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 Posted: Sat Dec 19, 2009 4:22 pm
 Clan Name: Fuma(風魔, literally means Wind Demon, anime translated it to Demon Wind) Village: Founded in Amegakure, many of the ninja of the Fuma Clan have branched out, creating bases in Konohagakure, Kirigakure, and Otogakure, and Kusagakure(waiting for approval on Konohagakure, Amegakure, and Kusagakure,) Element Affinity: Wind, +Member's Choice for a second(should they want one) Specialty: Taijutsu/Shuriken users, but ninjutsu is available to them, albeit weaker than the average, while genjutsu is not even an option for them. Fighting Style: Fuma members are trained in the art of Gouken from birth, therefore the majority of the clan uses it, but some opt to become experts in other fighting styles. Description of Limit: No true Kekkai Genkai, Fuma clan members have been simply known to have uncanny accuracy with shurikens, especially those of their own making(Fuuma Shurikens) and be mainly Taijutsu users, the absolute masters combining their elemental affinity to use Nintaijutsu. Description: A small clan of shinobi unable to use genjutsu and have a lack of skill in ninjutsu. They make up for it in uncanny skill with shuriken and taijutsu. Their main goal is simply to make a name for themselves. History: The Fuma clan, or formally called Fuma Ichizoku, was founded long ago, probably around 600, maybe 550 years ago in Amegakure, or at least that's where they were first known, since nobody knows who the first Fuma was, but the clan members just say they hail from Amegakure just to make it easier on everyone. Credited with the design and invention of the infamous Fuuma Shuriken, the Fuma clan members are a proud, if not aggressive people. Always competitive, they strove to outdo one another and their teammates. One day, a sort of in-clan war broke out, where half the clan wanted to leave Amegakure, the other half argued that they had earned a decent and respectable reputation there, and they refused to leave. The ones who wanted to leave wanted to simply explore more of the world, but the clan elders decided that it was for the best to stay in Amegakure. Almost immediately protesting, the other Fuma's decided to just disband from the clan. Still using the Fuma name, they set up "bases" and new homes in other villages such as Konohagakure(awaiting approval), Kirigakure(awaiting approval), and Otogakire. Throughout all the wars, the Fuma clan have survived, numbering almost 1,000 people put together in seperate villages. Through the generations and all the wars, the Fuma's had forgotten why they disbanded and some were in different villages than others, and dismissed it as mere expansion all those years ago. Using their gouken style taijutsu and their even more famous invention, the Fuuma shuriken, it was very easy to recognize a single Fuma clan member in battle. Known only for their taijutsu and shuriken use, many have assumed that the Fuma simply cannot USE ninjutsu or genjutsu, this rumor was confirmed when a Fuma member freely admitted that he could not use any form of genjutsu, but he merely said that he "sucked" at ninjutsu. This information was leaked to certain high ranking members of the government who were the clan's enemies, and tried to exploit this weakness and assasinate a member, but the clan member easily dispatched whoever they sent to kill him, stating that "Anyone that wants a Fuma member dead should meet them in honorable combat, and do so without being overconfident." After that incident, nobody tried to bother the Fuma again, all citizens understanding that they were not to be dealt even with their genjutsu crutch. In game Stats: Unable to USE any type of genjutsu, able to identify and repel with the normal will saves.+50% Shuriken Skill +40% Dexterity -25% Ninjutsu In a fight with another Fuma clan member, if the same wind jutsu is used by both sides, the damage from both is reduced to .5x damage. (to promote peace and stability) Habits and Social Structure: The younger members of the clan are notoriously bitter at the fact that they cannot utilize the shinobi skill of genjutsu, but the more mature members have accepted that fact and work hard in society to prove their worth in other areas of expertise. Internally, they like to hold a tournament of sorts once a year open to all clan members to try to make a name for themselves. This competition evaluates how much raw skill and talent one has, and has simple games ranging from shuriken target practice to challenges such as sparring with the previous champion. Quirks and Special Features: May NOT learn any type of genjutsu. Takes .5x amount of time to learn any shuriken affiliated jutsu. Takes 1.3 amount of time to learn any other jutsu(Non-wind related Ninjutsu, Medical jutsu) Jutsu List: Name: Kaze Shuriken Description: The user pressurizes the air around them to form a "shuriken" of sorts. Chakra is infused into the edges and is then thrown to inflict damage onto anybody within range. This technique and process is known and used only by the Fuma Clan to prepare their young academy students and genins for techniques that require a large amount of chakra control and precision. Rank: D Cp Cost: 3 per shuriken Attack Turns: 1 to craft, 1 to throw Reflex DC: 10 Damage: 3-4 + chakra mod + dexterity mod Requirements: Ninjutsu 5, Chakra Control 10
Training: 2 stages. {See table below.}
Stage I: Ninjutsu 15: Pressurize the air around you to form a shuriken
Chakra Control 20: Throw the shuriken and attempt to maintain the sharp edges while it flies through the air until it hits a target.
