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Posted: Tue Nov 17, 2009 5:26 pm
HaaaahaaaahaaaahaaaaHAAAAAAAA!!!! Glass shattered and wood splintered as Kenji busted through the window, sending shards and glass and wood all over as he gracefully entered the room with a Flying dragon kick, his form perfect and magnificent as he hit the ground in an acrobatic roll, standing up and posing dramatically as he announced the the room that he had arrived! "YOU'RE SENSEI HAS ARR---...wait, where is everyone?" Looking around the room, Kenji saw that for the first time, he was the first one to arrive in the classroom. Sighing and hanging his head in a defeated pout at the lack of audience, he glumly grabbed a broom and swept up the mess. After it was done, he moved to the teacher's chair and sat down, putting his legs up on the desk and leaning back, awaiting Haruko and the student's arrival. "I can't believe I rushed just to get here before everyone else...but at least the headache and equilibrium problems are gone." (bboy, your first test is to post in here to show that you found the classroom.)
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Posted: Wed Nov 18, 2009 1:49 pm
ryoku steps in the room "umm hi what happened to the window"
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Posted: Wed Nov 18, 2009 1:53 pm
"If you had made it here a little earlier, you could have seen me come through it, but I was unfortunately early to the room this time around. Oh well." Kenji got up off of the teacher's chair and walked over to Ryoku, bowing politely to him, "My name is Soryuu Kenji, but you can just call me Kenji. I will be your sensei on your way to becoming a Genin."
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Posted: Wed Nov 18, 2009 2:07 pm
bows to cobra "i am ryoku uchiha and i apoligize for my lateness"
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Posted: Wed Nov 18, 2009 2:15 pm
Haruko walked down the hall of the academy with Rei in toll and as she neared today's desinated classroom, Haruko thought she heard voices. 'Hm, it seems like someone's already in there. Wow, I guess there really are people who can get here early.' Haruko walked up to the door and slid it open. As she walked in Haruko saw a boy with shaggy black hair and tanned skin and quickly assumed that he was her student. But what was surprising to her was that he was not alone in the room and that Kenji was already there. 'Wow, never expected him to get here before me. I just assumed he would be arriving late after last night's incident. Oh well.'
Smiling she walked deeper into the room and greeted the two boys, "Good morning guys. I see you got here early today Kenji-san, good job." Haruko then turned her attention to their student. "And you must be Ryoku-san, pleasure to meet you. My name's Haruko Tsubame and the shallow with me is Rei, my sommoning." Rei landed on her shoulder as she extended her right hand for Ryoku to shake.
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Posted: Wed Nov 18, 2009 2:20 pm
"Alright, well please take a seat and we can begin the class."
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ((Right off the bat here, I want to try to destroy some bad habits...
1. This is a semi-literate to literate RP , please check your spelling, capitalization, and grammar when making a post. firefox has an internal spell checker, so all you have to do is simply read over your post and fix the squiggly underlined red words. it takes 20 seconds at most and makes a world of difference.
2. We prefer things in novel format. Not that you can always make your post several sentences long, but its generally a good idea to be more descriptive then simply "walks into the room." Take your time to describe what your character sees, what he's thinking...is he nervous, is he excited. Use your words to describe your actions rather then just doing them. Instead of saying 'He sits down.' ...say 'He walked over to the desk as his sensei told him to and sat down, ready to learn.' Also, when someone performs an action, respond to it and explain how you felt, or your reaction to their action.))
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Posted: Wed Nov 18, 2009 2:25 pm
Kenji turned as Haruko entered the room and gave her a smile as she greeted him. He merely nodded at her comment of him getting here early as if it were to be expected, and walked over to his desk as he began writing the first assignment on the board, giving her time to introduce herself to Ryoku. They could converse after they was sent Ryoku to do his research.
