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 Posted: Sun Aug 09, 2009 1:40 am
A teenager, in his 18 slowly opened his eyes to find himself laying down on top of sand in the middle of nowhere. He slowly sat up and tried to remember, he tried to remember something important. He was simply walking home from college until he heard a loud bang and then darkness, and that was all he remembered. He tried to remember more, but nothing, he even forgotten his own name. He looked down at his chest to find a chain connected to it. He tried yanking it, but it was no use. Suddenly, something large appeared right in front of him.
"What are you?" he asked, showing no sign of fear.
The monster looked down at him with his mouth fool of drool.
"I'm a hollow, and I'm about to partake on your soul." It said as it opened its mouth wide and eaten the boy with no resistence.
The boy woke later to find himself totally transformed, but it didn't seem to bother him. He felt hungry...very hungry...
(1/6)
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Posted: Sun Aug 09, 2009 1:30 pm
Completely transformed into hollow, the once human teenager now has a need for a deep hunger. His appearance was transformed into holllow standing tall as 6'8 taking on a reptilian appearance http://media.photobucket.com/image/zilla/UnderdogLister/VIRVAR/Zilla.jpg?o=59 with his head skeletal. As he lurked in a dark alley way, his nose picked up the scent of blood, blood of a plus. But he wasn't interested in the plus, but in the one who caused the plus to bleed. He quickly picked up speed and made his way through the labyrinth of alleys, following the scent while its still fresh until he came to a complete stop. A saber tooth tiger sized hollow was feasting down on plus until it was disturbed by another hollow. It raised at the other hollow and gave out a roar claiming its carcass, but reptilian hollow wasn't interested in the plus, but rather than tiger hollow itself. The reptilian roars back at the tiger hollow. The tiger growls and charges at the reptilian hollow. The reptilian hollow then charges in with terrifying roar. He was very hungry. The tiger then pounces at the reptile with his claws digging at the sides of the reptile. The reptile begins to shriek trying to shake off the tiger, until he rams the tiger to the side of the building. The reptile retaliates back catching its breath. He then charges into the tiger with his mouth wide open, ready to take a chomp out of the tiger. Trying to recover by a few broken ribs, the tiger quickly jumps back. They both circle each other, growling, waiting to see who would make the first strike. The tiger pounces again at the reptile, but he wasn't going to be fooled by the same trick twice. He quickly ducks down and shoots his right up, headbutting the tiger on its lower jaw, smashing it, along with it's mask and sending him flying back. Shock from the attack, the reptile took advantage of the moment and began advancing at his prey. He raises his foot and slams it on the tiger's skull. He raised up his head and lets out a roar that shook the earth and any hollow that heard it. He then began shredding up the carcass with his jaws and began feasting on it. The last thing that was left of the hollow was a pile of dry blood where the tiger once stood... (2/6)
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Posted: Sun Aug 09, 2009 5:42 pm
Months has passed as the reptilian turned into a hollow and began eating hollows, and some pluses if he found one. The reptilian hollow hid deep in the forest of Hueco Mundo, hiding in hole of a tree. Some hollow have the ability to speak, while some don't. As the hollow struggled to say a word, he struggled to find a name.
"M-M-Ma-Malak- Malak- Chu- Chupa. Malak Chupa...is...my...name." Malak said as he made a little smile showing hint of his teeth. He felt somewhat happy that he had a name.
Slowly, he emerged from the safety of the hole, something swooped down in front of him, breaking the branch and his balance. Malak fell crashing into branches until he hits the ground, injuring him. Malak quickly stood up and bellows at who ever attacked him. Again in fast swoops, the same attacker passed him and was able to hit him unnoticed. Again, the attacker did the same move, but from behind Malak. Sensing it, and out of pure luck, Malak was able to catch the attacker in his reptilian hands. It was a bird like hollow and it screeched as it was caught by surprise as it was found in the grasp of Malak. The bird's loud screech made Malak's brain seem like it was burning. Barely able to handle the pain, Malak releases the bird, and it vanishes right in front of him, along with the loud screeching noise.
The bird then resumes it's attack on Malak. Malak's large body made him a big target, and the speed of his foe was too fast, and he could feel the attacks getting stronger and faster by the second. Malak was at a huge disadvantage, unless he's able to get the same luck again, but his foe wasn't going to be fooled by the same trick twice. After a few hit and run from the bird, it decided to end Malak's existence and devourer his body to evolve. The bird took the final blow to Malak's jaw which send him flying back and crash into the trunk of a tree, breaking his spine. His body then slipped down into a sitting position with his back against the tree and blood dripping from its mouth. Sensing no sign of activity from Malak, the bird slowly approached Malak's body ready to eat it. As soon the bird came an inch close to Malak, a small smile appeared on Malak's face and he pounces at the bird and pins it to the ground. His weight and size was too much for the bird and it most likely got its back snapped in half, paralyzing him. Malak then moves his jaw closer to it and sniffs at it. Malak then continues moving the body into his mouth and in one gulp, ate the bird. He then leaves the scene, limping away with his injuries before a hollow comes along and picks a fight with him...
