to the tiny door,"I'll let it slide to sate your ego, the next time though, I will not let it slide so easily."

The Tiny door opened, to reveal a bright light, the size of an average door on the floor, The wizard turned to Sammy and said,"After you milady,"bowing low to her.

"So..."Sammy said confused,"do I like, go into the door?"

The wizard shook his head no saying,"go into the light."

Sammy squared her shoulders, and then walked into the light,eyes closed, expecting the worse. When she didn't feel any different, she turned around to complain, but saw she was in a bright and airy kitchen, instead of the odd room.

Sammy made a sound of awe, and walked over to the table, and sat on a large oak chair, that had a pillow on it with cats, that looked oddly like the kitten in her hands.

Moments later, Steve was in the kitchen and then the wizard, who went to a stove that had a kettle on it, that was happily spewing steam from its spout.

"Aw yes..."He said taking the kettle off the stove, turning it off, and then putting on the heavy oak table,"I like my tea hot do you two like it hot?"

Sammy nodded her head saying,"Hot is fine",Steve nodding his head in agreement as he sat down near Sammy.

Cups and tea saucers flew out of a glass cabinet, a crystal bowl of sugar, and a small pitcher of cream from a wooden cupboard. Spoons danced onto the table top, and a plate of bright cakes gently landed beside the hot kettle.

"Now, help yourself, and then we can talk." The White wizard said untying his ponytail and preparing a cup for himself, taking a cake and stuffing it in his mouth as he sat in a third chair.

The kitten choose this time to let out a loud 'meow!' and jump from Sammy's arms, landing on the floor, and walking up to the wizard.

"Leo!" The wizard said, bits of cake flying out his mouth,"Where the heck have ya been! Your gone for a week and you don't return!"

The kitten,or Leo mewed loudly, before jumping on the wizard's lap. The White wizard smiled petting Leo's head before he looked up at the two.

"Thank you for finding Leo, he likes to go on adventures and get lost."The wizard said, as Steve and Sammy made their tea.

"Oh!"Sammy said smiling sipping her tea,"He was such an angel I'm glad he's safe!"

Steve frowned and said,"Okay, 'Wizard you wanna here our story now?!"

The wizard nodded his head and said,"Oh yes, by the way, my name is Walter."

"Walter?" Both Sammy and Steve said eyebrows raised looking at the wizard who chuckled nervously.

"My mom liked that name, in fact she named us all Walter, including my sisters!"Walter said biting his lip.

"....Okay!" Sammy said smiling brightly,"We were being chased by this black mass-"

"Nope, start at the beginning,"Walter said smiling,"I want to know, how you got here."

Sammy sighed and said,"We kinda got here by accident, we were at camp, and we got lost in the woods-"

"We wouldn't have if you hadn't ran from me by the canoes!"Steve started,"It was just a kiss-"

"Did I want it?!" Sammy said blushing,"No! you forced yourself on me!"

"I did not force myself on you, your just a nervous virgin who doesn't know when she's being hit on!"Steve said glaring at Sammy whose face if possible got even darker.

"You are a bum, just like every other jerk out there!" Sammy said standing up,"You all are only out for one thing! and that's-"

'Thump! Thump!'

Both Sammy and Steve cried out as the staff came down on their heads.

"you stupid children!" Walter growled hitting them again,"Shut up about your love problems and tell me how you got here!"

Sammy rubbed her head, but said with a glare to Walter,"We found this springs, that was glowing blue! I got pulled into it, and then the jerk over there grabbed me and he was pulled into along with me!"

Walter eyes widened and he said,"Shoot! shoot, shoot, shoot!" getting up and going over to a bookshelf, and grabbing a dusty tome,"Shoot!"

"what?" Sammy asked sitting up as the book was placed on the table, and dust flew as pages were flipped open.

Walter mumbled under his breath and then his fingers stopped on a bold word,"Aha! The Springs of Lights!" he said grabbing another cake and eating it in one gulp almost choking on it,"You two just so happened to have fallen into the Springs of Lights...in other words, you two fell into a 'Hole!'"

"Shoot Sherlock!" Steve said raising his hands to the ceiling,"Like we didn't know that! how do we get back!"

"No,no!" Walter said hitting Steve on the head again, this time with a cake,"The Springs of Lights, is known for its healing properties, only once has it-"

Walter looked up to the two and then shook his head saying,"We are leaving in the morning."

"To go where?!" Steve asked folding his arms.

