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PostPosted: Tue Sep 15, 2009 10:44 pm


Today as we stand before, and in front of our peers, we are faced with one of the greatest challenges that we could ever face but as we stand before our peers we are ready to contest what we consider a secret society. Secret Societies are repugnant, the very words, "Secret Societies" stirs up controversies. These controversies are not over, and what information is given is unannounced to one’s self. To the people who stand before the front lines, and those who are tossed in the storming of the gates, and the burning of the castle, pillaging the women, killing, and destruction of one’s property and one's self. These are the same controversies caused by one party that has announced the controversies are not governed by words but by actions of the innocents, of the young, the old, and the crippled. I do stand in front of my peers for judgment day in which has surpassed its self to a crumbling state of dust and disloyalty throughout the ages. Many of which have stated change and a separation of church and state. The church is incorporated into the heart of the state that tries to separate its self from such. The keeping of secrets is not the work of the hard working nor is it the people who have contributed to society as a whole. Society as a whole held in the highest, tightest grips of the media, whether it is music, news, and/or movies. Media presents its evils in many ways. A major way it shows its self is throughout the internet. This can be a powerful tool in the right hands, and in the hands of the idle its destructive power is shown. Weapons of mass destruction are able to neither self destruct nor lead to self construction. A house divided is unable to stand on the feet it has been attached to. The attached parts have been disassembled by its own people. These same people that are “supposed to help” end up not helping, but only are to become a part of the problems that the nation has. A situation is unable to be drawn if all parties involved cannot reach a resolution, nor is it able to make both sides happy until a resolution is drawn. This is the very reason we have Nationalism, and Militarism. The government that has sworn itself to help its people are unable to provide us with accurate documents of the criminals it has put in the offices. Offices that have sworn to put its people under protection have been unable to do so in the front nor in the back. All of us around the world are opposed, and hated by these secret societies, that we as the people seek to destroy by any means. No man in his own house should be afraid to speak the thoughts he has harbored through the years. A person is only as good as the words he is able to put in context. Without these words in his own context, he becomes a social norm in society. A society no matter how much it rejects his theories, will never accept the majority rule, but will accept the rule of much more powerful peoples. These are the same people that came from the roots of a humble beginning, and the same beginning that we all have started off with. They attach themselves with the wealth of their parents, and plan to build upon the success of others in a succession. Then they are leaving nothing for the person who plans to build on top of the preceded, and to be able to become a stronger successor. We the people, in order to form a more perfect union, need not pass judgment onto others no matter the drama they have caused, no matter their religion, and neither the color of their skin nor their eyes. Any single person being singled out because of these factors need to stand up or shut up. Equal opportunities are not at the disposal of the winy, but are at the disposal of these society norms that are present within ourselves. These society norms are repugnant and blown out of context by unsecure people that stand on the sidelines, who whoop and holler with no clear message, and are unable to give to society. These treacherous people are conniving bigotry and are imposing of a supernatural form that has been unannounced to the peers of a formal society. In a formal society, bigotry will have a swift and decisive action announced to one's society. These actions, if performed, will cause not only local state federal governments to crumble, but also the economic and moral beliefs that have been imbedded in the people of all societies, and of all races, to crumble also with immoral decisions. These immoral decisions will pivot a global crisis causing people to become paranoid of each other, thus causing social isolation of one group to another. This will be known as global isolation and the failing of successors to bring forth a new world order, a world where it's not the rule of the jungle governed by actions, the context, discipline of people in formal societies, nor a world where the rule of laws is governed by formal societies. We as people face of a common danger, this danger can range of Government not being able to hand out nor provide its people with the proper hand outs. The idea of these people seems to be repugnant to the very core of society. These people cannot ensure the survival of a nation nor can bore a new nation with laws. A law of new nations is of those that will shock the world for years to come. People of the nation should not shy away from its nation in any way. We in society shy away from its nations agenda. National agenda is one that its people should and will be properly informed of the deeds its nation is willing to no matter what the coast to be people weather is the suffering of the population of the world homeless people. Often we look at these people will neither future nor the power to vote for laws and Representative. To me and others these people are not the axis of evil like we would enjoy viewing them. I would like the challenge this great nations to give its ability to create jobs for these people. The coast of jobs and reform only go up if we let them go up the coast of money is not the coast of the world. Money is only good for money nothing more nothing less thus the coast of items is only the will and power of powerful people. With these people come secret societies the limitation of freedoms of speech censorship of the news. We as a whole have the will power to stop our self’s from being exposed to this iron curtain.  
PostPosted: Thu Sep 17, 2009 12:25 pm


You can't space it? Is this the entire essay I'm surprised this is 3 pages.

Foxdilfer


Allah The Eternal
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 17, 2009 1:19 pm


Its okay I guess, but I think you need to work on punctuation.

Kinda looks like your jumping from one thing to another, without any real transition. Has potential, you just need to do some editing.
If you want to edit it then be my guest
PostPosted: Thu Sep 17, 2009 2:41 pm


Foxdilfer
You can't space it? Is this the entire essay I'm surprised this is 3 pages.

Look at the size of the letters -.-

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Foxdilfer

PostPosted: Thu Sep 17, 2009 2:45 pm


Yeah? That doesn't tell me what the requirements for his paper is. Like double spacing/font or how many paragraphs especially since its not indented or broken up into paragraphs. Which is really what I was getting at. neutral
PostPosted: Thu Sep 17, 2009 2:47 pm


Foxdilfer
Yeah? That doesn't tell me what the requirements for his paper is. Like double spacing/font or how many paragraphs especially since its not indented or broken up into paragraphs.


So then why would you say you are surprised it was 3 pages long, if you don't know the requirements?

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Foxdilfer

PostPosted: Thu Sep 17, 2009 2:52 pm


Mmmm what are you talking about? I said I'm surprised its 3 pages thats it. Is it suppose to be a full 3rd page and is it double spaced? I should ask about the requirements but it was pretty much a lead in question for me its not like its a criticism who cares.
PostPosted: Thu Sep 17, 2009 9:44 pm


The idea of this is just a s**t load of ideas and feelings i have it wrote it in 35 mins give me a break people =.0

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Foxdilfer

PostPosted: Fri Sep 18, 2009 7:05 am


I'm not criticizing at all every essay I do is me just bsing even if I have to read in front of everyone its usually ad-lib.
PostPosted: Fri Sep 18, 2009 12:46 pm


Alucard Me Hellsing
The idea of this is just a s**t load of ideas and feelings i have it wrote it in 35 mins give me a break people =.0

xD sorry bro, I just thought you wanted some constructive criticism.

I like what you said about the media and the church.

Allah The Eternal
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PostPosted: Mon Sep 21, 2009 4:00 am


Great stuff b.

We have 3 special parts about us: Mind, Body, Soul.

Mind - The Government controls our schools

Body - The Government controls our food

Soul - The Government controls our churches
PostPosted: Mon Sep 21, 2009 7:00 pm


Do we as people have the freedomes that they say we do? Or is it just the rules they want us to fallow? what is a rule? A rule is an idea of what people want us to be like nothing more nothing less we as people are stick with these rules and have set most of them as morals

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