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 Posted: Thu Dec 03, 2009 9:18 pm
I am all alone here,
there is no one here beside me,
all my problems they are gone,
there is no one to deride me,
but you gotta have friends......
none of my friends on my list are online....its so sad.....someone save meh from the loneliness.... 
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Posted: Thu Dec 03, 2009 9:20 pm
=o
It looks to me like you're calling your 'friends' problems?
XD
Altho, it's correct in some cases. XDD
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O Righteous Overseer Crew
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Posted: Thu Dec 03, 2009 9:22 pm
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Posted: Thu Dec 03, 2009 9:24 pm
____________♥Dark ✖ Angel♦____________
You reminded me of a poem I wrote a long time ago... ninja
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Posted: Thu Dec 03, 2009 9:30 pm
o.O I wasn't calling anyone a problem (at least not intentionally...o.O) I am just lonely and I wanted peoples to talk to me!!!
razz Really? That's cool Tsukiyomi
HAI OVERSEER!!!!!!!
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Posted: Thu Dec 03, 2009 9:31 pm
XDD
I kid, I kid. Really.
I think the poem was nice. =3
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Posted: Thu Dec 03, 2009 9:32 pm
____________♥Dark ✖ Angel♦____________
TK is fine, darling. 3nodding Would you like for me to post it? ninja
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Posted: Thu Dec 03, 2009 11:29 pm
^_^ Yea if you want to I like Poetry...I used to write a lot but I feel like a lot of it was dumb...and I generally don't write anymore unless I'm really upset (I never wrote happy poems o.O)
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O Righteous Overseer Crew
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Posted: Thu Dec 03, 2009 11:30 pm
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Posted: Thu Dec 03, 2009 11:35 pm
Okie.
@ Overseer: Hiya!
"Betrayl"
You tell me you love me
You tell me I'm sweet
But these words were lies
How could I believe?
You've hurt me so
You've left me here
But I took you back
Not thinking about the bad
And then you abused me
Again and again
How could you be so cruel?
I thought our love would never end
Now I'm sitting here
Feeding your kid
I'm only sixteen
You're so full of s**t
I am alone now
But I have friends
Lucky for me
Now I am so free.
~Yeah...don't ask me how that little tidbit reminded me of this particular poem... sweatdrop
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Posted: Fri Dec 04, 2009 12:01 am
Aw that's sad and deep sad he must have been a jerk.... I am going to look up a couple of my old ones in a minute.... well this is the only one I could find so here it goes....
Thursday, June 15, 2006
Looking in the Mirror.
Current mood: depressed
Category: Writing and Poetry
Sometimes, When I look in the mirror, I see someone I'm not meant to be.
A sad,lonely, and tortured,soul. Upon me the weight takes its toll.
The loss of the ones I love slowly drives me insane.
The memories of the good times racking my brain.
The tears that spill on this pillow cannot describe,
The terrible sadness that I feel inside.
The blood that I want to drop to my feet.
as I'm feeling incomplete, will never spill.
I will never overdose on pills.
I will never hang myself with glee.
That just isn't me.
But who am I really? As the memories ring
Through every single corner of my disturbed and tortured brain
I wish they would stop. No silence for me.
No peace. No peace.
As I cry myself to sleep.
Currently listening:
Take a Look in the Mirror
By Korn
Release date: 21 November, 2003
sad thing is it makes more sense to me now than it did then as that was 4 months before my mom died......its worse now >.< ugh
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Posted: Fri Dec 04, 2009 12:16 am
Everone's been in the mood for poems. We should make a soap box thread for everyone to step up and share poetry. Besides the Haiku train, that is. :3
Everyone's poems are so good. *huggles Rose*
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Posted: Fri Dec 04, 2009 12:17 am
I've never been very good at Haiku >.<
btw Aru your sig reminds me of Nation Lampoon lmao
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Posted: Fri Dec 04, 2009 12:30 am
sweatdrop Uhm, sometimes, when I write, I am thinking as if I was someone else...not myself...And, that DEFINITELY wasn't myself... sweatdrop And, nice.
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Posted: Fri Dec 04, 2009 12:55 am
That's the beauty of writing though, eh? lol. You're just fine, TK. heart And I liked your Poem, I did. 3nodding Keep writing, you'll only get better and better. You've got a good sense of imagery already!
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