"To get answers I do not have!" Walter said picking up his staff,"The Springs of Lights should only be used once, never twice for 'Hole' traveling!"

Walter pointed to a blank wall, and a simple door appeared,"There are two beds there, sleep, you two are safe.." before he left in a flourish of flames, leaving two confused children and a spitting cat, who had been thrown off his lap.


((and The muse is gone!))

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PostPosted: Sun Jan 17, 2010 5:19 pm


Gonna Take Me Awhile to read biggrin I cant promise I'll finish today.
PostPosted: Mon Jan 18, 2010 6:28 am


Psycho Brownie
Gonna Take Me Awhile to read biggrin I cant promise I'll finish today.


Oh! It's quite alright!! I don't expect you finish it in one sitting!

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PostPosted: Mon Jan 18, 2010 4:33 pm


((I'm writing insanely fast aren't I here's chapter eight!))


The plain looking door on the kitchen wall, led to a large spacious room, with a large bay window, and a large sitting area, with a fireplace that currently had decorations in the hearth, bookcases full of books lined the wall, and comfy sitting chairs stood in the middle with a ornate coffee table, all of it on a expensive rub that had images of dragons, and pixies on them.
Sammy made her way to one of the large four poster beds that had only silk sheets of blue on them, and picked up a set of sleep ware, that had images of Leo on them, each of the kittens in a different pose.
“He sure does like kittens,” Sammy said as Steve picked up the same sleep ware,”He must be one of those crazy cat people; you know where their houses smell like cat pee, and they have images of cats everywhere.”
Steve chuckled and started to take his clothes off, when Sammy shrieked, “I am still in here you jerk!”
Steve turned; his shirt hanging by his ear, seeing a red faced Sammy holding her sleeping clothes to her chest.
“Sorry ‘bout that,” He said climbing in the bed, pulling the heavy drapes close to give him privacy as he changed.
Sammy huffed softly, and then climbed in her bed, closing the drapes and changing her clothes. When she opened the drapes again, Leo sat patiently on the floor, mewing softly looking up at her.
“Oh!” Sammy said climbing off the bed and over to Leo who jumped into her waiting arms, “You wanna sleep with me again eh?”
Leo mewed loudly rubbing his face on her cheek, before jumping out of her arms, and on the bed, curling up in a ball to sleep.
Sammy turned to the other bed, hearing muffled curses, and then Steve fell out the bed in too tight cat pajamas, his face red in anger.
“Damn it!” Steve roared his sleeves’ seams almost busting, “He doesn’t like me! These are too small!”
Sammy covered her mouth, giggling softly at his predicament, watching Steve spin around in circles, ”Maybe we need to switch,” raising her arms up, showing her long sleeves, “These are too big for me!”
Steve shook his head saying, “Damn it! I just wish these clothes would fit!” Eyes narrowed in anger.
As if on cue, the arms and legs of his pajamas got longer and wider fitting his arms and legs, fitting him to a tee.
“Hey!” Sammy said pointing to Steve, “They fit now! Wait a minute…how did do you that!?”
Steve shrugged his shoulders saying, “I don’t know I just wanted them to fit, maybe Walter did it.”
Sammy nodded saying, “Yeah maybe he did,” her shoulders bristled and she turned away and she said,”I am not speaking to you, you jerk!”
“Why not?” Steve asked walking over to Sammy who made a sound and shuffled away, “I mean I didn’t do anything to you!”
“Oh yeah, what about what you said to me in the kitchen?” Sammy asked turning to Steve, her eyes throwing daggers to him.
“Well, you did run away from me when I kissed you,” Steve said kicking his foot on the wooden floor.
“It was my first kiss…” Sammy whispered her cheeks turning red, “You know, I don’t think of boys like that, Jade does and all the other girls do, but not me.”
Steve swore softly under his breath, and said, “Crap, Sammy I didn’t know it was-“his hands gesturing wildly, “It was you first kiss! I’m sorry I did what I did, I should have asked you!”
Sammy shook her head and said, “Well, what has passed has passed, no use crying about spilled milk!”
