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My attempts at drawing humans, Citique please!

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UnspecifiedAngel

PostPosted: Tue Jul 28, 2009 9:22 am


Mods please tell me if these are too big, I wasnt sure how to make them smaller...
Im not sure if this will upload but heres my genie, her hands and head is oddly shaped I know:
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and here is my uhm.. fire fairy queen thingy, her hands are odd as well:
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 28, 2009 11:50 am


I like the second one its pretty good but u could work on the first ones face but u r a real good artist biggrin

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DarkCh40sX3

PostPosted: Tue Jul 28, 2009 5:33 pm


crying i don't want to sound mean but i have been drawing anime for about 7 + years. u did a really gud job on the outfit biggrin
but on the first picture her body was all small and then her leg was all huge i think u could have done a better job. please don't think i'mean i just want to tell u the flaws so u can get better even though it may hurt crying i think u may need help on the bidy and face..............the hair is pretty good but think of the possibility of u getting better. the hair would look more silky smooth[do't kno how to say it] well let's just say it would look more like its flowing along with the wind confused i think that's the best way i could put it
but other all that ur pretty gudhoping u'll get better biggrin
PostPosted: Wed Jul 29, 2009 7:35 am


thank you yesh i was rushing on the first pic (learned my mistake) and well... rushed pictures dont turn out that well XD Thank you!

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 29, 2009 9:50 am


I ike no2 because it's more detailed the way it looks powns the one on top.
PostPosted: Wed Jul 29, 2009 2:21 pm


cool thx 4 not getting mad at me
could u plz do the same thing i did and tell me the flaws in my pic when i have the time to post them up smile
i would be really happy if u did biggrin cuz that way i could get better at my anime pics whee i wish u luck mrgreen

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broken_bleeding_angel

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 29, 2009 4:28 pm


You need to work more on your anatomy, but the flow in your clothing is good.

Here are some references for you to study anatomy.

http://naiser.deviantart.com/art/Female-Anatomy-Reference-1-84152984

http://snigom.deviantart.com/art/Female-Anatomy-Patterns-43675502

http://what-i-do-is-secret.deviantart.com/art/Manga-Female-Leg-Poses-62170125

http://lyndaelle.deviantart.com/art/Human-Anatomy-Study-29590128

These should help.
PostPosted: Tue Aug 04, 2009 9:33 am


thank you for the comments and critique smile i like making ruffles their fun, and now that i look at it, they are kinda unnaturally tall so imma try to fix that in the next drawing i do xd

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abandoned_nr_5448214

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 05, 2009 8:54 am


I wouldn't say they are too tall, but the faces might need some polishing. It's all a matter of style, after all, a normal human is roughly.... 9 heads tall? I think it is something like that (long time no study...)
Popular teenage mangas usually have characters that are roughly 5 heads high though. The smaller the head, the larger the body and the character looks older.
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