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 Posted: Fri Aug 14, 2009 3:32 pm
I seen another topic like this and it was a bit long so I thought I would shorten it down for a much quicker and easier character description, if its a bother you can remove it
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(sorry if this is a bother to anyone)
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Posted: Sun Aug 16, 2009 11:26 am
here's my character ^^ Name: Shadow Night Race: Demon wolf Social status: Prince physical description: has gray fur that is thick and fluffy, he is neither fat nor skinny and dark black stripes around his body Eye colour: brown but when angered turn red Personality: carefree nature, doen't like to fight but if his friends are in danger then he will defend them with his life Family: his sister Star Boyfriend or Girlfriend or single: girlfriend called Flake Friends: Sharplaw, Alex, Nethos, Trey and other random peoples Place where S/he lives: mostly in Risgrawl (forest of everlasting night) Skills: is a very good with a bow and sword, can control time and space as well as other elements, resourceful and very strategic Likes: Flake, meat, peace, nature and pie Dislikes: Fighting, evil demons, most humans, and flour Here is a picture of Shadow and Flake but Shadow's fur is supposed to be dark gray ^^ 
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Posted: Mon Aug 24, 2009 7:48 am
Ooh, yay! This is a good opportunity to expand on Jack's character. I just, um, killed him. It wasn't fun ;-;. I would say 'rest in peace', but his afterlife isn't very peaceful. Poor guy.
Name: Jack (he hasn't got a surname; he never knew his parents)
Age (just thought this would be a helpful thing to put): Thirteen at death.
Race: Demon. But he isn't an evil one, so Mr. Shadow up there won't have to eat him or something. But, yeah, he's a Demon. But was a human when he was alive. (Well, the poor guy's dead. And he goes to Hell, even though he was a pretty nice guy. Just because he had to steal a few loaves of bread... ok, a lot of bread, but otherwise he would have died much sooner!)
Social Status: Didn't have one in life; in death he's hardly a Demon, and gets picked on.
Physical Description: Black hair; very dirty and messy, and pretty long. One green eye that sparkles like emeralds, and one blue eye with silvery flecks like rippling water. Skeletal thin from lack of food and the strain of life on the streets; quick and nimble. Half starved. Looks constantly worried because of all the awful things that he's been through. Has a diagonal scar on his right hand from when he stole a loaf of bread from a house and was bitten by a guard dog. In the Afterlife, he has a gaping hole in his chest from where he was shot, and some tiny, fluttering bat-like wings. His wings are too small to fly with; he's considered a runt with the upper Demons.
Eye Colour: Right iris is a piercing green, glows and twinkles like emeralds. Left iris is a pale, smooth blue, with silvery ripples like water. Left pupil always seems to be larger than the other.
Personality: He would be happy and carefree if it wasn't for his unfortunate past; he's constantly wary and worries about things that normal people take for granted, like clothes and food and drink; but not without a good reason. Whenever he puts down his guard, bad things seem to happen; ending in his death. He blames himself for things that weren't his fault; like Tabitha's death. Despite all this, he's a nice person, only landing in Hell for his thievery, which he couldn't avoid.
Traits/ Habits (thought I'd add this): Squeaks when scared or nervous. Quick to anger.
Family: He never knew his parents, but he knew his mother was died shortly after he was born. He'd always hoped his father was still alive; he doesn't know it, but unfortunately, his father's dead (committed suicide). The closest thing to a family he ever knew was a kind old woman called Tabitha Green, who took him in when he was just a newborn baby. Tabitha died of a stroke when he was five; and, frightened, Jack ran away. When he returned, Tabitha was gone (dead) and the house was empty. He lived on the streets ever since, and constantly wonders about his parents. He blames himself for Tabitha's death.
Boyfriend/ Girlfriend/ Single: Single, which considering his life, isn't surprising.
Friends: Is bullied by most of the other Demons, but is pitied by an older girl of sixteen, Tara, who died in hospital with cancer. Tara is, unfortunately for Jack, in Heaven, making her an Angel, but they can contact each over through the gap in the panes of the highest, and lowest, levels of Hell and Heaven. They can't physically make contact, but can talk mentally through this gap.
Place Where He/ She Lives: In life, he lived on the streets, but slept under a bridge that went over a chilly river (he later died in its waters). In death, he sleeps under a tree with burning leaves on the highest pane in Hell (the least evil pane really).