Steve ran a hand over his face saying, “Sammy, I-“
Sammy climbed into the bed again saying, “No, don’t worry about it, we only have a few hours before sunrise, we could use a good sleep.”
Steve sighed and he too, climbed into the bed, under the sea of silks, his head resting on soft pillows.
Moments had went by, before the soft sounds of Sammy sleeping, lulled him to sleep, the moonlight drifting into the bay window.
When Sammy opened her eyes, it was to the feeling of a sandpaper tongue licking her cheek. Sammy turned to see Leo on her side, mewing softly, the sunlight pouring into the room, bathing it in gold lights.
“Morning Leo,” Sammy said sitting up and stretching her limbs, “Do you know where a bathroom is in this room?”
Leo jumped off her and the bed, pouncing over to the bed, his hind legs on the door. Sammy slid out the large bed, and went over to door, pausing to look at Steve, who was snoring loudly, his body on the edge of the bed. Sammy giggled softly, opening the door with a soft click and exiting, Leo weaving through her legs.
Sammy slid the door shut and turned expecting the kitchen, but instead, what she got was the large round room with all the doors.
“Weird…” Sammy said walking over to the door Leo was sitting near, “It’s like a maze in this place!”
Sammy grabbed the knob, surprised it turned and opened the door to reveal a bathroom that looks like it was from the 1920’s, with a large chain pull toilet. Sammy shooed Leo out the bathroom, closed the door, and did her business. After she washed her hands and face, Sammy left the bathroom and groaned seeing no Leo.
“Oh no,” Sammy said her hands resting on her hips, “Where the heck do I go now!”
Sammy went over to a crawl space sized door, got on her knees, and tested the knob, smiling when it turned. She opened the door, and crawled into it. The crawl area was dark, long and cramped, her body could hardly fit into the area.
“Oh darn it!” Sammy whispered turning her head slightly seeing that the door was gone, “Walter made an odd house!”
Sammy shrugged her shoulders and continued to crawl almost crying out in joy as a light came into view. As she got closer to the light, she noticed it started to get steeper and steeper. Sammy made a confused sound as it felt as though she was going down. It only took one slip of the hand, and she fell down, more like tumbling down the area.
Sammy shrieked and closed her eyes as she landed on plush carpet. Sammy groaned sitting up to look around. She was in an office that had bookshelf covering the entire wall, a large desk made of cherry wood stood in the middle on a platform, with a heavy chair on under it.
Sammy walked up to the desk seeing Leo sitting on top of it beside a book, mewing loudly, “Leo!” she said walking up on the platform, “You left me in that crazy room!”
Leo placed a paw on the book mewing again, making Sammy blinked. “Oh! You want me to open it?”
When Leo mewed in agreement, Sammy walked around the desk, and grabbed the book flipping to the first page, that was blank. Sammy frowned and started flipping through the whole thing. The whole book was blank. Sammy turned to the kitten saying, “Leo! This whole book has nothing in it! What do you want me to do?”
Leo jump up and bit her finger causing her to yelp in pain, a single drop of blood fell on the blank page. Sammy whimpered sticking her finger in her mouth as she looked down at the book, which now had words in it.
Sammy stop, her eyes going wide as she looked down at the words. Her eyes reading the text. Sammy gaped openly, “Oh my goodness, this is a family tree!”
Names popped up on the pages, and dates, some older than human history itself. Until, one name stood at the bottom of the page.
‘Samantha XIV 1500-?’
Sammy frowned looking up at the top of the page seeing an odd crest, like a unicorn on top of it behind it a wall of crystal, with odd symbols surrounding it.
“Whose family is this?” Sammy whispered sitting down on the chair, hands clasped under her chin, “They must be royal, because there’s a crest at the top of the page!”
Sammy quickly turned to a wall that had a shelf missing on it and gasped as a door appeared in the blank area. Sammy quickly closed the book and sat back, Leo jumping in her lap as Steve came in through the door, look frazzled.