Special: 1)Shuriken dissipates after impact, therefore not allowing an enemy to throw it back.
2) Can throw as many as [Chakra Control / seven] rounded down.
Owner: Zent0s
Owner: Zent0s
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Posted: Thu Dec 24, 2009 8:13 am
Hmmm the Fuma huh? Man this is a pain cause evne in real history there was confusing evidence that stated there may have been 2 separate clans. A Fuma clan and Fuuma clan.
You know, for the ingame stats, you don’t have to alter ALL the stats. Just the ones that mostly would be bothered by the clans abilities. For a clan that’s perfectly human, just good with shurikens, I’d just expect a boost to range damage and dex and maybe a drop in melee damage or something. Nothing much more than that… oh some skill points too I suppose.
No to all time stuff.
So you don’t want Chakugan and keikakku:
@Beast wave palm: never saw that one… or heard of it being used in the anime. Checked a few places too and didn’t see anything about it. I got no problem with the jutsu itself, just wondering where your source is coming from?
@Whirlwind punch: you’d be a kinda sitting duck while you did that wouldn’t you? Seems a stupid technique to me.
And what is it with you newbs and not liking damn damage ranges? I try explaining and you still don’t like it (not explained to you directly, just a general rant)
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Posted: Thu Dec 24, 2009 11:59 am
sweatdrop In the anime the Fuuma clan was actually the one who had made the shuriken and Kankuro was part of the Fuma clan, the kanji written for both was actually different too, so.. they just sound and look the same in english. sweatdrop I just thought it would be easier to make it more english and have my clan with only 1 u, but I can make it Fuuma if it's easier for you. most of these jutsus come from the naruto wiki here. Yeah Chakugan and Keikkaku were something I wanted to put in, but they were too similar to Hatsuchi and Okazai, so I just took them out. For the stats, I was thinking about like adding to range and dex and stuff, but at the same time I didn't have enough negatives, so for the boosts in dex(for range) and str(for gouken taijutsu) I just took out int and wis stats. sweatdrop Couldn't think of any other way to balance it. edit: and this isn't just a clan thats ONLY good with shuriken, I was kinda focusing on below average ninjutsu/genjutsu but good taijutsu/shuriken damage. soo I really wouldn't like to take down taijutsu if it mean better shuriken stats, I'm trying to find a balance there. So i'd be boosting taijutsu/ranged attacks and be losing ninjutsu/genjutsu ranks/chakra control. Uhh, damage ranges as in close range and long range? for the whirlwind punch I was kinda thinking of like... maybe 10 feet away from the person, RIGHT next to them would make them a bit of a sitting duck. Can I know why I can't have any of the time related stuff? I admit that the 1.25 to Gouken is kinda weird because they don't specialize JUST in gouken, but it is their main taijutsu use, and since this is a taijutsu/shuriken clan I though that it would make it harder to focus on something other than those. I admit the .75x time to learn wind jutsu is a bit off, that was partly from the first rough draft of this, I'll take that out. Also, the 1.5x amount of time to learn any other jutsu would just be another negative so... I don't really see that big of a problem with it. explain? xp
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Posted: Sat Dec 26, 2009 10:31 pm
Tell you what... if you can get this clan approved by Carlos, then it can be a clan accepted in Amegakure.
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Posted: Fri Jun 04, 2010 11:34 pm
bump to keep this alive, please don't delete kouri ^^
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Posted: Tue Jul 13, 2010 2:20 pm
I'm a new helper here and you're at the bottom of the list, so lets go.
I don't get why they use Taijutsu? I mean using giant shuriken and wind techniques is a long range fighter, it make more sense for them to be good at ninjutsu and bad at Taijutsu, but I suppose it's your clan.