Skills: Power over flames; can manipulate both water (his death bed, basically) and fire (the trait of all demons) to do his bidding. Unfortunately, all the other Demons can also manipulate flames; Jack finds himself a test subject in their magic practice, resulting in pinkish burns over his pale body. Luckily, his power over water reduces the damage. Also an ok thief, very nimble and light for his age; mainly because of his lack of food.
Likes: He’s not found much that he likes, but loves chocolate from the one time he managed to steal a bar. Constantly wishing for family, and loves his only friend, Tara, dearly.
Dislikes: An awful lot of things. Being bullied, death, no family... too much stuff.
Do you feel sorry for him yet? Aww, I wish I didn't have to kill him, but without him dying, there wouldn't be an afterlife for the story to happen in. Oh, why do you have to make bad things happen to your characters?! Because I really like Jack, he's a favourite of mine, and I have to make all this horrible stuff happen to him. Honestly, if we ever met, he'd probably want to kill me or something because of all the torture I've put him through.
P.S: If you have the time, could you look at his death scene? I've got it posted up, because I've never done it before and I have a slight lack of comments. And I really need some help. If you could read it, and critique, it would be really helpful. Perhaps Jack would like me more if his death was really dramatic? Ah, I don't know. Thanks anyway.
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Posted: Mon Aug 24, 2009 10:42 am
Name: Queen Alexandra Carlie Chase Masen
Race: Dhampir that drinks blood of animals in order to live since human blood makes her feel like a monster and she doesn't want to be evil.
Social status: She's the Queen of the mythical world on the planet of Carina.
Physical description: She has long, straight blond hair with sweep bangs that is always neat and perfect. Her eyes are always changing that are the only sign besides no heart beat that she is a dhmapir. She is pale white and has a spiral triskele scar on her right palm that she is always trying to hide. She is five feet four inches tall. Her husband describes her as an angel that walks around Carina. She is stunning and beautiful.
Eye colour: They change to the amount of blood she has inside of her. When she has tons of animal blood they are topaz but if she has human blood they are piercing red. If she hasn't had blood in a long time then they are black as night. She used to have sparkling blue eyes but over time they changed.
Personality: She is very strict when it comes to the rules that were established over ten thousand years ago. She is very self concious when it comes to how she feels about herself and how other people see her. She wants to be feared but she doesn't want to be a monster. She blames herself for thousands of things that have happened in the ten thousand and one years she's been alive. She's always on guard since she's been captured thousands of times in her life but when her guard is down she is carefree, loving, and caring.
Family: Her family consists of thirty four known people that are actually related to her. She considers 86 people her family even though they aren't. They are all either vampires, dhampirs, or shape-shifters not including their two dogs Shadow and Star.
Boyfriend/ Girlfriend/ single: Married to King Jonathan Anthony Masen.
Friends: She has a lot of friends that she pretty much considers family. Just to name a few: Effie, Ellie, Macy, Mary, Cambria, Amelia, Schuyler, Eva, Benjamin, Carl, Maverick, Marcus, and Clark.
Place where She/ He lives: She lives on the island of Vampra which is between Alaska and Hawaii, and near Cananda. There are mountains, forests, rivers, beaches, and waterfalls on this island along with a buttercup patch (her favorite type of flower)
Skills: One of the world's greatest spies and fighter. She can control minds and elements including: fire, water, earth, light, darkness, electricity, and wind. She can also see into the future and share thoughts with others. She can create anything she wants by just by thinking about it.
Likes: She loves a million things like nature, the rules, spying, her family and friends, peace, and blood.
Dislikes: She hates war, losing people she loves, people not following the rules, getting captured, and a lot of other things.
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Posted: Sun Sep 06, 2009 7:05 am
Vaporeae Ooh, yay! This is a good opportunity to expand on Jack's character. I just, um, killed him. It wasn't fun ;-;. I would say 'rest in peace', but his afterlife isn't very peaceful. Poor guy.
Name: Jack (he hasn't got a surname; he never knew his parents)
Age (just thought this would be a helpful thing to put): Thirteen at death.
Race: Demon. But he isn't an evil one, so Mr. Shadow up there won't have to eat him or something. But, yeah, he's a Demon. But was a human when he was alive. (Well, the poor guy's dead. And he goes to Hell, even though he was a pretty nice guy. Just because he had to steal a few loaves of bread... ok, a lot of bread, but otherwise he would have died much sooner!)
