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 Posted: Tue Jan 05, 2010 9:22 pm
Rhythmic poem for someone who needs it...
Please, don't cry
Your tears don't die
Please, don't cry
Watch the bad times fly
Please, don't cry
Never say goodbye
Please, don't cry
Just stand right by...
Watch where these tears lie
Don't cry
I won't say goodbye
Please, just don't cry...
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Posted: Tue Jan 05, 2010 9:26 pm
Ambrosia, that's really good. I'm glad you posted it. ^-^ I hope that it makes others feel happier.
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Posted: Tue Jan 05, 2010 9:40 pm
Thats a good one...who is it about if I may ask?
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Posted: Wed Jan 06, 2010 3:21 pm
It's... for someone who needs it, as I said...
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Posted: Thu Jan 07, 2010 10:35 am
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Posted: Thu Jan 28, 2010 12:19 pm
This is beautiful. =D
I like how it flows. There's a lot of meaning in few words, and that's how a poem should be, in my opinion.
There are very few poems I feel, but this is definitely one of them.
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