“Damn it Sammy!” he growled watching Sammy stand up from behind the desk, “Walter wants us ready to leave, and you’re in here , relaxing, and reading a book!”
Sammy walked over to Steve saying, “No I wasn’t. I got lost looking for the room when I went to the bathroom!”
Steve mumble under his breath, and said, “Come on, Walter has breakfast ready for use in the kitchen.”
It was easier getting to the kitchen this time Sammy mused as Steve led her to a regular looking door, Leo again walking by her bare feet.
Steve gave Sammy a look saying, “I think your right about the fact about Walter being a crazy cat person.”
“Why?” Sammy asked as Steve paused at the door, unsure if he should go forward or not.
Steve sighed, and rounded his shoulders and opened the door to reveal Walter by the stove in the kitchen, flipping cat shaped pancakes in a pan, wearing an apron that had Leo on it again. Walter turned to the duo, smiled and said, “Okay you two sit down and eat until you can’t, we’re going on a long trip and you’ll need all the energy.”
Sammy giggled softly to Steve who smiled sheepishly and sat in the same spot she did the night before, grabbing a plate of pancakes and bacon, Steve doing the same thing. The two ate in silence, listening to Walter amble on about the trip they were taking.
“It’s about a two week trip from here, if we walked, but since we’re not walking the ride should take maybe a few days, granted if we don’t get into any problems,” Walter said sitting down near the two and grabbing a plate.
“Riding what?” Steve asked from his mug of coffee, “A broom, a dragon?”
Walter let out a soft chuckle saying, “Flying brooms! There’s no such thing as flying brooms, we’ll take the rider.”
“Why can’t we fly on dragons?” Sammy asked pushing her plate away from her.
“And get your head charred?!” Walter asked dumping jam on everything making both Steve and Sammy shudder, “No I think we’ll stick with the rider! She looks and purrs like a Leo! You’ll see!”
As it turns out Walter’s rider did not look and purred like a kitten, It was rusty on the outside and falling apart n the inside, with a sail in the middle.
Walter smiled and said, “Tada! The Leo rider!” pushing the floating thing out into the forest from its hiding place in a fallen tree, “Well, what do you think?”
Sammy and Steve blinked and Sammy walked over to the ship and asked, “How does it float?”
“Simple…there’s a thing in the hull that makes it float, makes for easy traveling when you’re riding on the cloud ocean,” Walter said tossing his staff and several bags into the ship, “Come on children! We have a long ways ahead of us!”
Sammy smiled and started to climb onto the steps when Steve grabbed her saying, “Wait, I’ll climb on first, just in case, you know, something happens.”
Sammy walked out the way, and Steve heaved his way onto the ship, using the small steps to get on, walking in the cramped space to a dilapidated seat. Sammy then grabbed the steps and stopped when she heard a mew and felt Leo jump on her shoulders.
“Leo you know this is a dangerous trip,” Walter said as Sammy continued to climb into the ship, “I just want you to know that.”
Leo mewed and jump onto Sammy’s lap as she sat down beside Steve. Walter nodded his head, and jump into the ship, walking up to the front seat that had a wheel and a consul of buttons in front of it.
Walter pressed a green button and growled when the rider wouldn’t start, “Alright you hunk of junk! Work!” Kicking the side roughly.
The ship puttered and then roared to life, causing Walter to laugh out loud, “See she purrs like a kitten!”
The children had to duck to one side, as Walter pressed a blue button, and the sail turned forward and the steps folded into the ship.
Walter turned the wheel and pressed a red button and the ship started to go forward in the woods, dodging trees and fallen branches, the hull almost skimming the floor.
Sammy and Steve watched in awed as the forest cleared into open fields which started to go by in a fast blur. Walter turned his head saying, “Cloud Port, here we come!” laughing and steering westbound to a group of mountains.