-For your in-game stats, don't dot he +3 to attack dc with shuriken, and +2 to damage with shuriken. The Shuriken skill does this for you, so if you simply say +5 to shuriken skill per 10 lvls, that would be much better.
-Don't -3 nin every 10 levels, it doesn't make sense for someone to loose skill over time. Instead start with a bigger penalty and leave it. Such as -10 ninjutsu.
-I wouldn't limit your users to only gouken, you have already disabled them with the loss of genjutsu and ninjutsu.
-for your beast palm jutsu, the chk control +20 doesn't go in special it goes in requirements. Just clarifying.
-I agree with Carlos on not liking whirlwind, it seemed sort of like a random and unnecessary jutsu. Also this clan seems to wind oriented, other clans focus only on wind so we wouldn't want you make a duplicate clan. I suggest, getting rid or whirlwind and making a few other jutsu that combine shuriken and wind attacks. Just as throwing out 50 shuriken and then propelling them with wind. I don't know be creative.
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Posted: Tue Sep 07, 2010 9:14 pm
cheerios18 I'm a new helper here and you're at the bottom of the list, so lets go. I don't get why they use Taijutsu? I mean using giant shuriken and wind techniques is a long range fighter, it make more sense for them to be good at ninjutsu and bad at Taijutsu, but I suppose it's your clan. I was trying to make them more balanced but have distinct characteristics in their fighting style >.< Not something I'm looking to change ):-For your in-game stats, don't dot he +3 to attack dc with shuriken, and +2 to damage with shuriken. The Shuriken skill does this for you, so if you simply say +5 to shuriken skill per 10 lvls, that would be much better. -Don't -3 nin every 10 levels, it doesn't make sense for someone to loose skill over time. Instead start with a bigger penalty and leave it. Such as -10 ninjutsu. Will change shortly in the next post with full updates when I have time-I wouldn't limit your users to only gouken, you have already disabled them with the loss of genjutsu and ninjutsu. What other kinds of taijutsu are there? I'll make a slight change in their history about that.-for your beast palm jutsu, the chk control +20 doesn't go in special it goes in requirements. Just clarifying. Will correct soon ^_^-I agree with Carlos on not liking whirlwind, it seemed sort of like a random and unnecessary jutsu. Also this clan seems to wind oriented, other clans focus only on wind so we wouldn't want you make a duplicate clan. I suggest, getting rid or whirlwind and making a few other jutsu that combine shuriken and wind attacks. Just as throwing out 50 shuriken and then propelling them with wind. I don't know be creative.
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Posted: Wed Sep 08, 2010 7:10 pm
Zent0s Clan Name: Fuma(風魔, literally means Wind Demon, anime translated it to Demon Wind)Village: Founded in Amegakure, many of the ninja of the Fuma Clan have branched out, creating bases in Konohagakure, Kirigakure, and Otogakure, and Kusagakure(waiting for approval on Konohagakure, Amegakure, and Kusagakure,)Element Affinity: Wind, +Member's Choice for a second(should they want one)Specialty: Taijutsu/Shuriken users, but ninjutsu is available to them, albeit weaker than the average, while genjutsu is not even an option for them.Fighting Style: Fuma members are trained in the art of Gouken from birth, therefore the majority of the clan uses it, but some opt to become experts in other fighting styles.Description of Limit: No true Kekkai Genkai, Fuma clan members have been simply known to have uncanny accuracy with shurikens, especially those of their own making(Fuuma Shurikens) and be mainly Taijutsu users, the absolute masters combining their elemental affinity to use Nintaijutsu. Description: A small clan of shinobi unable to use genjutsu and have a lack of skill in ninjutsu. They make up for it in uncanny skill with shuriken and taijutsu. Their main goal is simply to make a name for themselves. History: The Fuma clan, or formally called Fuma Ichizoku, was founded long ago, probably around 600, maybe 550 years ago in Amegakure, or at least that's where they were first known, since nobody knows who the first Fuma was, but the clan members just say they hail from Amegakure just to make it easier on everyone. Credited with the design and invention of the infamous Fuuma Shuriken, the Fuma clan members are a proud, if not aggressive people. Always competitive, they strove to outdo one another and their teammates. One day, a sort of in-clan war broke out, where half the clan wanted to leave Amegakure, the other half argued that they had earned a decent and respectable reputation there, and they refused to leave. The ones who wanted to leave wanted to simply explore more of the world, but the clan elders decided that it was for the best to stay in Amegakure. Almost immediately protesting, the other Fuma's decided to just disband from the clan. Still using the Fuma name, they set up "bases" and new homes in other villages such as Konohagakure(awaiting approval), Kirigakure(awaiting approval), and Otogakire. Throughout all the wars, the Fuma clan have survived, numbering almost 1,000 people put together in seperate villages. Through the generations and all the wars, the Fuma's had forgotten why they disbanded and some were in different villages than others, and dismissed it as mere expansion all those years ago. Using their gouken style taijutsu and their even more famous invention, the Fuuma shuriken, it was very easy to recognize a single Fuma clan member in battle. Known only for their taijutsu and shuriken use, many have assumed that the Fuma simply cannot USE ninjutsu or genjutsu, this rumor was confirmed when a Fuma member freely admitted that he could not use any form of genjutsu, but he merely said that he "sucked" at ninjutsu. This information was leaked to certain high ranking members of the government who were the clan's enemies, and tried to exploit this weakness and assasinate a member, but the clan member easily dispatched whoever they sent to kill him, stating that "Anyone that wants a Fuma member dead should meet them in honorable combat, and do so without being overconfident."