Social Status: Didn't have one in life; in death he's hardly a Demon, and gets picked on.
Physical Description: Black hair; very dirty and messy, and pretty long. One green eye that sparkles like emeralds, and one blue eye with silvery flecks like rippling water. Skeletal thin from lack of food and the strain of life on the streets; quick and nimble. Half starved. Looks constantly worried because of all the awful things that he's been through. Has a diagonal scar on his right hand from when he stole a loaf of bread from a house and was bitten by a guard dog. In the Afterlife, he has a gaping hole in his chest from where he was shot, and some tiny, fluttering bat-like wings. His wings are too small to fly with; he's considered a runt with the upper Demons.
Eye Colour: Right iris is a piercing green, glows and twinkles like emeralds. Left iris is a pale, smooth blue, with silvery ripples like water. Left pupil always seems to be larger than the other.
Personality: He would be happy and carefree if it wasn't for his unfortunate past; he's constantly wary and worries about things that normal people take for granted, like clothes and food and drink; but not without a good reason. Whenever he puts down his guard, bad things seem to happen; ending in his death. He blames himself for things that weren't his fault; like Tabitha's death. Despite all this, he's a nice person, only landing in Hell for his thievery, which he couldn't avoid.
Traits/ Habits (thought I'd add this): Squeaks when scared or nervous. Quick to anger.
Family: He never knew his parents, but he knew his mother was died shortly after he was born. He'd always hoped his father was still alive; he doesn't know it, but unfortunately, his father's dead (committed suicide). The closest thing to a family he ever knew was a kind old woman called Tabitha Green, who took him in when he was just a newborn baby. Tabitha died of a stroke when he was five; and, frightened, Jack ran away. When he returned, Tabitha was gone (dead) and the house was empty. He lived on the streets ever since, and constantly wonders about his parents. He blames himself for Tabitha's death.
Boyfriend/ Girlfriend/ Single: Single, which considering his life, isn't surprising.
Friends: Is bullied by most of the other Demons, but is pitied by an older girl of sixteen, Tara, who died in hospital with cancer. Tara is, unfortunately for Jack, in Heaven, making her an Angel, but they can contact each over through the gap in the panes of the highest, and lowest, levels of Hell and Heaven. They can't physically make contact, but can talk mentally through this gap.
Place Where He/ She Lives: In life, he lived on the streets, but slept under a bridge that went over a chilly river (he later died in its waters). In death, he sleeps under a tree with burning leaves on the lowest pane in Hell.
Skills: Power over flames; can manipulate both water (his death bed, basically) and fire (the trait of all demons) to do his bidding. Unfortunately, all the other Demons can also manipulate flames; Jack finds himself a test subject in their magic practice, resulting in pinkish burns over his pale body. Luckily, his power over water reduces the damage. Also an ok thief, very nimble and light for his age; mainly because of his lack of food.
Likes: He’s not found much that he likes, but loves chocolate from the one time he managed to steal a bar. Constantly wishing for family, and loves his only friend, Tara, dearly.
Dislikes: An awful lot of things. Being bullied, death, no family... too much stuff.
Do you feel sorry for him yet? Aww, I wish I didn't have to kill him, but without him dying, there wouldn't be an afterlife for the story to happen in. Oh, why do you have to make bad things happen to your characters?! Because I really like Jack, he's a favourite of mine, and I have to make all this horrible stuff happen to him. Honestly, if we ever met, he'd probably want to kill me or something because of all the torture I've put him through.
P.S: If you have the time, could you look at his death scene? I've got it posted up, because I've never done it before and I have a slight lack of comments. And I really need some help. If you could read it, and critique, it would be really helpful. Perhaps Jack would like me more if his death was really dramatic? Ah, I don't know. Thanks anyway. damn poor guy thats exactly the kind of thing shadow went through when he was small but then he made four really good friends and everything changed for him
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Posted: Sun Sep 06, 2009 7:08 am
habiku Name: Queen Alexandra Carlie Chase Masen
Race: Dhampir that drinks blood of animals in order to live since human blood makes her feel like a monster and she doesn't want to be evil.
Social status: She's the Queen of the mythical world on the planet of Carina.