(3/6)
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Posted: Wed Aug 12, 2009 4:24 pm
As each day passed, and each hollow consumed by Malak, he could feel power within him growing day by day. His strength and speed are becoming extraordinary.
In the day, in a public park, something is hiding. Malak laid in wait for his prey in the trees, masking his presence and reiatsu, a minotaur like hollow is seen passing by. It was bigger than Malak, but his arm was injured by a previous fight, making his fight with Malak evenly matched. As the minotaur limped with his injured arms, Malak slowly emerges out of the trees, but still hiding his presence, and slowly advances at the minotaur at the behind. Waiting and and with in moments, Malak finally made his move. He jumps at the minotaur backing, scratching it with his feet and digging his teeth and claws on the minotaurs shoulders, trying to bring it down to its knees. The minotaur squirmed and shrieked as it was caught by surprise and tries taking Malak off with his hands. The hollow finally gots a firm squeeze on Malak's neck and throws him off his back, but with a gash in his shoulder by Malak's jaws and a few deep scratches on his back. Gently landing on his feet, Malak lowers his head and growls at the other hollow. Seeing no choice but to fight, the hollow pounds it chest at Malak and lets out a roar. They both charge at each at the hollow throws a punch at Malak. Malak quickly dodges it by making a swift turn to the right and jumps at the minotaur, and kicks it from the back, making it fall by the force of Malak's legs. Malak quickly turns around and jumps at the minotaur as he till has a chance. But the hollow was desperate and rolls out of the way of Malak's attack. As Malak missed his chance, with one big punch, the minotaur punches Malak at his right rib cage, breaking a few of Malak's ribs. Malak screeches in pain. and backs away. Seeing the chance, the mintaur charges at Malak to throw another big punch, but Malak was hiding something. Malak was catching his breath and storing energy for his 'attack'. Before the hollow could even moves his punch at Malak, Malak quickly stand ups, throws his head back and throws it forward with his mouth wide open with dark green flaming coming out of his mouth and scorching the minotaur. As the hollow was surrounded in flame, it spent it's last breath on screaming in pain, and marking his death. As the fire went down, the hollow then fell on its back, shaking the earth. Malak with a grin on his face, jumps at the hollow on its chest and diges his teeth into his bellow, tearing out a liver from its belly. As he swalloed the liver, Malak threw up his head and roared into the sky...
(4/6)
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Posted: Sun Aug 23, 2009 8:21 pm
As days turned into weeks, and weeks turned into months, Malak's power began to grow stronger and he began to learn new abilities. But still his hunger grew much much stronger the same time he grew and there will always be bigger predators. The stronger you become, the more others will want a piece with you to claim your title.
In Las Noches, Malak was feasting on a hollow on the white sands of Las Noches under the dark ever lasting sky. The prey didn't put up much of a fight as Malak just snapped the neck with his jaws. As he was done feasting, a voice came from behind him.
"A reptile hollow. Could you be Malak Chupa?"
Malak turns around with a flesh of the carcass in his blood stained mouth and gulps it down. And see a pac of wolves like hollows. 3 wolves almost the same size as him from head to toe and they were 3 feet high at the shoulder. "Who'd want to know?"
"Judging by your appearance, we know that you are the hollow that some of the weaklings avoid." One of the wolves said.
"Well you're not wrong. I am Malak Chupa. So what do you want?"
With a grin, one of the wolves make a step forward, obviously he was the leader. As he did, the other two wolves lower their heads and lets out a deep growl, revealing their sharp white teeth. "We're here to feast on your soul."
"Really?" Malak said with a grin. "Let's see who'll be feasting on who's soul."
Malak slowly lowers his head and lets out a loud roar, accepting their challenge, and at the same time, the wolves lets out roars of their own and charges at Malak. Malak charges in after them too and lowers his head, trying to ram them, but all of them were able to dodge his attack. As Malak was recovering from his attack, they all jump at him at once. One was biting at his leg, one at his hand, and another went for his throat, but Malaka was repelling him with his free hand. They were trying to weigh him down. Malak began pulling the one at his throat until it finally comes off, but with a little gash at his throat, but it wasn't serious. Malak lets out a large roar and the one that was biting at his arm, he grabs him with both hands, and throws him at the tree. And the one that was biting at his ankle, he kicks him off, making him hit the wolf that was biting at his throat, as it was trying to recover from the throw. The hollow that was thrown at the boulder quickly recovered and began charging at Malak with his mouth wide open, but Malak was much bigger. Standing only 2 feet higher than the wolf on all fours. As the wolf jumps at Malak, Malak opened his jaws wide open and the wolf just jumped right into his trap. Malak then began shaking his head, and throws the wolf back with his skull crushed by Malak's jaws. The two left over wolves grows at Malak, and Malak lets out a roar to show how much energy he has left. One of the wolfs charges at him again and began tried to go for his feet, but Malak lowers his head till they were eye to eye, and the wolf growled at him. The wolf went for a few fakes as it circled around Malak. However, Malak was in a distraction. Then the other wolf then quickly gets behind him and jumps on his back, and went for the back of his neck. Malak tries to shake him up and the wolf goes for his feet again. Malak saw the attack and throws his head at the wolf letting fire shoot straight at his mouth, burning the wolf. As the wolf was biting at Malak's neck, Malak began shaking his head violently until the wolf slips form his position. As the chance finally came, Malak gets a grip on the wolfs ankle with his jaw and throws him off Malak. They both growl at each other and began circling each other, showing each others teeth. Malak then throws his head back and goes for his fire attack, but the wolf already saw his attack and jumps at Malak. Malak quickly turns around and hits the wolf with his tail, making him fall to the ground. Malak then jumps on the wolf with his foot at the wolf's ribs, and his other foot at his throat. Malak then lowers his head to the wolf's ear. It was the leader of the pac. As he lowered his head, he could hear the wolf's whining and his breath. It was scared, and it should be.