((Yay!! Chapter three is done!!))
PostPosted: Tue Jan 19, 2010 6:06 pm


((Okay here is nine!! noticed in chapter eight at the bottom i said chapter three is done HA!!))

Sammy sighed, playing with a twig that had fallen in the rider when Walter drove through a thicket of small trees. The first hour was jaw dropping and ‘oh wow! Oh my goodness a floating ship!’ The fifth hour, it was-
“Boring!” Sammy hissed turning to Leo, who laid on Steve’s lap, said boy sleeping soundly in his seat, his body hanging off it, “Leo, I wish I had a book or something, it’s been like three days since I read one!”
Leo gave her a look that said: ‘well, what am I suppose to do about it? I’m a kitten,’ taking his tongue and preening himself, turning away from Sammy.
Sammy rolled her eyes and turned to look at Steve who was still snoring softly. Smiling evilly, Sammy took the twig she was playing with, stood up, and beside Steve, leaned down and prodded his nose gently with the stick.
Steve grunted softly rubbing his nose and waving his hand wildly around in the air. Sammy giggled behind her free hand, her eyes cut with glee. Leo stopped cleaning his fur, and stared up at Sammy and the Steve, mewing soft enough not to wake Steve up.
Sammy put her finger up to her lips and prodded his nose again, getting the same results from Steve who was nearly off the seat.
When Sammy did it a third time, A hand shoot out and grabbed her small hand, just before the twig touched Steve’s nose. Violet eyes stared up into Sammy’s, and a sleep ridden voice said, “Gotcha!”
Sammy blinked and then broke out into small giggles as Steve smiled at her. Steve let go of Sammy’s wrist laughing softly saying, “I’ve been awake since you’ve been talking to Leo, is it hard not looking at text for three days?”
Sammy smiled softly and said, “Murder!” standing up and stretching, “Goodness, I need a bathroom break!” walking over to her seat and sitting down back in her seat.
Steve got up and said walking over to Walter was bust steering the rider, “Hey Walter! Can we stop and take a lunch break or something; we’ve been riding nearly half the day!”
Walter pressed a black button, causing the rider to stop suddenly, causing Steve to fly out the ship, and Sammy to fly into Walter’s lap, Leo landing gracefully on Sammy’s stomach.
“Hey!” Walter said smiling lifting Sammy out his lap, “That’s a good idea, what do ya know, there’s a lake near us!”
Steve sat up on the ground, rubbing his head saying, “Terrific!” looking over to a large crystal blue lake, that had fishes splashing out the waters, “Well, at least it’s a nice view!”
Walter and Sammy climbed out the ship and over to Steve, both of them helping the boy up and dusting him off, Leo mewed loudly prancing up to the lake and sitting, look down into the waters.
Walter took out a small box, and said, “You,” poking Steve in the chest, “Will set up camp, while I tie the rider up.”
Walter threw Steve the box, while he pushed the rider near a tree, and chained it up. Steve pulled the small tab of the box up and jumped when the box folded into itself, jumping out his hand into the head. Out of the box, came two tents, a fire pit, several supplies and two logs.
“You like?” Walter asked coming up to Steve who stared at the area, “Camp in a box! An invention my eldest sibling and sister, Walter made!”
Steve nodded his head and said, “Neat, I wish I had this when I was living with the yuppies as a foster child.”
Steve turned to talk to Sammy, and saw her bound away to Leo, who had a huge fish beside him, looking like a cat that enjoyed his cream a lot.
“Wow!” Sammy said picking up Leo and petting him, “You caught this all by yourself! You’re a super strong kitty!”
Leo mewed in pride, while Walter and Steve came over to the two. Walter turned to Steve and said, “We clean it, she cooks?”
“Deal,” Steve said, digging in his pants pocket and taking out a Swiss knife, “I prefer gutting them to cooking them.”
Walter gaped openly at the knife and said, “Fascinating! What is this contraption?”
Steve pressed a button and all the items in the Swiss knife pop out, earning a gasp from Walter, “This is my knife. The yuppies gave it to me for my tenth birthday, useful tool!”
Sammy frowned saying, “ You know how to clean fish? I thought you just got them from the market in a Styrofoam tray wrapped in plastic!”
Steve chuckled gently tapping Sammy’s forehead saying, “Someone cleans them for you before you eat them.”
Steve then grabbed the fish, and dragged it over to the fireplace, with the help of Walter. Sammy started to walk over to them and said, “Whose cooking the fish?!”
“You are!” Walter said turning to Sammy who blinked and said, “You sure you want me to do it?”
While the two men cleaned the fish, Sammy went into the forest with Leo looking for herbs to cook the fish in.
“Now...” Sammy said crawling on her knees looking around on the ground, “We need rosemary, maybe thyme or basil and mint yes! We need mint to maybe to get a sharp taste!”
Leo mewed from a nearby bush, making Sammy look up and go over to the said bush, seeing an odd colored herb in the bush. Leo was sitting there with one in his mouth. Sammy smiled saying, “Whatever it is, it looks cool, let’s take it!”
Sammy plucked several herbs from the bush, and walked around the bush to get more herbs. Sammy turned when a putrid smell wafted into her nose. Sammy’s face scrunched up into disgust. Walking closer to the smell, Sammy made it to ending of the forest, and gasped, covering her mouth at what she saw. Sammy’s face paled and she turned and ran back to the camp area, Leo right behind her.
“Sammy, you lazy bum!” Steve said walking over to the patch of woods, “Come out and cook!”
