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(These first two are Old old old ocs of mine that I always end up questing for wherever I go!)

School Kid Character 1
Hopefully he'll start out as a human and somehow be able to become a senshi.
FS Contests Entered: Pg 4 Post 9Pg 19 Post 2
Pg 32 Post 3

Sailor Toliman, Senshi of Demons!

Extra Info!: Something a little extra, normally when I go for roan I also go for shin as a set. My 2nd human character and roan always somehow end up as best friends despite their differences, like a prince and a pauper sort of thing.

Name: Roriri Kyun
Nickname: Roan
Ethnicity: Korean
School: Hillworth Grammar School
Tidbits: Roan has some rather interesting morals, and good etiquette.

Age: 17
Birthday: December 23
Sign: Capricorn
Blood Type: AB +
Gemstone: A Topaz -any color-
Preference: Roans about as straight as the letter Q, he tends to like the more dangerous, punk type men. Despite his looks he's not a bottom..nor a push over. Roan is giving when it comes to relationships, though he often likes to be the one in control of things.
Why the bad boy type? Simple! Because roan likes a challenge, he's not looking for some tiny cute uke type, he wants a man who knows he's a man and enjoys..well..man things? A guy who can be rough and tumble yet still manage to be romantic and sexy at times. Someone who will give roan something to think about or do, a real mental and physical challenge. Not a panzy..

Fave Food: Sweet and Spicy, roan loves all sweet cuisines, and all spicy foods. His favorite dish to make/eat is gumbo and Brazilian food. He also loves eating ice cream. (If you wanna get him in a good mood give him a chocolate bar, he'll love you!)
Hated Food: Bland or tasteless foods, a few fish dishes, especially lobster and crab he hates it.

Hobbies:

Puzzles: Crossword puzzles, picture puzzles, Sudoku, those little word scrambles on the back of kiddies meals at Dennys. Roan loves puzzles! The more challenging the better for him, he finds them exciting unlike most people.

Cooking! Roan absolutely loves to cook, and enjoys cooking a variety of brazilian and traditional korean dishes. If his parents would ever allow it he would gladly become a chef instead of being forced to take over the business when his father 'dies'.
While he enjoys cooking he rather dislikes Baking, pastry's, pies, cakes, he'd rather get them store bought then make them himself.

History: Roan is fascinated with history, looking into the past and all the mysteries it holds. Nine times out of ten if you find him curled up with a book chances are its going to be a history book. It may seem boring to most, but for him its a joy.

Demons/Supernatural Occurrences: Roan whole heartedly believes in the unnatural, not the silly superstitions and such, but truly unnatural things. Ancient angry spirits, ghosts, and certain demons that may plague humanity.

Area of study: Business, fencing, math. What roan would like to do, and what he 'has' to do are often very different. He has a great head for business and is wonderful at handling money. He'd much rather be doing something involving his favorite hobbies though. Maybe own a library or become a chef.

Why Hillworth?: Roan is certainly not a child with a broken background/home, hes no rabble, hes not a wild child who goes about creating trouble (At least not publicly though he has on occasion sought to drive his parents batty). His father just prefers military like schools, and believes that since he isn't often home to give disciplinary action then the school system can take care of it for him.
This school isn't necessarily roans favorite, but he doesn't have much choice in the matter. He just deals with it and finds alternative ways to enjoy himself and express his creativity. (Like his friendship with the odd meadowview boy shin.)

Virtues: Confident Bystander, Determined, calm, a 'mother hen' type.

Confident Bystander: Roan, for all his annoying flaws is rather caring..at least on the inside. Roan is the type who prefers to stay in the background, and never wants to get directly involved in anything. He finds that its better standing on the sidelines to calculate and watch before interjecting himself into a situation.

Calm: Roan never ever looses his cool, he's always wearing a soft warm/smug smile on his face even if he's seething inside about something. He always thinks things through before acting on them, and has very few impulses. He's certainly not the reckless type.

Determined/Stubborn: When roan does get involved in things though he sees them through to completion even if the task seems impossible he wont give up until he's done it, whether because of his pride or his morals that's just how he is.

