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The_Writer

PostPosted: Fri Jan 08, 2010 6:17 pm


PostPosted: Sat Jan 09, 2010 10:45 pm


That is really realistic. I like the hair a lot. The first thing that jumps out at me is that the necks are a bit thick. Even if the neck on a real person is that thick it looks better for art to thin it up a bit. On the Lillian image, the lines showing the breasts in my opinion are to far apart, but that might just be me. The lips are excellent (I wish I could draw lips like that) crying

Jaru the Artist


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Desirable Sex Symbol

PostPosted: Sat Jan 09, 2010 11:04 pm


http://i638.photobucket.com/albums/uu105/MoralineLopez/Lillian.jpg

Collar bone is too low. It should end at the base of her neck. Her right nostril is off. It droops down a bit. I don't know if you forgot to erase a line or something there. Her left eye is too low compared to her right one. Her right shoulder is long. The body seems twisted. it doesn't look like the head and neck are connected to the spine properly. Either the body needs to be shifted more to the left or the head and neck need to be shifted to the right some more.
PostPosted: Wed Jan 13, 2010 9:21 pm


on the first pic, her left eye is a bit misplaced/ tad bit bigger.

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