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Posted: Tue Dec 29, 2009 8:25 am

slash you in half
then in half again

No longer questing for Crystal, please delete her thread.

Posted: Wed Dec 30, 2009 5:46 am

Name: Crystal Calabretta
Nicknames: She is sometimes called Crys, but this is immensely disliked.
Age: 14
Birthday: July 24th
Sign: Leo
Birthstone: Ruby
Blood Type: AB
Fav. Food: Pasta. In particular, egg noodles with butter.
Hated Food: Gumdrops. So sugary and gross...
School: Crystal

HOBBIES
Dance-Crystal would like to go professional someday, and it shows. In her free time, she takes multiple dance classes. She's currently taking tap, jazz, and hip hop.

Singing-Crystal does not sing. She pours out her soul.
Crystal has a beautiful and alluring voice, the kind a siren of ancient mythology would have. She has a teacher she visits twice a week, and more than anything, this is her dream...and she's really, really, really good at it.

Wasting Time-If Crystal isn't working on singing, dancing, or schoolwork, she is lying around doing nothing. She can stare out a window for hours on end if she's comfy!

VIRTUES
Dedicated-If Crystal decides to do something, she will try her hardest to do it. She won't tell herself to do 100% on every test, because she doesn't want to kill herself studying, or anything like that...but if she knows she can do something, and wants to, Crystal will do it.
She's dedicated to all of her activities, and spends lots of time practicing.

Leader's Blood-Crystal was born to be a leader. She can command a group efficiently, quickly, and smartly. This is simply in her blood, and the girl can be a leader more than she can be anything else. She takes leadership not-so-well (makes snarky comments, goes off on her own) unless the leader in question is intimidating.

Taking the Initiative-Crystal is the first to start anything, figuring that there's no use in taking too long. She will take responsibility for it if she needs to, and getting somebody hurt that she works well with is something Crystal dislikes.

FLAWS
Carries Grudges-Crystal, if she believes herself to be wronged by you, will refuse to have anything to do with you until you apologize. For you totally did it on purpose!

Impatient-Crystal cannot wait for anything, no matter how important it is; after all, how good is it if she can't have it now? She does not wait for anything to be confirmed, instead rushes to get everything done so she can get her stuff!
Weakness.

Cheeky-Crystal is impudent as hell. She is an eternal student of the school of Nose-To-Wall.
Is that clear enough?

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION
Eyes: Black. Totally black. Crystal laments this fact.
Hair: White with black tips. This is her hair style; albeit with no skulls, just pigtail holders...although I wouldn't object if she had the skulls when in Nega form. She has hair that reaches down to her feet...and a little bit further.
Face: Heart. Framed by her hair. Just a bit of freckles.
Body Type: Pale, skinny, very lanky, just the slightest hint of curves.

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Posted: Wed Dec 30, 2009 5:02 pm

LIEUTENANT AMBER

Name: Lieutenant Axinite
Challenge: I'll slice you in half!
Colors: Major is black, secondary is silver.

Weapon stages:
1. Plastic double-sided battle ax.
2. This axe-dull edges, it's made for LARPing.
3. This axe. About 2-3 feet long.
4. This axe. As long as she's tall. But it can also be a gigantic executioner's ax, like the one in this picture.
OUTFIT
X, X, X, X, X, X. A silver version of Obito from Naruto's goggles on her face. I think Crystal doesn't exactly wear armor, but she wears barely-covering clothing.
Here's a few sets of items I want her based off of (only one, though): all but accessories, all.

Why Negaverse?

Why would she be picked to be in the Negaverse?
Crystal gets a little crazy sometimes, and carries furious grudges. If left on her own, she would likely have come to the Negaverse of her own free will, although a lot later...

What's her view on the Scouts?
Crystal doesn't really believe that the Scouts are evil, per say...just misguided. She wouldn't be adverse to having a long friendly discussion with one over coffee.

How would she react upon finding out the Negaverse and Senshi's were magical?
Mentally squee over becoming a magical girl, cover the city for the next day looking for Senshi to test out their powers, then basically let her fascination die down a bit.

How would she react to killing humans/senshi?
Crystal would be repulsed at first, only kill bums and the like, but slowly become more and more detached from her dislike of killing and eventually kill schoolmates (or try to).
Senshi, well...Crystal doesn't quite know what to do. If they try to hurt her, she will want to kill them. And since most Senshi will try to kill her, it works.

How would she react being told what to do and being punished?
Crystal isn't used to being ordered around, but would grudgingly accept it from people who have been in the Negaverse longer than her. Being punished...she'd freak out for a bit, then do it just so her punishment wouldn't get worse.

How would the Negaverse affect her?
Crystal would slowly become more ruthless and ready to do anything to achieve her-or her leader's-goals. She'll also become more submissive if it's needed.

Posted: Wed Jan 13, 2010 1:14 pm

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Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 12:19 pm

You need to elaborate on EVERY flaw and virtue. Right now, they're extremely cookie-cutter and a bit on the overpowered side.

For example, what sort of stuff IS she dedicated to if it's not school? What does she want to do? How does this dedication apply to other parts of her personality?

Leader's blood. How does she take leadership? In a bossy manner? In a gentle but assertive manner? Give examples here.

Taking the Initiative. Okay, she likes to start things? But you've got my confused, she'll take the first blow for you because she started it? Are you referring to fights and stuff here?

Deceitful - why is she deceitful? Was it due to something in her past? Why does she feel the need to lie about everything? I dont see how this matches. If she's a leader and she's dedicated, why would she lie? Who would want to believe a leader that lies?

Your cheeky flaw doesn't seem to make any sense at all. She's impudent because.. her tuition is paid and she wont stop taking classes? .. What? I think you need to revise this here!

Alluring seems to be an overpowered quality. She can't fool anyone/everyone-- perhaps, she thinks she can? What sort of mental and verbal traps does she lay? Why would people fall for them? Or perhaps, she had the tendency to try lay such traps?

How would she react to killing human/senshi? "Senshi, well...they're awesome magical people and Crystal will try not to kill them, if only to check out their powers. " <-- She's supposed to try and kill senshi! It's the entire goal of the negaverse, good versus evil.

Why would she be picked to be in the Negaverse?
Crystal, if turned into a mythical creature, would be a Siren-the kind that lures sailors in with their voice and makes them run their own ship into the rocks.
She is very, very good at setting traps for people...especially mental and vocal.

.. Why would.. Crystal be turned into a mythical creature? LOL I am baffled. Negaverse get weapons. Not turned into.. creatures. IF you wanted a super special awesome voice, I would have advised you to get a senshi but the senshi of song and voice have already been taken~ So I recommend getting a weapon because negaverse dont usually have such abilities.

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