Mother Hen: Roan tends to be a 'mother hen' at times, whether this nagging of others -this is reserved for his friends- is a good thing or not is unsure. Sometimes it does come in handy though, and its his own way of showing that he cares by bothering to put so much time in on trying to 'help' someone.

Flaws:Vain, Easily Engrossed, a know it all, egotistical

Ego: Roan is a rich boy and he wears it well, he knows his breeding and presents it with an ego that often makes others dislike him. Its not that he thinks hes invincible or anything, he just thinks hes better then most other people..at pretty much everything.

Easily Engrossed: When roan does find interesting things he likes to fall into them deeply. If its an object then he has to research it, its history, the beginnings of the object, he becomes simply fascinated with ancient works and will sometimes spend weeks on them just doing research. He also tends to do the same thing with people he finds fascinating, try to find out their past, how they think, what makes them tick. Some people are just like giant puzzles to him just meant to be worked out.

A know it all: Roans smart and he loves showing it in subtle teasing ways, one of those people who will always correct you on something 'you' get wrong. He often finds it hard to accept when he is wrong about something and is grudgingly bad at giving out apologies.

Vain: Roan also thinks he's rather pretty, and spends the same time preening as he does studying. He has that 'if you got it then flaunt it' sort of attitude. He loves himself for sure, and his hair, he's that odd kind that will go out and spend money at a spa or at a hair salon. He usually gets his hair highlighted.

Family: Roan comes from a fairly wealthy family of just him, his mother and his father. His father is a savvy business man who owns a small company that has grown rather popular in certain parts of the world. His mother a frail, but beautiful woman who is basically a home maker. Roan gets a majority of his looks from his mother, which makes him rather popular, though it doesn't make his father like him any more.
Roan figures he would have more siblings, preferably son's, if his mother was able to bear them.
A beautiful, but weak woman, after giving birth to roan she was warned against having any more children because it would be a danger to her health, and so he remains an only child. His parents really don't much care what he does or how he acts, who he dates or befriends. So long as he gets good grades, goes to the right schools, and grows up to take over the business for his father they're okay with it.
They aren't exactly a lovey dovey talky kind of family, very traditional and very hands off parenting style. His father is hardly around as it is, and his mother immerses herself in cleaning and her social parties. Roan doesn't really mind though sometimes he does feel starved for attention that's what the books are for, he can immerse himself in them and not have to deal with the lack of his parents. He knows he should feel grateful as most children are always complaining how their parents wont leave them alone. He wishes they would bug him though, at least pay attention to him and not just what their goals for him are.

Do his parents know?: That hes gay,but not flaming, why yes yes they do, and though his father is rather disappointed with him for it. (Horribly disappointed because he wanted roan to produce an heir of his own.) There's not much that can be done about it. His mother really couldn't care less and is far too caught up in her gardens and her tea parties to bother with such trivial matters as her sons loves or preferences. So long as her husband continues to provide the money and the company lives on after their deaths, she's quite happy.
The fact that they know and don't care is probably part of the reason roan enjoys bringing 'undesirables' home, he tends to pick the most racy, outrageous, unlikeable boyfriends at times simply to try and get a bit of shock value out of it. (It'd be nice to see his parents notice for once!)
Usually these types of relationships never last long as they are simply shock dates. Roan enjoys being free up to choose the right kind of person he wants to be with, and chances are if he ever did get in a serious relationship the person he'd be with would be at least half way decent..pfft, but hes in high school why not explore!

Challenge: I'm Always right and I'll prove it!

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION

( Template from Meeki's school for troubled teens, edited by kia, colored and rp'd by me!)
He's not overly tall maybe 5'8 5'9 at most? Now take away all the tattoo's and sparkly colors from his body and you have roan. As for the outfit, Roan is usually wearing a dark blue sweater vest with a floral leaf pattern with a long sleeved white shirt or a short sleeved dark shirt. (And he' looks darn good in his school uniform woot!)
Roan

Eyes: He always has either Dark mocha brown narrow eyes.

