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StarshineAngel01

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PostPosted: Tue Oct 27, 2009 8:12 pm


Senshi: Sailor Orpheus, Senshi of Poetry

Name: Trevor Rose

Nicknames: Trev

Age:18

Birthday: July 10

Sign: Cancer

Blood Type: A

Fav. Food: Ice cream

Hated Food: onion

School: Meadowview

Hobbies: Reading,playing soccer, Taking walks and getting fresh air, writing poetry and stories

Reading: Trevor Rose, likes to read in his spare time or when he has to waste time faster. He is similiar to his sister in this hobby,he likes to read books in any type of genre, just not the researching genre where you have to read atlas, encyclopedias and etc. Though the one particular genre he likes to read and looks forward to reading is Science-fiction.

Playing Soccer: Trevor Rose, also enjoys playing soccer he is on the school's soccer team and is positioned as Center forward so he basically starts the game and he is a quick runner. It would make you think he's on the track team or something. He first got interested into Soccer from watching the Fifa word cup on television with his father and because his dad is a soccer player. His two ultimate goals are to become a well-known player or perhaps go to the Olympics.

Taking walks and getting fresh air: He not only enjoys reading and playing soccer. He enjoys taking walks and getting fresh air when it isn't too cold or too hot outside. He is more of the outdoors type then the indoors if he is indoors for more than a few hours he will go outside and get some fresh air. He will often go by himself or with his sister every once in awhile when the weather permits them to.

Writing Poems/Stories: He also enjoys writing poetry and/ or stories. He loves to write because it is a technique to express himself. He will write poems about anything he finds an inspiration and his poems usually have a rhyme scheme to them. He loves writing stories as well and the ideas he uses come from what he observes and occasionally what he imagines in his head, his dream is to be a renound writer and hopefully either get a book of his poems published or a story he writes published.

Gemstone: Ruby

Virtues: Kind,outgoing, dependable

Kind:He tries to show his kindness in anyway he can and treats everyone fairly and treats them like he wants to be treated,with this virtue he practically helps his everyone he knows and likes and in most situations can reslove them with ease.

Outgoing: He is talkative and never stop when it is on topic that he loves so much. It would like take a miracle to get him to stop talking about topics that he knows so much about. For example History, he loves talking about history of objects. Since he believes that all objects have history behind them.

Dependable: He is very dependant when you give him a task to accomplish he will do his best to accomplish it. If someone asks him to do something for example help with school work or perhaps help them improve their skill he is a reliable source for that and will help them out in every way he can.

Flaws: Over-protective, overly serious, overthinker

Over-protective: Even though he may look perfect, he has one minor flaw, and that is he is over-protective of people he knows well and people he likes. One example of a situation where being over-protective back fires on him is when he knows that they are safe but his subconsious constantly informs him that they aren't even though they are. Another example of a situation where being over protective is bad is when he knows for a fact that there is no danger or that they are with people who arent going to hurt the person.

Serious: In certain situations he tends to be overly serious about some topics. So if a person is in a situation that doesn't seem too serious to him he will think otherwise. It mostly depends on the situation that he is in. One example of a situation where being too serious is a bad thing is when you invite him to a casual gathering or any type of gathering where you are suppose to have fun and enjoy yourself.

Overthinker: Is another one of his many flaws, not everyone is considered normal in any circumstances. For example if a person asks him to think of a solution that will help them reslove their situation he will overthink the topic and miss either the small details or miss the simple answer to the problem.

Challenge: I'am Sailor Orpheus! your doom is written in poetry.

    Attack #1- Cutting couplet
    [What it does] Orpheus recites two rhyming lines. When finished, the letters of these lines solidfy and fly at their target. Can be used twice in battle.

    Attack #2-Hazardous Haiku

    [What it does] Orpheus recites a haiku, using the 5-7-5 format. When finished the words solidify and fly at their target in three large waves. Can be used three times in battle.

    Attack #3-Sealing Sonnet

    [What it does]Orpheus recites a sonnet, using the traditional 14 lines. When finished, the words solidify and wrap themselves around their target. This can be used on Nega, Senshi, Civillian, as well as animals and objects. It cannot be used to bind any being with powers above the third tier. Will dissappear within 4 turns, or should the senshi be rendered unconcious. Can be used once a battle. "


Fuku
His senshi Fuku Instead of rounding the hems of his shirt you can just leave it straight. The part that is after the knot in his kerchief you can leave straight as well.

His shirt is white with the hem on the sleeves the blue you see in the ref picture. His shorts go up to his knees and in the blue that you see in the ref pic and the hems of his shorts with the color you used for the hems of his sleeve. He wears white golf-like gloves. He has a mini cape that go a bit past his bottom and in the blue that is used in the ref pic but instead of rounding them at the end just leave them straight. The rest of the details are shown in the reference picture I have up.


(Back story to the relationship between the two under construction)-is being reworded
PostPosted: Tue Oct 27, 2009 8:35 pm


The most obvious thing I can see is that I think you need some more flaws. :< He's overprotective, yes, but you also have 'protective' as a virtue. Is it a virtue or a flaw? I'd like to see some more flaws that aren't so closely tied to a virtue. :'D Another thing I'm interested in that relates to this is the bond he and his sister share. Why are they so close?

I'd also like to know how he got interested in playing soccer. And what kind of books does he like to read the most? Is there a specific genre he's most eager to read? Furthermore, is this all he does with his spare time, or does he have other hobbies?

Another thing I think you should watch is your grammar. You slip up in a few places, and making sure commas are in the right place and everything flows well can really help a quest seem polished. <3

He really does seem like a nice guy, I just think that a little more development would really help me understand him better. :'D

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PostPosted: Wed Oct 28, 2009 6:12 pm


I have to work on him some more 3nodding  
PostPosted: Mon Nov 16, 2009 2:33 pm


heart  

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PostPosted: Mon Nov 16, 2009 3:08 pm


Muse isn't work for me  
PostPosted: Mon Nov 16, 2009 8:30 pm


oi! back to the drawing board -pokes at Trevor's profile-

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PostPosted: Fri Dec 11, 2009 2:37 pm


ninja
PostPosted: Sat Mar 27, 2010 9:00 am


hmm..-plays around with search engine looking up some ideas for spheres-

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PostPosted: Sat Mar 27, 2010 9:56 am


I see him as the Senshi of Writing, Words, or maybe speed, if that helps ...

will give a more detailed critque in a bit
PostPosted: Sat Mar 27, 2010 9:41 pm


that does help somewhat

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 21, 2010 9:30 pm


-bumps up quest thread-
PostPosted: Thu Apr 22, 2010 5:14 am


I think you meant "Dependable" not "Dependant". I've only seen that word used on tax forms for children, elders, etc. you can write off.

Overall, it looks good, so far.

I like the idea of the sphere too.

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PostPosted: Tue Apr 27, 2010 10:54 am


thank you ^^
PostPosted: Tue Apr 27, 2010 9:10 pm


do de do

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PostPosted: Thu Apr 29, 2010 12:33 pm


This may prove to be a very difficult sphere for you, specifically because he's going to be very hard to NOT have him overlap with existing senshi, Eridanus: Senshi of Ink.
His attacks are also based on 'writing' in the air. Just a heads up.
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