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 Posted: Tue Sep 15, 2009 11:17 pm
http://guardian-dart.deviantart.com/A couple things: I know that I need help on feet and foreshortening, and I'm working on those right now. Please keep critiques on here and in my PM box. Other than that, tell me what ya think~
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Posted: Tue Sep 22, 2009 3:04 pm
You know, you are REALLY good. I can't tell you much on feet (still working on that myself sweatdrop ) But.... For some reason, the guy being held up look a tiny bit akward in the legs, maybe you could let his legs looked a little more loose, because when you're being held up in the air by your shirt, you don't usually put your legs in that position. I love the way you did the guy who's standings hair, it looks really detailed-like you spent a lot of time on it. I also liked that guys vest. You closing choice is cool.
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Posted: Mon Oct 05, 2009 2:05 am
Sorry! I haven't been on this guild in a while. ^^;
Thanks for the critique and the compliment! And yea, I definitely agree with you on that pic, I love Zath in that shot, but I couldn't get Adrian's legs quite right...(Especially the feet.)
I do need to work on Zath a little bit though, namely the fact that under the cloth, there's actually armor... ^^;
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