Physical description: She has long, straight blond hair with sweep bangs that is always neat and perfect. Her eyes are always changing that are the only sign besides no heart beat that she is a dhmapir. She is pale white and has a spiral triskele scar on her right palm that she is always trying to hide. She is five feet four inches tall. Her husband describes her as an angel that walks around Carina. She is stunning and beautiful.
Eye colour: They change to the amount of blood she has inside of her. When she has tons of animal blood they are topaz but if she has human blood they are piercing red. If she hasn't had blood in a long time then they are black as night. She used to have sparkling blue eyes but over time they changed.
Personality: She is very strict when it comes to the rules that were established over ten thousand years ago. She is very self concious when it comes to how she feels about herself and how other people see her. She wants to be feared but she doesn't want to be a monster. She blames herself for thousands of things that have happened in the ten thousand and one years she's been alive. She's always on guard since she's been captured thousands of times in her life but when her guard is down she is carefree, loving, and caring.
Family: Her family consists of thirty four known people that are actually related to her. She considers 86 people her family even though they aren't. They are all either vampires, dhampirs, or shape-shifters not including their two dogs Shadow and Star.
Boyfriend/ Girlfriend/ single: Married to King Jonathan Anthony Masen.
Friends: She has a lot of friends that she pretty much considers family. Just to name a few: Effie, Ellie, Macy, Mary, Cambria, Amelia, Schuyler, Eva, Benjamin, Carl, Maverick, Marcus, and Clark.
Place where She/ He lives: She lives on the island of Vampra which is between Alaska and Hawaii, and near Cananda. There are mountains, forests, rivers, beaches, and waterfalls on this island along with a buttercup patch (her favorite type of flower)
Skills: One of the world's greatest spies and fighter. She can control minds and elements including: fire, water, earth, light, darkness, electricity, and wind. She can also see into the future and share thoughts with others. She can create anything she wants by just by thinking about it.
Likes: She loves a million things like nature, the rules, spying, her family and friends, peace, and blood.
Dislikes: She hates war, losing people she loves, people not following the rules, getting captured, and a lot of other things. could you explain to me what a dhampir is?
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Posted: Sun Sep 06, 2009 12:56 pm
Sega; Yeah... but as far as I know Shadow isn't dead yet. Hmm... I wonder if the dead can die again? MAJOR PLOT THINGY RESOLVED!!! Um... yeah. I have a lot of problems with this plot. And I've still got to consider fixing the religion problem. Hopefully without insulting practically every religion ever.
I would tell you what a Dhampir was if I knew, but I don't know. I think they're a sort of Vampire though.
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Posted: Sun Sep 06, 2009 5:24 pm
Vaporeae Sega; Yeah... but as far as I know Shadow isn't dead yet. Hmm... I wonder if the dead can die again? MAJOR PLOT THINGY RESOLVED!!! Um... yeah. I have a lot of problems with this plot. And I've still got to consider fixing the religion problem. Hopefully without insulting practically every religion ever.
I would tell you what a Dhampir was if I knew, but I don't know. I think they're a sort of Vampire though.
A dhampir is half-human, half-vampire. Famous and perfect example: Renesmee Cullen.
smile
Wikipedia says it's a child born to a vampire father and human mother, but I wonder if it applies if reversed, as in vamp mother and human father. However, it's believed that human women can not give birth to vampires (and possibly others) because of their strength or something...
I not 100% sure about that, though it makes sense to me.
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Posted: Thu Sep 10, 2009 12:22 pm
vaporae: yeah but you can only do that with time reversal or something ^^
Celery: thanks for the info ^^
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Posted: Sun Sep 20, 2009 8:06 pm
Yeah but also dhampirs can have more dhampirs but their genetics is always half human and half vampire. Mine is sort of a different world so originals get bodyguards made with them but their offsprings don't because they can't pass that along.
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Posted: Tue Sep 22, 2009 1:40 pm
CeleryFairy has it right. However, in some stories vampire women have been known for not being able to conceive. It's why the plot in the movie Van Helsing had Dracula seek Doctor Frankenstein and his secret to make dead things live. I'm sure that the owner of the guild has a problem or two right there cuz we both happen to think of vampires as demons rather than undead monsters.
