Well, let me translate what they mean. In the glare, it's that it looks like you but a picture in the eye, because the rectangular edges to the glare can be seen, and they don't match the color of the pupil. You can see that in the part I highlighted in yellow, now look at ti without the square. I hope you cans ee what I mean.
And where the eye turnes into the stars, the only weird thing I see is the size. The stars look very distant, while the ey looks very close. While your brain tries to interpret the difference in the distances, it et's confused on only that part and really lets you focus on only that part.
I love how the leaves look like they are curving around the round eye, very realistic, very beatiful.
All in all, very good job. Hope my critism helped a bit.
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