"I'll always be the biggest predator. Remember that." Then Malak slowly raises his foot of the wolf. "Tell the others about me." With that said, Malak slowly releases the wolf with his tail between his legs. "You're buddies stay here with me, and run. Run. Run and spread my name to the others about how you lost to Malak Chupa!" As the wolf ran and whined with his tail between his legs. Malak raises his head and roars to the dark sky, making all that could hear shake in fear.
(5/6)
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Posted: Sat Sep 19, 2009 8:11 pm
In the human world, a hollow was chasing a group of pluses. The group was being chase by a hollow like rat. As the hollow was able to separate one plus from the group like cattle, he chases him to the roof top of a building. As the rat cornered the plus, a pair of teeth appeared behind the rat towering over it. The plus first began shaking at the hollow, until he looked up to see a grin of teeth hanging up in the air. The teethes then opened wide with drool coming from the mouth and bit the rat on the body. It was Malak camouflaged in the back ground. It was one of his new abilities which make him camouflage his body and hide his reiatsu. As the rat screamed as it was in the jaws of Malak, the plus ran away. Malak wasn't interested in the plus, but rather the hollow. Plus were nice sweets, but weren't much of a meal and Malak was very hungry. Malak began shaking his head with the rat inside his mouth and then swallowed him whole. His mouth was covered in the hollow's blood and began wiping his mouth with his hands and licked off the blood that was covered on his hand. As he was cleaning himself, a ball of red fire hits the side of his head when he was distracted. Malak lifts his head up from the smoke and lets out a roar. As he jerks his head around to see who fire that unknown attack and looks down to see a man in a black kimono holding a katana. The man stood about 5 feet tall, while Malak 10'00 from his shoulder to the ground.
"That hurts." Malak hissed.
"Sorry Malak-san. I had to get your attention somehow." The man said with a naive smile.
"How do you know my name?"
"Everybody knows your name in Soul Society, Malak Chupa. You're a dangerous hollow that needs to be put down."
Malak made a grin as he heard his name. It was amazing that his reputation reached an unknown world he never knew of. "Well I have no interest in you plus. Get lost."
"Hahaha, that where you're wrong. I'm a shinigami you see and I'm here to kill you." The shinigami said as he drew out his zanpakuto.
"Shinigami? Why?"
"It's my job, or our job to slay all hollows and send them to Soul Society, but you sir are no exception." The man said as he pointed his sword at Malak.
"Hahaha! You can try to take my head shinigami, but lets see if you can cut me down." Malak said as he went into battle mode.
"Very well then."
In a blink of an eye, the shinigami vanished. Caught off guard, Malak suddenly had a cut at his ankle which made him fall to his knees. Malak turns around to see the shinigami's sword stained in Malaks blood. Seeing the blood, Malak lets out a low growl. He never knew someone so small could be this feisty. Malak lets out a roar and throws his head back and then forward, spewing out green fire from his mouth towards the shinigami. The shinigami quickly dodged the flame, and charges straight at Malak with full force. Malak quickly retaliates, and swings his tail at the shinigami. The shinigami not seeing Malak's attack gets hit at his ribs, feeling the shock come at him, like a huge whip. The shinigami crashes against a wall, feeling the shock-wave run through his body, letting out a grunt from the break, but with little injury. The shinigami man lifts up his head to see Malak charging right at him with his mouth wide open, ready to devourer him whole, but the shinigami quickly uses shunpo, getting out of the way as Malak charges through the wall, and almost falling of the edge. Malak's jaws got nothing but rubble and dirt inside as he spits the debris out. The shinigami appears above Malak getting ready to slice off his head, but Malak sensed him through smell, coming right at him. Malak raises his head and got the shinigami's foot inside his mouth. Malak began shaking his head violently, tearing some flesh from the bones with blood flying, until the shinigami stuck his blade into the side of his mouth. Malak released the shinigami with only a scratch and a little screech of pain. The shinigami with a torn up leg, and Malak with a cut at the leg, making him limp, Malak lets out a low growl at the shinigami.
"I'll devourer you whole shinigami!" Malak roared. Malak never met a prey that was so hard to take a bite at. He was fast and rather strong for someone so small. A prey Malak never met before.
(6/6 Note done yet...)
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