Sammy rushed out the bushes and over to the wizard crying out, “Walter! Walter! There’s something terrible over there, on the other side!”
“What is it?” Walter asked letting go of Sammy and going to the edge of the woods.
“I-I-I-“Sammy stuttered her eyes wide, “Oh my! It’s horrible!”
Walter walked into the woods, the two children behind him. When he made to the edge of the forest, he covered his nose, and swore loudly, looking around in horror. Sammy whimpered grabbing Steve’s shirt and burying her face in his chest. Steve, as much as he wanted to relish the fact that Sammy was cuddling him, couldn’t but grabbed her waist, puling her to him, shielding her from the scene.
In the small clearing, blood covered it, gore lay in small piles, bones and entrails hung from some branches and items, covered in the blood, lay scattered around. Walter pulled his staff out and went over to a tree that had blood on and frowned sniffing the blood.
“It’s fresh,” Walter said hoarsely, “couldn’t be but maybe a few hours…Steve go pack the camp, all you have to do is open the box and it’ll do the rest.”
Steve let go of Sammy, and made his way back to the camp. Sammy went over to Walter and said, “What do you want me to do?” looking at the gore.
“Get ready to head out,” Walter said leading her away from the scene, “I know what group did this, and they will not hesitate to tear us from limb to limb if they find us!”
Sammy picked up Leo who mewed and licked her cheek, walking back to the camp, where Steve stood, looking down at the fish.
“What are we going to do about the fish?” Steve asked kicking the carcass.
Walter stared at it and said, “Leave it, we’ll got into town.”
Steve rounded on Walter saying, “There’s a town?!” through clenched teeth, “you mean to tell us we were going to camp out here when we could be staying in a house!”
Walter shrugged his shoulders saying, “I wanted to try the camp in a box!”
The ride to the small town that sat in between the mountains and lake was about maybe an hour. It looked like a Swiss mountain village, seeing as it was nestled near the mountains, built up and narrowed.
Sammy frowned as they drove through the town to the edge, “Walter! There are no children out here playing!”
“It might be because the Queen sent her goons out rounding up children,” Walter said pointing to a post near a house, “Look, it’s a message from the Queen.”
Walter stopped the rider, and jumped out the rusty ship, quickly running over to the post, reading the paper nailed on it and ran back.
“The Queen has decreed that all people ages 11-18 be picked up by the royal carriages to be taken to the Crystal Castle effective immediately.” Walter stated to the two as he steered the rider through a narrow alley, “Hmm…”
“What is that ‘hmm’ for?” Steve asked as Walter turned the rider off.
“I do believe you are in danger.” Walter said turning to look at Sammy and Steve, “Both of you.”
“Why us?” Steve asked with a snort, “I mean we just got her two and half days ago!”
“Exactly!” Walter said his hands rose, “This started two days ago! It was sudden too, it just so happened that I was in a village and the children all were taken in the carriages. “
Walter turned looking down both exits of the alley and said, “I think we might need some muscles, you know like one of those Warriors kinsmen.”
Walter paused and then turned around going through a bag, and taking out a velvet pouch, “Aha! Money! We will need this to get the Warriors!”
Sammy smiled saying, “Are Warriors big and strong?” bouncing on the balls of her feet, “do they have axes?”
Walter smiled saying, “They are the strongest in the land!” pressing a white button making the sail go down into the ship, “All we have to do is go find a clan, and pay them to let one of their Warriors join us on our quest to Cloud Port. That shouldn’t be too hard!”
The innkeeper laughed out loud staring the three odd people in front of him, two youngins in odd clothes and a wizard.
“You-you want to find the Warrior clans, you three?!” The man said, wiping tears from his eyes.
“Uh…”The wizard said with an edge of nervousness, “Yeah, you see we’re on the way to Cloud Port, and the mountains home dozen of killer beasts-“
The innkeeper gave them two sets of keys saying, “I wouldn’t try to cross the mountains this time wizard, there are Bandits out there roaming, well a band of merchants come by earlier and their blood stained the whole area, you know near the lake! Only Bandits do that work!”
The wizard scowled and said, “We’ll take our chances!” swiping the keys from the in keeper, “Come you two!”
Walter sighed as the innkeeper laughed them past the kitchens and to their rooms, “Well, I guess he won’t be any help…”
“Got that right!” Steve said as the walked down the narrow hall, “we could end up like those merchants, paint for wood!”
“Warriors you seek no…” A voice whispered to them in their ears causing them all to look around and see a figure completely covered in black robes, “I shall show you the way to them, for a price…”
Walter turned to the two children, and then walked forward to the figure standing at the end of the hallway, “How can we trust you if we do pay.”
The figure glided forward until it was in front of Walter, “I do not want gold, or coins, I will show you to the Warriors, and then…”
The figure glided over to Sammy, wrapping itself around her, causing her to shudder at the cold feeling, “I shall take my payment…be ready when the moon hangs high tonight, then, we shall go to them.”
The figure quickly glided away and into a door. Once it left Steve frowned and said, “Do we trust it?”
“Looks like there’s no choice, its our only way to the Warriors,” Walter said opening the doors, “Come now, let’s rest up and prepare for dinner.”