Hair: Roans hair is dark blue, nearly black with a few lighter blue highlights in it. Shoulder length with long bangs. If he doesn't have it down then its tied back in a high pony tail.

Face: Sharp, but gentle features, maybe heart faced? Roan looks rather effeminate, but not so much that you cant tell he's a guy.

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If he Were to ever become a senshi:

Sailor Toliman, Senshi of Demons

The Constellation Toliman AKA Alpha Centauri:Constellation


Henshin:

Sphere: His Sphere is the

Challenge: I'll bring out your inner demons!

Attacks:

Attack 1 for Senshi - Claws and Fangs
A physical attack, roan comes at you with claws and fangs and other sharp thangs.

Attack 1a: - Demonic Delusion
A psychic attack - Roan thwarts his enemy's with magical visions of terrifying demons to scare them outta their socks! (Its basically just an illusion trick to make it seem as if roan has more 'friends' on his side then the bad guy. Ya know..make himself seem bigger and more powerful in an attempt to be threatening.)

Attack 2 for Beyond Senshi: - Deluge of Minions
Roan summons tiny little gremlins to bite and gnaw at the ankles of his opponent.

Attack 2a - Dance of the Demons
Final Attack - Roan summons up a foul powerful winged beast to fight along side, kinda like a big demon battle buddy. It helps to turn the odds in his favor.


Fuku: Main color - Dark blue, Secondary color Light blue/black

Kind of a lame example LAME EXAMPLE!!

Collar -- plain sailor collar
Bow -- Totally has a butt bow and a belt bow
Bodice -- Normal sleeveless body top (a bit like a turtle neck but with the sleeves cut off)
Sleeves -- Sleeveless
Brooch -- round? Shaped like anything? Keep this plain for the first incarnation.
Bottoms -- Long dark/white pants
Tiara -- (If his hair is down then no, if its up then yes) Blue topaz gem, basic head tiara.
Choker -- Long blue scarf
Shoes -- Fancy sandals.
Gloves -- Long dark blue gloves that go up to his elbows
Accessories -- any accessories? Earrings? Jewellry?

Negaverse Character

Extra Info!: Another OC...laaawwlss...just not as commonly used by me as my first twoo..
Writing Fs Comp's Entered: Pg 10 Post 3 pg 30 post 7

Negaverse: Luitenant Barite

Lt. Based on the Barite mineral - Mineral Info
Picture: Barite

Barite = A weighing agent, something that can only add to and strengthen the team. Triton for all his antics is very out going and team oriented. Because of his style and his way of attack he would almost always do things with a partner, as in solo fights he might end up getting himself into some serious trouble.

Name: Triton Cless
Ethnicity: American
School: Meadowview HighSchool
Age: 18
Birthday: September 6th
Sign: Virgo
Blood Type: B-
Gemstone: Carnelian
Preferences: Triiton is rather vague on who and what he likes, though its suspected he enjoys both sides.
Triton, despite his clingy nature, doesn't like serious relationships or dating, that whole boyfriend girlfriend drama just isn't for him. He's more prone to get into a long lasting friendship then a long lasting love bond with someone.
Creepy Tidbit: So, triton likes the three S's, The Shinnies, the Sharps, and The Soft's. What does this lead too?
This leads to triton, swiping, snatching and buying quite a bit of these three things. His favorite's are of course crosses, knives, and hair.

Fave Food: Fish sticks and tater tots! Anything sea foody or potatoy, specially those little cheesy potatos with sour cream and chives.
Hated Food: Onion rings, and grape fruits.
Hobbies: Piano, Basketball, Racing, Collecting.

Music: Triton loves music, listening to music, playing music. Being around musical people! On his own he plays the piano, while he prefers more punk/techno when it comes to listening (He feels classical music is fundamental, but there's no way to have fun and dance to it!) . When it comes to playing an instrument he feels that there's none better then the piano.

Collecting: The Three S's Soft, Shiny, Sharp

Crosses: Triton loves crosses as a symbol, he often collects the things, bracelet form, earrings, necklaces, big wooden paper weights, rosary beads. The actual cross itself holds no other significance to him (nothing religious) other then the fact that its pretty and a unique shape.

