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Lana Luvv

PostPosted: Wed Nov 30, 2005 4:01 pm


Why does the sky seem to fall
when im the only one on the ground?
does it hold spite; envy?
does the sky want me to collapse?
to make me crash on my being,
and keep me down until i cry?
what does this solice mean?
to be alone and unloved?
to fear the darkness?
i willingly take the stride,
and follow my feet into tomorrow,
because although they sky is black,
sometimes the clouds do part.


(ok it follows a 3,3,3,4 pattern. leave me alone sweatdrop )
PostPosted: Wed Nov 30, 2005 5:15 pm


i like it

crosses burn


Lana Luvv

PostPosted: Thu Dec 01, 2005 4:10 pm


crosses burn
i like it



yaay! i am hearted!
PostPosted: Tue Dec 27, 2005 10:26 am


I like it too, it's some good writing^^*huggles*

Ketake

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