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Skatergrl13_krissy

PostPosted: Sat Dec 26, 2009 7:34 pm


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Yeah, can someone give me pointers on how I can improve this? besides the following:
shadowing
color
background


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PostPosted: Sat Dec 26, 2009 7:42 pm


its good but then again everyone can improve, i would sugest looking up on anatomy to get a more human apearance to the drawing. not making it look human but making the limbs and body curve at the right points. heres a good tip to learn more with drawing bodys try looking at swimsuit magazines because they really show the female figure. just try to draw them in anime form and pay close atention to the curves of there body. well thats all i have for ya, good luck xp

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Skatergrl13_krissy

PostPosted: Tue Dec 29, 2009 4:13 pm


no more newb 1
its good but then again everyone can improve, i would sugest looking up on anatomy to get a more human apearance to the drawing. not making it look human but making the limbs and body curve at the right points. heres a good tip to learn more with drawing bodys try looking at swimsuit magazines because they really show the female figure. just try to draw them in anime form and pay close atention to the curves of there body. well thats all i have for ya, good luck xp


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PostPosted: Tue Dec 29, 2009 4:20 pm


I'm going to echo no more newb 1 on this one.
You should improve on anatomy and proportions. Try drawing the pose you want with a very rough sketch of the joints and bones, etc first.
You have to know the bare neccessities before you dress the person with skin and clothes, right?
And the face also has proportions.
Practice proportions~

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Trunksmad

PostPosted: Tue Dec 29, 2009 7:00 pm


It looks cute. Keep on practicing.
PostPosted: Wed Dec 30, 2009 2:24 pm


The hands should only reach down to around the middle of the thighs, not that close to the knees. The upper arm to our left is a lot thicker than the other arm...

The eye on the right is taller than the one on the left. The iris/pupil should be the same size on both eyes even if you intended to have one eye more open than the other or whatever.

I can't really tell if it's a male or a female.

The stars need some real work... It looks like you just got lazy there.
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Not bad overall.

Zantetsken


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PostPosted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 2:35 pm


For her left leg, HER left knee looks awkwardly faced to where to the shoe is facing.

He arm is rather skinny and looks like a rectangle that was bent in half. Add a little more shape neh? : ] Her right arm is a bit fatter than her left, and there isn't that much detail up in the upper areas of the body. but other than that. everything looks ok. o3o
PostPosted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 7:53 pm


ok i kinda agree with everyone else but you also need too look at the size of your head i mean it looks a little too big for the boddy

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 06, 2010 8:47 am


you should probably work on your hands and feet a tad more. but otherwise its pretty darn good.
PostPosted: Wed Jan 13, 2010 10:04 pm


forget coloring for now, and focus on how to draw your human bodies better.

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