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 Posted: Wed Nov 25, 2009 4:11 pm
I decided to take on yet another quest.
This is my quest for Alistair Delaney/Sailor Enif.
I still haven't added in a few things, so I'm still working on it.
Crit on what I do have would be wonderful though. <3
ON HOLD WHILE I DECIDE ON A LOT OF THINGS!
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Posted: Wed Nov 25, 2009 4:13 pm
Student Info
Name: Alistair Delaney
Nicknames: "Stairs"
Gender: Male
Age: 17
School: Sovereign Heights - Graduated Meadowview.
Favorite Food: Fried Lasagna
Hated Food: Calamari
Hobbies:
Karaoke - Though his singing voice isn't all that great there's nothing Alistair loves more than to belt out a good song with friends either at home, a club or anywhere really. He loves getting new Karaoke machines and collects the CD's. He'll even use his computer to take off vocal tracks to make his own customized tracks. Right now he's working towards adding all of his favorite tracks to a "karaoke ipod" which he takes everywhere.
Virtues:
Resourceful - He has no map? No car? No phone? No problem! Alistair has a knack of finding solutions to problems, even if the methods might seem odd. Though it may be looked at as dumb luck, Alistair prides himself in trying to be a modern MacGuyver when it comes to solving his problems.
Optimistic - It’s pouring outside and Alistair lost his umbrella and his backpack in the rain and yet… he’s smiling? Alistair doesn't like letting the worst get him down. He looks at the glass overflowing in happiness rather than full or empty. Cheering people up with his sunny disposition makes his day. (Even if they weren't asking for it.)
Humility – Alistair won't put himself up on a pedestal and considers others to be as important as himself, even if he himself doesn't like them. That doesn't make them lower on the ladder in his eyes. Rather than beat himself up over mistakes he learns from them. Alistair won't beat himself up when something goes wrong or over-glorify himself when he does something great. He is thankful, not boastful.
Flaws:
Impulsive - Alistair has no fear into jumping forward into the unknown, even at his own risk. He has a theory that things will always look up, even if he’s going off a cliff. This can make him quite the fool when leaping before he looks and has gotten him into a lot of trouble in the past. Without warning what he thinks will be said and what he wants to do, he'll do.
No Poker Face - He can’t even hide it when he’s blushing. Alistair has never been a good liar, not even on the phone. When it comes time and he needs to bluff, he can’t. Not even with the ladies! No matter what the circumstance, when he has the need to keep a straight face he won’t be able to do it.
Squeamish of Blood – At the sight of blood Alistair is the first to back away. The deep red color drives his stomach to tighten and to feel sick or even faint. Paper-cuts can send him into hyperventilating spasms. It is something he tries to work through but has yet to overcome the oddly uncontrollable reaction. Larger wounds will have him on the floor in seconds. Rest assured, Alistair could never make it as a doctor.
PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION
Eyes: Alistair has an uncommon genetic occurrence known as “Complete Heterochromia” resulting on his right eye being green while his other is blue. His eyes are round shaped and sit normally on the face, not receding under his brow or out too far. They sit equally spaced on his face, with prominent eyelashes.
Hair: His head looks to be full of wheat, with light blond hair that slinks down with its mild waviness to the middle of his back. From the front, his bangs are layered out softly with a mild widow’s peak. Most of the time he brushes it all the way through to give it a shine He prefers to not wear it in a pony tail but will do so if his outfit calls for it.
Face: Alistair has an oval face with a small protruding chin. His nose is elongated but is flatter, closer to his face. His cheek bones stand out and create a distinct subtle chisel to the face, but the rest of his face remains full, not sunken in like a skeleton.
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Posted: Wed Nov 25, 2009 4:17 pm
::Senshi Info::
Senshi: Sailor Enif, Senshi of Fireworks!
Challenge: See the light-show? Here comes the boom!
Fuku:
Coming soon!
Attacks:
Attack 1a: Firecracker Rumble!
Sailor Enif takes his hands and puts them directly in front of him, stretched out. He then swoops behind him and meets his hand in the back. Immediately following this motion anything in a four foot radius, with the exception of himself, is bombarded by small explosions at their feet, to simulate a circular firecracker chain wound around into the small circular attack range.. This attack will harm the feet of the enemy as well as give for a temporary disturbance. (As firecrackers are quite loud.). The duration of the attack lasts ninety seconds, leaving very little time to either strike a physical blow or run away. The opponent must be in the four foot circular radius around this attack to work! One large downside: let’s hope the enemy isn’t wearing steel boots.
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Posted: Wed Nov 25, 2009 4:21 pm
::Other Info::
Enif is the brightest star in the Pegasus Constellation. It is known to be an extremely violent star and has shown signs such as popping flares, which is a rare occurrence to be seen among stars.
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Posted: Wed Nov 25, 2009 4:23 pm
Alright, looking for crits on what I have now.
Anyone have any advice on if I should change the wording of "Blood Squeamish"? sweatdrop
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Posted: Sat Jan 23, 2010 7:26 am
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Posted: Wed Jan 27, 2010 3:41 am
Oooh, thanks. I'm not sure if we can use phobias though... I thought it was a no-no. D:
I'll get working more on him soon. Still debating over a lot with him.
> w <;;
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Posted: Wed Mar 03, 2010 6:50 pm
Okay, I have to be the bearer of bad news... Alistair is really not the best name for this shop, as we already have Alistair "Eon", who was Chronos' Cavalier, and I'm pretty sure there's another one floating around. I'd really choose a different name.
I'd be careful with using blood-squeamish as a weakness. It'd be okay if you had another flaw, but that one is your third. Try another one?
I love his attack, though.
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Posted: Wed Mar 03, 2010 8:05 pm
I have a lot of work to do on him, that's for sure. Thanks for taking a look though, I appreciate it. C: My priorites shifted a teeny tiny bit though, so I think he's going on a back burner for a while before going into a re-vamp. >__<;; I still plan to have a Senshi of Fireworks, but Alistair will have to change a lot.
Edit:
I'm actually going to put this on hold for the time being due to a change in priorities of my quests and due to a lot of changes that must be made.
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