((and that’s nine!!! Wow this is becoming something good!!)

Booty Popping


Booty Popping

PostPosted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 6:00 pm


((here is ten! Not a long chapter but I think it compensates itself!))

Sammy sat sown on the bed, slipped her sneakers off, and lay onto the white bed sheets. Leo and she got the first room, while Steve and Walter got the other one. Leo jumped onto the bed jumped, walked quickly over to the pillow and jumped on top of the pillow curling up into a ball, and falling asleep.
Sammy turned so that she lay on her stomach, arms tucked under her head, staring at Leo, whose tiny body rose up and down on the pillow. Sammy lifted her hand and gently rubbed his ears, her eyes closing as she fell asleep.
“Hey, wake up Sammy.” Steve said shaking Sammy gently on her shoulder, “It’s about seven; you’ve been sleeping for a while.”
Sammy opened her eyes yawning softly and rubbing her eyes free of sleep, “Hey Steve, did I miss dinner? I use to do that when I read books.”
Steve pointed to the tray that had a plate of food on, “I saved you a bit, and maybe some fish for Leo.”
Sammy got up smiled, slipping off the bed and going over to the steaming plate, sitting on the table to eat. Sammy pick up the fork, eating in silence. “It’s good,” She replied setting the plate down and looking at Steve, who was sitting on the bed, playing his knife, “where’d you get that?”
“Foster family,” Steve said, putting it away, “they lived in ‘nature’, they taught me how to live outdoors, that was the best year, before I got sent to the boy’s hall.”
Sammy frowned and said, “Why did you get sent off?” Sammy knew about the Boy’s hall, it was for boys, who got into trouble in foster families, and orphanages, “You don’t seem like a person to get into a lot of stuff.”
Steve grunted picking up Leo who was nipping at his fingers, petting him gently, “I was a small around the time I got sent to the hall, around ten or so, the older children picked on me and use to beat me up, one day, they tried to take the knife the yuppies gave to me, and I snapped. The social worker couldn’t believe that I took out 12 older boys with just my fists. I hate fighting! They just wouldn’t leave me be!”
Sammy pick up the mug of cider, and took a long gulp. She put it down and said, “I am sorry for what they did to you. I know how some people are, jerks.”
Steve smiled softly saying, “well, Jade seems to like you...”
Sammy smiled softly and said, “ Jade, she is more like an older sister to me, than I am to her. She always talks about me reading instead of doing, I don’t know, watching soap operas, putting on make-up, thinking about boys, girly stuff like that.”
Steve chuckled looking at Sammy who finished her meal, “I don’t know what jade was talking about, you look beautiful with any make up.”
Sammy blushed softly, her head bent as Steve got up, going over to the table to take the tray, placing the plate of fish down for Leo. Steve lifted her chin up so that her face met his.
“You are perfect,” Steve said before he kissed her forehead, “Innocence and all.”
Steve smiled, and took the tray off the table, walking over to the door, “Don’t ever change.” He said opening the door, opening it and closing it shut for Sammy’s privacy.
Sammy blushed at what Steve said to her, looking down at Leo who started to eat his fish, “I think I take back what I said about him being a jerk, he’s pretty alright.”
Leo looked up to Sammy and mewed before resuming his meal.
Walter, Steve and Sammy walked behind the figure up a rocky trail beside the town, the moonlight guiding the way up it.
The figure turned to the three saying, “This way wizard…we are almost close to the Warrior clan.”
Sammy slid her jacket closer to her body, shivering slightly. Steve gently wrapped an arm around Sammy saying, “Here, I know you’re kind of cold, I’ll keep you warm.”
Sammy smiled her gratitude at Steve and said, moving out his arms, “Just because you give me a compliment doesn’t mean you get to cuddle with me.”
Steve smiled softly and said, “Okay, I was just trying to warm you up.”
Walter sighed seeing a light flicker from behind a large rock, “Finally! We have arrived.” Waltr turned to the cloaked figure and said, “Thank you kind sir, we shall take it from here, what would you like for a payment, gems, a little magic powder, food?”
The chuckled darkly, making all their arm hairs stand to attention, “Silly wizard, I demand a more delectable payment, it has been such a long time since any maiden passed through these mountains, the Bandits have promised me the maiden when I brought you here…”
