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Assan al-Hamzah

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PostPosted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 1:53 pm


Character's name:Yoshihigami Yami Yohiko
Aliases/Nicknames:Yoh
Age:147
Occupation: Student
Reiatsu color:
Apperance:Yoh/Yoh in fighting uniform
Yami is a bald and tall with a muscular build body he is oftenly dressed in white uniform and rarely wears the shinigami/the student uniform.His eyes collor is green.His hair seems to of stop growing and thus hates being pointed out his baldness or people to point ut the fact that he is bald.He wears no tabi and often would prefer to walk bare foot.He oftenly uses a white hakama and white haori thus leaving his chest bare.He has some bandages around his abdomen and during duels is shown to prefer to wear only red hakama.
Accesories:Yami has a a boken he seems to cary around as well as a piece of paper he put in his hakama.
Personality: As a child, Yoh lived in a very stable environment where he was accepted by and accepted both the mother and father figure. However, Yoh's parents didn't always get along themselves. As a result, Yoh learned to resolve any internal conflict by accepting any point of view, going along with ideas and movements, never causing any turmoil. Yoh's obvious flaw is that he subverts his/her own feelings and ideas to go along with the group or authority figure in his life. This situation presents a great opportunity for a moment where Yoh stands up for himself.
Bio/History:Yoh used to get along with his parents but when his parents decided to divorce Yoh ran away from home and lived with a carpenter.His new guardian insisted that Yoh should go to the Shinigami Academy in order to achieve wealth,peace and hapiness and insisted on learning so that he may become a better shinigami then those from the noble families.Yoh seems bored by the ideea of learning in a shinigami academy but would to anything to prove himself better wanting to make his guardian proud of him.Thus Yoh trains hardly during the day and studies a lot late at night.He used to be a poet during his life but died very young murdered by a maniac.Him being born in Soul Society made him never aknowledge his Shinigami parents and ran from home a couple of times.
Kidou:None for now
Abilities:None for now
Skills:
Swordmanship:Tallented
Hand-to-hand:Average
Kido:Bellow Average

Accomplished classes:none so far
Pending classes:none so far

Favourite Subject:Sword fighting
Disliked Subject:
Favourite teacher:
Disliked teacher:
Expectations:Yami expects for the teachers to be rude rough and only male teachers....

optional:
Likes:enjoys reading books and sharing thoughts with other people.
Dislikes:overtraining
Theme song:
Hobbies:Likes reading a lot and often stays awake at night to engage in long conversations with those awake.
PostPosted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 2:02 pm


Expand the Apperance section, don't put height and weight in like that, make a nice sentence to incorporate in into your description. For Bio, you should include how you died, or how you were born in soul society if you were. Otherwise, it's mostly okay.
Plus, I don't think there's a subject at this academy that would be called "the purpose and goals of life".

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Assan al-Hamzah

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PostPosted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 4:06 pm


xd Suimasen! xd ...

I tried to modify it a bit!
PostPosted: Sun Sep 06, 2009 11:27 am


It's much better.
I just noticed another thing - in your accessories section, you claim to have a dual zanpakuto. You cannot have a zanpakuto yet, because you are an untrained shinigami, only entering the academy. You will only be trained to gain a zanpakuto. Delete that and it's accepted. (But you can also replace it with something else, most accessories are allowed, only to have a zanpakuto is impossible.)

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