Anywho... another perfect example of a Dhampir is Alucard from the Castlevania series. 3nodding
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Posted: Fri Oct 23, 2009 9:52 am
hypnocrown CeleryFairy has it right. However, in some stories vampire women have been known for not being able to conceive. It's why the plot in the movie Van Helsing had Dracula seek Doctor Frankenstein and his secret to make dead things live. I'm sure that the owner of the guild has a problem or two right there cuz we both happen to think of vampires as demons rather than undead monsters. Anywho... another perfect example of a Dhampir is Alucard from the Castlevania series. 3nodding i loved van helsing..... till he ate my cookies i really need to play that game XD
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Posted: Sat Oct 24, 2009 6:19 am
My main character from my book in progress
Name: Ahvel Menefer
Race: Nephilim
Social status: (Not important to plot)
physical description: 6'4, olive complexion, black curly hair. He is of greek decent.
Eye colour: black
Personality: He is a bit quick tempered, but he is trying to make himself a better person, and can get frustrated easily.
Family: Has a younger brother named Alexis. Mother was an egyptian, been dead a long time. Father is an angel...who Ahvel and Alexis have never met.
Boyfriend or Girlfriend or single: Forever single. Has a love interest, but its complicated.
Friends: Friend is a strong word. His mentor is the angel of death Azrael, the closest thing to a best friend is the ghost of his love interests brother, named Stelo. Maybe some other Nephilim that come in and out of his life.
Place where S/he lives: Quebec City
Skills: He is learning to use his mind to make anything happen (metaphysics)
Likes: Peace and quiet and classical literature.
Dislikes: The Monks of Redemption who have been hunting his kind down since biblical times and the Court of Belial of which he use to belong but is now against.
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Posted: Tue Oct 27, 2009 12:12 am
Ooh, I shall do one!
Name: Alanora Calaran (Name sound familiar?)
Race: Angan
Social status: Daughter of the late head of the Weapons and Defensive Research and Development Team (the WDRDT).
Physical description: She's pale, thin and has three white feathery wings (which get her picked on occasionally).
Eye color: At base gray, but they pick up the colors around them. Hence, if she gets embarrassed or mad and her skin flushes, her eyes turn a pinkish-red color.
Personality: She's wound tighter than an old yoyo. Since she's got three wings instead of the requisite four that everyone else has, she gets picked on an awful lot. But she fights back, and steps up to the plate when she's needed, causing her to have a sort of commanding aura about her.
Family: her blood-family was killed in a house fire when she was ten years old. She now lives with a foster family. Her foster parents are named Lucin and Leandra, and her foster-sister's name is Lydia. Lydia is the same age as Alanora.
Boyfriend or Girlfriend or single: Darian Sangeras. He shares her mind, her thoughts, her emotions and sensations. It was bound to happen.
Friends: Her main group of friends is: Corrin Matthews, Zaire Rixton, Alamarina (Rina) Starr, Lycell Sanders. She also later becomes friends with Lhiane Kroe, Aiden Lander, and Loren Lane and Saryhn Peters.
Place where S/he lives: Her foster home is in a large city called Maelgarde, but during most of the first book she lives on the main base of the Angan Aerial Army.
Skills: The ability to share dreams and telepathically communicate with Darian Sangeras. Alanora discovers that she is an excellent combatant both in the air and on land.
Likes: Darian, the A.A.A. Aviator Squad, solving problems, doing things her way, giving ignorant assholes the smackdown.
Dislikes: Ignorant assholes, Black (the person), secrets, lying, espionage, stupid rules, intolerance, Arlinde Harris.
...hey, that was fun!
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Posted: Tue Nov 03, 2009 7:36 pm
Name: Alauwren
Race: Elf (Phyeris (If you wonna see the tribes look in the elves conversation)
Social status: Warrior Transfigurationist
physical description: Pale skin, Black Hair down to shoulder blades straight and silky, beautiful face with peach lips.
Eye colour: Ice blue. The eyes look emotionless and unreadable.
Personality: Quiet, mostly to herself, but in long, complex mental conversations to her Phoenix, Alaria
Family: Mother, Anaera (Diseased) Father,Eilnore (Diseased)
Boyfriend or Girlfriend or single: Single, no one really liked her personality
Friends: Shoden, Shenara, Minalen
Place where S/he lives: A shack leading to caverns, amethyst caves
Skills: Transfiguration, Mental Combat
Likes: Animals, Dragons, Silk Robes, Transforming, Other things
Dislikes: Being separated from her dragon weyr, Gryphons, Unicorns, People
pushing her around
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