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Posted: Wed Nov 18, 2009 2:38 pm
"hello haruko sensei" he said as he quickly shook her hand and hurried to his seat
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Posted: Wed Nov 18, 2009 2:47 pm
Haruko watched as Ryoku quickly shake hands with her before rushing to his seat and smiled at the his eagarness to quickly start his genin lessons. Walking up to the teaher's desk, she used her arms as a brace and she leaned back on the table. While waiting for Kenji to finish writing, Haruko decided to start a light conversation with their student. "So Ryoku-san, how about telling us a bit about yourself before we start?"
{true bboy, I suggest you read Cobra's notes before typing up your next response. I've looked at your last post and it didn't seem to show that you've read all the pointers. This might sound annoying but you must remember that this is a semi-literate guild, so watch your spelling, grammer, and puncuation.}
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Posted: Wed Nov 18, 2009 3:11 pm
"well theres not much to tell i started training from a young age my mother and father died when i was about 10 so i have always pushed my self so that i could live up to the expectations of the uchiha clan members (they were an elite clan in my home village) and to catch the person that killed my parents wow guess that is alot. " he says with a zoned out look on his face
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Posted: Wed Nov 18, 2009 3:31 pm
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ((Alright, well that is better in terms of length, HOWEVER I checked your post and you have used ZERO punctuation. No periods, no commas, no nothing, just parentheses ...which I'm not even sure should be there, since I don't understand if you're talking to the reader with them or not...though I think you are. You did however seem to spell check! So good job there!
Please go back over your post and edit it to include punctuation and proper capitalization, such as "I' instead of "i" where appropriate (namely, when it is by itself). Also remove the part about Uchiha. Call it the Agora People, Call it the Balawaba Clan of Southwest Muridom, or make up whatever you want; Just don't directly reference Naruto canon. Thanks!))
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Posted: Wed Nov 18, 2009 5:47 pm
Haruko nodded her head in awknowledgement. "I know you feel hurt by the death of your parents but revenage isn't the way to live one's life. You shouldn't dedicated your whole life into chasing down just one person because by narrowing your world, you'll find that you're missing out on a lot of things that life has to offer. But," Haruko pushed herself off the table and moved towards the window and stared outside. "who am I to tell you what you should or shouldn't do with your life. Afterall, I'm just your sensei, a small guilding light to help kickstart you on your journey to becoming a ninja. But as a fellow ninja, I fear for you whose life could end at anytime once you venture outside the protective walls of the village to set your sights on only one thing and ignore the rest of the world around you." Turning away from the window, she gave him a smile. "But, just remember that the most important thing is leaving thing to the fullest."
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Bashful Conversationalist
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Posted: Wed Nov 18, 2009 7:40 pm
Kaiin silently walks into the door way without anyone noticing with his hands in his pockets.He first looks at the man standing in front of the class, looks at the other students showing no expression on his face, then shifts his attention back to the teacher. My apologies for being late sensei.he says in a calm but stern voice he takes couple of steps into the class still with his hands in his pocket.My name is Kaiin Hirashima obviously this is my first day here.he pauses for a second then speaks again. So may i take a seat?
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Posted: Wed Nov 18, 2009 7:46 pm
Kenji turned as he heard Kaiin come into the room. After listening to him, he was impressed with the calmness of his voice..."Most people are usually much more nervous then this...it seems that we have a cool customer on our hands." "Your apology is accepted Kaiin, we have been expecting you, or if not you specifically, another student at the very least. Please, have a seat. My name is Kenji and the lovely lady here is Haruko, my co-teacher, and your sensei as well."
"While you do that, why don't you tell us a little bit more about yourself and what brings you to the village and to the academy."
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Bashful Conversationalist
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Posted: Wed Nov 18, 2009 8:02 pm
Kaiin starts to speak as he heads over to an empty seat.Well, I'm not originally from this village im from a town were there are no ninjas, and i dont know the name of it or what its called. The only thing i know, that i was sent here by my parents when i was young to stay with my aunt and uncle here in the village.Kaiin finally makes his way to his seat near they end of the first row and sits down.Ive joined the academy on a hunch, I know what ever happened there wasn't good so Ive decided to join the academy and become a ninja just in case certain skills are needed if you know what i mean.
(sorry its late)
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