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 Posted: Fri Dec 16, 2005 9:46 am
Bring Me The Night In this world Filled with light Am I the only one Who cries in fright I want to scream I want to run I want your screaming To finally be done I am of the dark A demon of the night I do not belong To this world of light I am not the Devil's I am not from hell I'm just a whore One you can sell I do what they ask The world or just you I am what you want Tell me what to do I'll be your servant A forever slave Only if you promise It's me you'll save Please save me Banish the light This is my nightmare Bring me the night
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Posted: Mon Dec 19, 2005 12:49 pm
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Posted: Sun Dec 25, 2005 1:00 am
thanks, i got some very ... um... harsh results from it in the big poetry place and... owie. someone was going on about how i was a "whinny goth". sorry that's been hurting for awhile. sweatdrop
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Posted: Sun Dec 25, 2005 9:56 pm
..its pretty nice.....not excellent...but it is nice....
as for the poetry forum...they butcher people when it comes to darker aspects....if you write a I've seen people write very good darker poems that were executed.....and simple lighter poems of lesser quality of the same subject praised....thats why I don't post there....
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Posted: Tue Dec 27, 2005 8:53 pm
Sensitive people tend to get defencive about what makes them "unique" that's why people bash perfectly good poetry somtimes. I give you a two thumbs up!
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