Knifes: Pocket knives, Swiss army knives, Decorative letter openers, Bad a** looking butter knives. If it sparkles shines and cuts, he wants it, he wants it ten times more if it has a design on it. His favorite at the moment being a 1inch folding blade pocket knife with a golden eagle etched into the side of it. The thing has a button on it so that you can lock it into place or easily flick it open.
(I actually own this knife myself! Hells yeah, b-day gift from my bf -shot-)

Hair?! Omfgwtf?: Of all the soft things in the world, hair is by far the softest isnt it? Not only is it incredibly soft, but its all natural, nothing synthetic, nothing fake about it.
Triton loves hair, his own hair, other peoples hair, he also has a bad habit of collecting rabbit pelts -cause there's nothing softer then a bunny!- And at times a creepy habit of collecting human hair...at least..so long as its real. -wigs etc..or from the person..so long as that person is to dead to object to having their hair cut away-

Basketball: Basketball is more of a boredom game, or a fun past time then it is a true hobby for him. He likes it, its an okay sport he occasionally watches games on tv if there any good. He's just not super fanatic into it..

Likes: Triton likes girls, likes boys..Likes good looking things, cars and flashy bobbles. But his favorite thing is probably money. Hey it buys him stuff its awesome!
Hates: Thunder storms, he doesn't mind the lightning or the rain, he just hates the noise that comes with it. Loud noises generally miff triton.

Area of study:

Virtues: Fun loving, jokester, team player, defensive.
Fun Loving: Fun and games is what triton is all about. Chess checkers, video games, sports. Hes all about watching/playing and experiencing the game. He also loves being around other people, getting to do fun things with others. Triton is very social and tends to get moody when he's alone, he absolutely hates being stuck by himself with nothing to do.
A total Joker: Pranks and practical jokes are like tritons meat and potato's. The guy cant live without laughter, even if it tends to be a bit cruel at times. He also enjoys making other's laugh, and doesn't mind being the butt end of a joke. He's real easy going and doesn't get his feathers ruffled by simple comments. Though hes usually used to being the one who does the teasing and the joking.
Team player: Triton never goes solo, his bravado and his confidence only showing when surrounded by other people. On his own he's rather meek and shy, but so long as hes got a crowd to entertain or group of friends backing him hes a real show stopper, and very outgoing!
A Defender: Triton is someone who would gladly take a blow for a friend, he tends to aggravate people, but never plays the aggressor role. His personality and his traits lead to someone who is always on defense, and will only become offensive when backed into a corner.

Flaws: Greedy, Arrogant, Clepto, Spiteful.
Spiteful: Triton can take his spitefulness a tad to far, the kind of person who would cut off his own nose just to get back at the person who's wronged him.
Greedy: Triton's got an issue with greed, and he loves doing the mine game. He's always wanting after material things and sometimes it gets in the way, its one of those annoying little traits that makes him unpleasant to be around at times.
Arrogant: Basically..he thinks hes the 'shiz', the coolest, the best, the most fun to be with. He holds himself in high standards and probably sees himself as more important then he really is.
Clepto/Magpie: Selectively he is a total clepto/magpie in the fact that he does love the shinnies. If he doesn't have enough cash to afford it -which he hates- He'll try to swindle or snatch it away, he's obsessed with the bright sparkly things, specially if their in the form of some of his favorite items. -crosses knives etc..- And has on a few creepy occasions clipped off a segment of his fellow students hair, very discreetly of course! He isnt one to get himself caught, and if he knows he cant get away with taking it then he wont even try, just stare longingly at it.

Challenge: Fall beneath a wall of Darkness!

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION


(Again I can not take credit for this line art or template! The template comes from Meeki Approved by the shop (meeki's school for troubled teens, this guy is an rp char of mine at that shop), the hair edits were done by some wonderfully nice person, and the coloring by me (I dont do edits I just color shiz!)

Eyes: Violet, large, friendly, smiling

Hair: Long, a mix of chestnut, dark brown, and dirty blondish strands. Always in a braid.

