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 Posted: Wed Oct 07, 2009 6:55 pm
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Posted: Wed Oct 07, 2009 8:00 pm
Hey Inf. There's two things we'll need fixed. Everything else looks fine:
- Why did the women try to "push her out" if she worked for free? Turning away free help for no reason doesn't make a lot of sense. Did they not like children? Did she misbehave? Was there an incident where she was "fired"? We don't quite understand why they'd try to boot her, then later let her move in with them. We just need a bit more detail about that.
- We'll need you to change her eye color. Silvery grey is a no go; greyish green or greyish blue is fine, however.
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Posted: Wed Oct 07, 2009 8:24 pm
They tried to push her out because they felt she was wallowing in her memories there, and clinging to a ghost. She pretty much refused, and they more or less capitulated since they'd known her so long.
Edited eye color.
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