After that incident, nobody tried to bother the Fuma again, all citizens understanding that they were not to be dealt even with their genjutsu crutch. In game Stats: Unable to USE any type of genjutsu, able to identify and repel with the normal will saves.+50% Shuriken Skill level +20% Strength level +35% Taijutsu level -25% Ninjutsu level In a fight with another Fuma clan member, if the same wind jutsu is used by both sides, the damage from both is reduced to .5x damage. (this is to try and stop anymore in-fighting within the Fuma clan, I wouldn't want a repeat razz ) Habits and Social Structure: The younger members of the clan are notoriously bitter at the fact that they cannot utilize the shinobi skill of genjutsu, but the more mature members have accepted that fact and work hard in society to prove their worth in other areas of expertise. Internally, they like to hold a tournament of sorts once a year open to all clan members to try to make a name for themselves. This competition evaluates how much raw skill and talent one has, and has simple games ranging from shuriken target practice to challenges such as sparring with the previous champion. Quirks and Special Features: May NOT learn any type of genjutsu. Takes .5x amount of time to learn any shuriken affiliated jutsu. Takes 1.5 amount of time to learn any other jutsu(Non-wind related Ninjutsu, Medical jutsu) Jutsu List:
Name: Kaze Shuriken
Description: The user pressurizes the air around them to form a "shuriken" of sorts. Chakra is infused into the edges and is then thrown to inflict damage onto anybody within range. This technique and process is known and used only by the Fuma Clan to prepare their young academy students and genins for techniques that require a large amount of chakra control and precision.
Rank: D
Cp Cost: 3 per shuriken to craft(1 per turn to maintain), 1 to throw and maintain sharp edges for damage.
Attack Turns: 1 to craft, 1 to throw
Reflex DC: 10
Damage: 3-4 + chakra mod + dexterity mod
Requirements: Ninjutsu 5, Chakra Control 10
Training: X stages. {See table below.}
Stage I: Ninjutsu 15: Pressurize the air around you to form a shuriken
Chakra Control 20: Throw the shuriken and attempt to maintain the sharp edges while it flies through the air until it hits a target.
Special: Shuriken dissipates after impact, therefore not allowing an enemy to throw it back.
Owner: Zent0s
Owner: Zent0s Is that any better? I deleted all the wind jutsu because they're already in the current list, I suppose I'll just think of some new jutsu later. Suggestions/help?
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Posted: Wed Sep 08, 2010 7:12 pm
Hrm, you may need to check out the new clan profile skeleton.
Top announcement...
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Posted: Wed Sep 08, 2010 7:20 pm
Qyp Hrm, you may need to check out the new clan profile skeleton. Top announcement... Edited, am I missing anything else? >_>
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Posted: Wed Sep 08, 2010 7:32 pm
Nope... it's all good to me. Just have to wait for crew to look at it now.
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Posted: Wed Dec 29, 2010 9:14 pm
Qyp Nope... it's all good to me. Just have to wait for crew to look at it now. well now you're crew so how's it lookin' :B
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Posted: Wed Dec 29, 2010 9:55 pm
Hmmm, It's good enough. Approved.
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