Bandits! Walter quickly turned to the two children, when a roar went out, and figures jumped from the large boulders, holding long battle swords and axes in black clawed hands, a few of them holding torches. In the fire light, you could see yellow reptile eyes gleaming, razor sharp teeth covered in saliva that dripped from large jowls. All in all, there were at least a dozen of them. These foul creatures were the Bandits.
Walter and Steve turned to see Sammy in the figures grip, shaking slightly, her eyes wide in horror her mouth covered in the blackness.
“MMGPH!” Sammy squealed struggling as the figure easily glided behind the group of bandits, holding Sammy to its body, ”MMGH!!”
Walter took out his staff, and said, “You know how to fight or anything at all?”
Steve nodded his head, his eyes never leaving Sammy’s even as the Bandits got closer, “You bet wizard!” and then he launched at the same time as Walter.
The figure hissed in displeasure as the wizard and boy dodged the axes and swords with ease, how did a wizard learn to do that?
It couldn’t stay near these moronic Bandits; luckily, they did not know the difference between a male and female, as long as it was large and meaty, so he told them he would take the smallest one as payment, the beautiful maiden, ah yes, her skin felt so young and supple, but right now, she was fighting him, screaming, kicking, biting. She will need to be taught a lesson, but for now.
The figure quickly glided away from the battle, holding its prized tightly, as it weaved up higher on the trail, the boulders becoming bigger and rugged.
Sammy screamed loudly through the black mass, and tried to escape but the figure was too strong. She had managed to move the mass from the mouth, and she screamed, “HELP ME! STEVE ! WALTER! HELP ME!” looking down at the fight, watching as it got smaller and smaller, “HELP ME!!”
Steve looked up and in the natural moon light could see Sammy just hardly, being carried up higher up the trial, “Walter, it’s taking her higher up, we’ll lose sight of her soon!”
Walter cursed loudly, swing his staff at a Bandit, “We’re trapped, she’ll have to wait!”
Walter watched as a white blur ran past the group on the ground, “Leo! Go get Sammy!”
Leo mewed softly running faster than an average cat, easily jumping rocks and boulders, his mane on edge.
Sammy turned hearing a disturbed yowl and Leo, in the moonlight, jumping forward, claws out, which tore through the figure’s black mass, letting Sammy slip out the grasp.
Leo mewed loudly to Sammy, and ran down a narrow side trial. Sammy nodded her head and followed the kitten, side stepping because the space was too narrow for her.
The figure hissed in rage, and quickly followed the two, easily sliding through the tight space, getting closer to Sammy, who could feel its chilly presence. Sammy screamed out in agony, as she felt something slice across her back, tearing the back of her dress and jacket into the pieces. The pain ran through her body, burning badly, an acrid smell entering her nose. She fell, crawling into a tight space, where Leo paced waiting for her. Sammy turned her head to the opening seeing the figure swoop down low, a large strand of black mass wrapping around her ankle, pulling her out. Sammy cried out looking at Leo who was hissing a spitting at the form, Sammy’s blunt nails digging into soft earth, trying to stop from being pulled out the hole.
Sammy turned around and started to kick at the mass, trying to get away screaming, “Help! Help! Somebody help me!” her lungs burning from the lack of oxygen, heart beating wildly, adrenaline racing through her veins, she had to get out, she had too!
Sammy let out a gasp of pain as the back of her head went sailing into a wall. She vaguely heard a dull, ‘crack!’ as her skull cracked slightly on the hard limestone, her vision blurred, and she fell limply on her back staring up at the figure, who sounded so far away.
“You wild cat! The poison should be working its way into your system, in a matter of minutes you’ll be taking a nice nap, that way you won’t be fighting me as I enjoy myself.”
Sammy whimpered, weakly trying to drag her body away from the mass, but she couldn’t, goodness, she was so tired. She couldn’t even move her head, as a clawed hand moved a sweaty strand of hair away from her face so that her glazed eyes could see the light.
The last thing she heard and felt, was her dress being ripped off, a loud hiss, and then a woman’s voice exclaiming, “Moon Spear!” and then darkness.

((whoa short chapter, and it has some action in it too! To be continued in chapter uh…wait….11!))
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