Face: Sharp angles, guyish, a proud grinning face.

Uniform:
Im not so good with colors so, whichever looks best, either a brown and red color scheme. Or a dark grey and white color scheme.

Main color - Brown/Light brown or Dark Grey
Secondary trimming color - Reddish orange or White
Top -- A little shorter then thigh length, a bit like a mini skirt height. Partially exposed undershirt, not cropped, Normal white/black buttons and a bit messy looking. Sleeves that go down to his elbows. (He wears the outfit with pride, but not very neatly, usually a button isn't in a hole, the collar is always open to reveal some of his undershirt. )
Maybe one tiny decoration A tiny cross pin on the right sleeve of his coat thing.
Bottoms -- Shorts like the Meadoview Highschool uniform, except a tad bit longer.
Gloves -- Yes brown/black fingerless gloves, the gloves should be long and travel up to meet where his sleeves end.
Belt -- A pair of dark or White Crossed belts
Shoes -- Knee high leather Black Pirate heel boots!
Shoulders -- Yes on his right shoulder, the stone should match his gemstone.
Accessories -- Tiny cross pin/necklace. He's not religious but he does love crosses. Their just an interesting symbol to him.

Weapon
Lieutenant - Black leather dog leash!
Such as!
Captain - Makeshift fishing line with Fishing Hook - Strips of string tied together in a makeshift fishing line with a dull metal hook on the end.
Like this!
General - Kyoketsu Shogi a weapon similar to the. Instead of a kama it featured a twin-bladed knife, one balde of which was hooked. Instead of the chain it used rope, and was weighted with a heavy iron ring. The rope was longer than the kusari Gamas chain enabling the weapon to be used as a short rope and grapple as well as a weapon.
Images:Img 1 Img 2
General King- Kusari Gama. The Kusari Gama is a Kama sickle, with a length of weighted chain attached behind the head. Blows could be made with the chain or blade, but commonly the chain would be used to entangle and disable the target, enabling the user to close in and strike with the kama.
Images: Img 1 Img2

Just in Case!
It's come to my attention that while the Kyoketsu Shogi as a weapon has not been taken. The original form jump rope or rock on an a string..etc etc..may have already been imagined by some people. So!

Optional Unique Weapon For Lt. Barite (Incase some other quest/custom gets taken up with the weapon)-

Weapon Marbles
Lieutenant - Metal Pellets
Captain - Spiked Pellets
General - Exploding Pellets
General King- Exploding pellets filled with shrapnel

Second Negga Baddie!

FS Entered - Pg 18 post 13 Benji Pg 33 post 2

Lt. Epidote!

Name: Zachariah Benjamin Fletch
Nicknames: Benji
Origin American, decedent of Irish heritage.
Gender: Male
Age: 19
Blood Type O+
Sign Taurus
Birthday May 15th
Stone Amber
School: Hillworth
Preferences: Mostly women

Fav. Food:Curry, Panda Express, Burger King, any and all dried meats -mmmnn jerky..-

Hated Food: Anything with peanuts, beans or lentils in it. Yes..no peanut butter..never..everrrrr...

Hobbies:

DayDreaming - He doesnt seem like the type I know, but he's got lots of free time on his hands, and what better to do then to daydream! He also likes to do self-checks/self evaluation, and is a very introspective person.

Bug Collecting - Specifically praying mantises and Bee's/Hornets when he can. He prefers the deadly, feared, and generally disliked type of insects compared to those frilly flitty butterfly's and moths..actually he finds butterfly's rather pretty and so doesn't see a reason to go about killing them. Besides there's no challenge in catching a butterfly and pinning it to a board with tiny needles. That and no one really cares if he kills the 'less liked' type of insects. Not that he ever show's his odd collection off to anyone.

Virtues:
Simple Pleasures: Benji is in essence simple, not a simpleton but simple. It doesn't take a genius to figure him out. Hes no rubix cube or five hundred piece puzzle. At most he's a ten piece puzzle with a few pieces tossed in that just dont fit right. He likes lazy days, cheese burgers, and running. This makes him rather easy to befriend. Or it would if he seemed friendly, often times his personality..or lack there of..and silent nature make him seem off putting and mysterious.

