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I want to say it doesn't look BAD, but:

TK *points at self* can't read fanfics seriously the moment she sees phrases like "weeping member". xD Sorry. <3

It's a personal issue. Smut and myself have a hard time staying BFFLs. I like the concept though. wink Because clearly Dean is always thinking about Cas. I MIGHT be a little put off by him having sex with some dude? But some people like to assume certain characters are bi. Once again, might just be me.

I'd give better insight - but I'm stuck on the smut-phrases and can't convince my brain to read it fully. xD I wasn't kidding, I tend to avoid really highly sexual fanfics unless I'm SURE I'm not going to get porn-phrases. (Honestly, it's me, not you. xD)

Though, I must give you props for not referring to anything as "pebbly n****e". Because that's just weird. xD

*flails; seriously, real issues with smut, don't mind her*

i appreciate everything. in the original draft i didnt use words like 'weeping member' but i wasnt sure about how others would feel reading it if it was full of porn words so i edited it for LJ.

and since i myself am totally gay, im prefer the hot sweaty mansex :]

but i appreciate you reading it and giving me your imput TK :]

thank you blasphemy im glad you enjoyed it, as for where its going im not sure if i'll be able to write more or not, my muse tends to leave me high and dry before i can ever finish a story. but i will see what i can do about continuing it, even if i just do a series of one-shots with it.