Focused: Ever seen a greyhound chasing that mechanical rabbit around the track? That about sums up Benji focus, to the point where he gets tunnel vision and misses the big picture. When Benji gets into something that he needs to focus on he zones in on that one thing and will bother with absolutely nothing else until he's done with it. This often leads to people assuming he's spacing out..and also to him accidentally ignoring others, its not something he does on purpose most of the time.

A Dry Sponge: Benjis mind is like a dry sponge, just ready to soak up any and all information he can get his hands on. He really does love learning and is totally into school even though being an athlete is his main goal. Sometimes he can pick up a good book and get absolutely lost in it. This tendency to soak up any and all knowledge also leads into him listening in on other peoples conversations, at least so long as their interesting. And he almost never forgets a word of whats being said.

Animal Lover: The one thing benji does connect well with is animals, dogs cats birds fish horses..you name it, specifically dogs. He finds that he has a secret love of animals, the fact that they exist and get along so well in society fascinates him. That they can bond easily with people purely through showing basic forms of affection or playfulness. After all animals don't have words to use to communicate, they have body language and instinct.

Flaws:
A Fickle Heart: Benji goes through women faster then a pack of football players goes through a bag of nacho Doritos. He's pretty darn fickle and is never one to make a commitment, he may find himself liking a girl one day and then having no interest in her the next. That doesn't mean that he's constantly got dates and women hanging off of him, generally speaking benji doesn't date..go out..do movies or kissy kissy, buy her a flower stuff. If he manages to get up the energy to ask her out, or she's fitting to his tastes for the day and asks him out then he may decide to go out with her. The dates usually don't last very long as he looses interest quickly in most girls he meets.

Social Drain: Whats the opposite of a socialite? The answer..Benji.. The boy has the social skills of a brick. Its not that he's not bright, or doesn't get people, he just doesn't care enough to try and be social let alone make long lasting friends. A bit of a loner, he often finds it awkward to be surrounded by people, especially unfamiliar faces. Being in large crowds tend to make him surly.

Linguistically lacking: Speech...baaahddd...
He'll never recite poetry, never create a novel or any sort of language masterpiece, never speak more then a few sentences. Benji works through body language and facial expressions. If your to dense to figure out his mood and how he's feeling by the look he gives you or the posture he's taking then your not worth talking to at all.

This is My Half : Benji isn't into sharing, not his personal space, not his food, not his things. The boy might as well walk around wearing a 'do not touch' sign. That doenst mean he's a jerk about it, and he's not like 'mine mine mine' to the extent that he wont let you borrow a pencil or a sheet of paper something silly like that..He just likes what's his 'or at least what he considered his' to be left alone by others. He absolutely hates it when people poke and prod at him for personal information or ask to get into his stuff..locker..dresser..picture album etc.

(Weakness..Basically he outcasts himself from social society on purpose, giving himself a lack of friends and lack of ability to deal well with others, to deal well with humans at least. Benji tends to deal very well with animals, dogs, cats, creatures who cant speak. He seems to form bonds with them.)

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION

Eyes: Narrow, hallow, sharp, a bit emotionless, sort of frowning.

Hair: Benji is a ginger kid, his hair tends to either be a deep red -usually in winter time- and can range from that to a sort of lighter orangeish strawberry blond color. Some people assume he dyes his hair and there have been times where he's gone to such a point as to dye his hair carrot orange.
Short/Medium length, scrappy looking, messy, hides his eyes a bit, spikeish, looks like he cuts it with a razor instead of going to a barber.

Face: Narrow, sharp, angular, a few dark freckles, thin lips, big nearly pointy ears.

Challenge: -silent glare-

Negaverse: Lieutenant Epidote

Concept: Lanky, confined, ridged, rough, dog collar, piercings, lack of respect, a-moral. Dark, greens, blacks, greys, whites. Stripes and slashes, or waves and whorles. -again..Dog collarrr!!!- Tattoo's, spikes.
Buncha cool wavy necklaces/designs
The Stone
Collar idea
Collar idea 2

Weapon: I'm thinking New Zealand Maori type weapons, could be wooden, could be metal, or stone etc.
LT -Dog Collar (May or may not have spikes)
Captain - Patu Patu
Maori Weapon Mere / Patu.
General - Kotiate Maori weapon, sometimes this weapon also had sharks teeth/Jade/Sharp stone embedded in the rounded sides of the wood to give it a slashing advantage. -if you wanna make it more deadly-
General King - Wahaika Bigger, heavier, deadlier, imagine waving a non-spinning chainsaw about. Definitely with blades/metal/sharp ouchy things surrounding the spiky side.

You ask me to crit Tristan, but I can't crit much. D8

First off, I think Pyrite is in customs or is being quested? Either way, you might want to go with your second choice.
On his weapons, his second should still be simple I think. Like, A makeshift knife attacked to some rope. Then the Shoji and then the gama.

That's about all I can crit at this point.

-snugs mriae-

Darns it you caught me! -giggles- He does indeed look like duo maxwell at least as far as hair and eyes, maybe a bit in the personality department. Though you could say tristen is my own personal adaptation of one of my favorite gw chars -points to name- Hee hee gundam wing is what inspired this silly user name of mine even! Cause im old..and gw with shinigami came along way before bleach or naruto -fist shake-

Jump ropes are love, and I still need to tweek his profile. Thank you for the crit!

I know rp is so totally the best! -bounces all about- Hurray I updated everythinggg...-flails- Fun!

Muahaha..more updates -headesks- Lawls thank you mriae -pet pet pets- You can comment on the others if you want, I realize I dont quite have a personality mapped out for my girl here, but I'm working on it!

Edit Edit : Anyone can critique on any of my chars even my human ones, which I've figured if I did get them I would go with them from being just school boys to someday possibly becoming senshi! -nod nod nod- Their probably my main priority, and then tristan and then bastet (though I am totally in love with bastet)
Edit: I have no clue which outfit I prefer on my female senshi...Halps?

Your crit for Amarantha made me smile, just thought I'd put that out. But also, since you left one for me, I'll leave one for you. Or try to anyway. X3;;; Not too good at these. Also, this may end up long cause I'm going to crit for all of them! owo Because I can.

We'll just go in order.

Roan: I love him hard core, really. He was an entertaining read. And your description for his relationship prefs made me laugh. Though Amarantha finds him a bit intimidating, she wonders if they could (at some point) be study buddies. But I digress. I actually found little to nothing wrong with him, truly.
I'm curious to see what the descriptions for his attacks will be. Especially since Logic is a hard one to use as a sphere of power.

Shin: I don't know if you've ever watched the anime "YuGiOh", but he reminds me a bit of one of the characters, Joey Wheeler. Which isn't a bad thing, it makes me smile.
Point of curiosity- How bad is his fear of spiders? Is it enough to make him freeze in spot, scream like a girl, or be totally useless? If so, maybe you should consider throwing it into his flaws as well?
As for his Senshi form, I can understand wanting to use Solace, but I think Service is a bit more fitting, especially considering the attacks you've given him. After all, who doesn't love service with a smile?

Tristan: Rofl. After reading Mriae's comment about him... Yea, I can see him as Duo. Which means he's automatic win. I mean, who doesn't love the braided pilot?
I love his flaws and virtues, they work well together. And his weapons are love as well. If you end up having to choose another set of weapons (as much as I love his first set), I love the marble set. Imagine the pranks you could do with those.

and Miss Bastet: Another automatic win as Egyptian based anything is hardcore love. I've been wanting to come up with something involving Hathor myself. Her attacks are made of love too, and i can't help but think she and Sailor Ariel could do some damage to eardrums if they teamed up together. X3;;


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okay, so apparently I found nothing wrong with your characters. At all. But that's likely a good thing, right? Means they're well rounded and flow perfectly. I adore them all.

oxo;;;;; <3